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Reviews For Three Little Words

Name: cat (Anonymous) · Date: 10/01/14 - 10:53 pm · For: Chapter 24
wonderful plot,amazing action scenes, and well writen dialogue. keep going


Name: Jang Wo Li (Signed) · Date: 15/12/13 - 06:36 pm · For: Chapter 24
where to start?

you're pacing is excellent, you're writing is excellent, your scenes are awesome, and you have me completely stoked for the next chapter!


Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 18/12/12 - 04:00 am · For: Chapter 24
NO!!!!!!!! WHY do you have to stop it like that huh?? YOU ARE SOOOO CRUEL!!!
WHAT AN EVIL CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!!!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!


Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 17/12/12 - 11:52 pm · For: Chapter 4
OH why can't you just kill Sakura that f'ing bitch haha


Name: Anno. (Anonymous) · Date: 24/08/12 - 05:23 am · For: Chapter 1
Also i been reading your story for like 12 hrs str8 im tired and dont care about spelling errrorrorrrrrrsssssss lol


Name: Anno. (Anonymous) · Date: 24/08/12 - 05:21 am · For: Chapter 1
Good story complete it and male a sequel would be greatly love for the 10 people i got to read this.


Name: Oni Nexus (Signed) · Date: 22/07/12 - 06:24 pm · For: Chapter 24
I got bored so I read through your story again, and I have to say, it's just as amazing the second time through.

Author's Response: I really appreciate that. Nice to know it's considered a good read the second time through...


Name: Shisamuri Hanso no Ookami (Signed) · Date: 22/07/12 - 12:49 pm · For: Chapter 24
I look forward to seeing what the others will find when they are finding Naruto.

Author's Response: Let's just say...he's all grow'd up now. THanks fo ryour review and hope you continue to enjoy the story.


Name: Oni Nexus (Signed) · Date: 18/07/12 - 12:39 pm · For: Chapter 24
HI!
great chapter, you've got me on the edge of my seat!

Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying it. I find that emotion and suspense can be drawn out from the reader by the use of detail and descriptiveness.


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 18/07/12 - 09:45 am · For: Chapter 24
Jeesus fucking christ that was insane. The emotion of this whole chapter was pure nail-biting. I'm on the edge of my seat right now. Oh man I hope you update soon. Amazing amazing amazing X10 chapter!

Author's Response: Best is yet to come. Wait til the team gets to where Naruto is...*WEG*


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/07/12 - 07:36 am · For: Chapter 24
O_O Oh my... Naruto's transformation seems almost... frightening... Really terrifying, actually; I'm worried for him.

I hope the confrontation between the team and Naruto goes alright. I can already picture a possibly huge fight, but I don't want anyone getting hurt...

Great chapter, Mikagami! I'm definitely looking forward to more! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: I am thrilled you enjoyed it! I wanted it to be scary as they had no idea what to expect. in terms of the process. Hope you enjoy what is to come.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/07/12 - 02:32 pm · For: Chapter 23
That awkward moment when a girl kisses her boyfriend's mom... Wow~ It was so amusing, I couldn't stop laughing for a while XD

I loved Kushina's rant on everyone though. They definitely deserve it, they've all been so... not as nice as they could be to Naruto.

And the little bonding moment between Naruto and Kyuubi was actually very sweet. I'm really happy those two have somewhat learned to trust each other and even respect each other. That's so awesome.

Great work on this chapter! It was definitely a great read. Keep up the awesome work, I'm definitely looking forward to more.

Author's Response: *LOL* I thought it was perfect in its own way. And I felt a little comedy was needed given the circumstances and events. And Kushina's rant was a well deserved tongue lashing they all needed and who better for it to come from than his mom! And let's face it, with what they are about to do...they needed to see eye to eye so to speak. Thanks for your imput! I am already working on the next few chapters getting out of my head and onto e-files.


Name: Oni Nexus (Signed) · Date: 15/07/12 - 12:20 pm · For: Chapter 23
yep, I'm one of those annoying people who reviews everytime you update. A good chapter! thumbs up on Hinata kissing Kushina! keep up the good work

Author's Response: By all means, please do! The more reviews I get, the more I know I'm doing a good job or I find out where I need to improve. Thanks for the input and I will keep going.


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 14/07/12 - 10:56 pm · For: Chapter 23
Gah!! More cliffhanging! God dammit this is such an awesome story. Everything might be shit for Naruto right now but hopefully the merging will restore things even if it has dire consequences. And Kushina was pretty funny though she did point out some truths to those three. They deserved it.

I realllly hope you update soon! Please please please! I want to know what happens next. Another amazing chapter though. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Hopefully you'll enjoy what comes next! I'm already working on the next few chapters converting them from mental notes to finished chapters.


Name: Oni Nexus (Signed) · Date: 10/07/12 - 07:05 pm · For: Chapter 1
could you give me a couple of pointers?

Author's Response: I'll be happy to. Send an email with your questions via the contact link. I'll help in any way I can.


Name: Oni Nexus (Signed) · Date: 06/07/12 - 05:24 am · For: Chapter 6
this fic is quite good.

Author's Response: I appreciate that. I am trying hard to get more of it written for your and other's enjoyment.


Name: Oni Nexus (Signed) · Date: 05/07/12 - 06:14 pm · For: Chapter 3
inbreeding? really? Hinata's mother wouldn't have the byakugan unless incest was involved

Author's Response: From what I can tell most, if not all, of the Hyuuga Clan have the Byakugan to one degree or another. Anyways, thank you for your review and I hope you continue to enjoy the developing story.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 27/06/12 - 07:34 am · For: Chapter 22
:3 This story is so good. I loved the twist in this chapter, it had great insight and some amazing thought put into it. I love how far you're taking this, all the suspense and drama is so cool. I continue to enjoy this story, I hope life is treating you well and you're able to write a little bit more. Keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: I am already working the kinks out of the next few chapters. I had originally thought to maybe end it back at the Chuunin exams but it has a life of its own and I now see it has more to tell, so I'll keep going!


Name: Shizake uchiha (Anonymous) · Date: 27/06/12 - 06:03 am · For: Chapter 22
Sorry I have to do this anonymously but I'm at an airport on my iPod headed to Florida! Anyways, as usual it was a great chapter. The virus thing is freaking me out and i was even more shocked to find that it mutated and even more shocked when to learn that it was an uzumaki right of passage. I was so excited for this update, this is my favorite story out of them all. I hope to see another chapter soon :) keep up the great work!

Author's Response: To read this, it made me so happy. I am already working on the next chapter. Hope you'll enjoy it!


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/05/12 - 01:06 pm · For: Chapter 21
Gah! Poor Naruto! I wonder what kind of illness it is... This is really not good o_O

Good job on this chapter! The suspense is killing me at this point though, I gotta know what happens to him! Please update soon, and keep up the awesome work with this story!

Author's Response: I am glad you are really enjoying the story. Trust me all will be revealed in time. *WEG*


Name: Tragedy (Signed) · Date: 19/05/12 - 11:55 pm · For: Chapter 12
Your Story's Very Good, And I Only Regret Not Starting It Sooner. I've Been Tip-Toeing Through The Chapters, Wondering Why You've Been Trying To Kill Naruto (Not That I Have Room To Talk) And This One Really, Really Had Me On The Edge Of MY Seat, Just With The Training. So Thank You For A Great Read, And I Look Forward To The Continuation Of It.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I hope you continue to enjoy it!


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/05/12 - 01:51 pm · For: Chapter 21
Yay you double updated :) God this is so suspenseful...I want to know what's wrong! Damn cliffhanger -.- Oh well. Can't wait for the next update. Keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: gotta love it. there is always something new on the horizon. ;P Glad you are enjoying the story thus far!


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/05/12 - 01:35 pm · For: Chapter 20
yes! You finally updated. Even though this was just a filler, a new threat is on the rise. I hope Naruto and Kyuubi are ok. Great chapter! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! He made Chuunin at long last and deservedly so...Sorry for the delay but work ganged up on me and I had to go through a ton of notes and etc.. you know how it is when you write and you want to get the details just so...I posted Ch 21 to make up for the lag. Enjoy!


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 23/04/12 - 07:05 pm · For: Chapter 19
Wait a minute, wait a minute, wait a minute! New power?! NEW POWER?! As if he wasn't strong enough already! He kicked butt! You know, Tsunade was still amazing and everything, but Naruto is well on his way to being the Sixth Hokage, like, soon! Great work on this epic chapter! Your fight scenes are brilliant, a fantastically orchestrated piece of work this was! Excellent job!

Author's Response: Don't think I mentioned a new power.....*evil grin* but that is something I just may have to consider....maybe. And again, thank you for your feedback. Your, and the others who drop me a review, feedback makes it worthwhile and deeply satisfying to keep going just to keep you on your toes. *grins more*


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/04/12 - 12:40 pm · For: Chapter 19
Holy shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit! That was amazing. Naruto totally kicked ass. Tsunade put up an amazing fight but Naruto has improved beyond anyone in the village I swear. Great chapter, great fight scene and great cliffhanger too. I want to know what this power is. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: thank you. I can't say it enough. But here's a thought: Its obvious he held back his killing jutsu's. Which implies, he didn't fight at full strength or with full conviction. What would it have been like if he HAD?


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