New chapter! At long last! At last…*thump*
Kiyori: Please excuse my creator. His work load has gotten the best of him. We'll be reviewing instead!
Kimiko: I must say girl this is a nice chapter. Once again you took a canon event and made it your own. I am impressed.
Kiyori: I find it so romantic that they are able to keep each other in check like that! *sighs* That's a mark of true love.
Kimiko: All in all, good job. Hope Gabriel and us can read more of your great work.
Author's Response:Ha, hopefully I'll have it read by today. I have a lot of places I have to go - and it's my day off! >.<
Kiyo and Kimi-chan!:D I'm so glad to hear from you guys! Tell Gabe he needs to do some relaxing and quit over-working himself!!!
Oh, wow, thanks so much Kimi-chan!!! I really value your opinion, and if you like this, then just wait till the next chappie!XD
Kiyo-(I forgot, didn't I always call you Kiyo-chan or was it san? Ahh!!! I forgot! >.<) Yes, and love is awesome!!!
Yes, I hope so too. Love you guys! And thx so much for reviewing!!!:D
Ahhhhh!! That was so cute. Well, the part about love was at least. Especially when Yashamaru said they love each other. I know what he meant, but it was still so cute!
I'd say I want to go into your story and teach those kids why not to mess with Yami, but I think Gaara has already done that for him and then some. I was a little worried when the darkness surfaced in Gaara. But then Yami tried to stop them. I wanted to cry it was so.... Well, it was between heartfelt and sad. Whichever you think fits more.
And I also really enjoyed the very end. I thought it was sweet how Yami wanted to know what was going on with Gaara so that she could prevent it later. I absolutely loved that part. I don't get how she can hold such great darkness yet be so pure either.
Overall I give it a 100/10. Yeah, it was just that amazing. This entire story is amazing. After all, it is a YOUR STORY story. I can't wait for part two, DestinyGirl!
Author's Response:Haha, cute is killer!:P
Yes, yes he has. I'll go with both heartfelt and sad, because that's what it was like for me when I was writing it.
Honestly, me and Hikari can't either... What? Stop staring at me like that, Yami! It's mostly because of what she is. I figured if she was human, then she would give into the darkness (since humans tend to lean toward darkness anyway). But since she was born of a light-filled race, and born with the purest heart (besides Hikari), she's able to withstand the darkness.
Haha, you're too much:P Thx so much, Sasaui!:D
Aww, that's so cute! They love each other!... you know, the way all little kids love their friends...
I love the way you were able to place Yami in this. It was already a very touching scene between Gaara and Yashamaru. But just the way you described Gaara and Yami's friendship really meshed well with the actual plotline. It really flowed very well. Nice work with that.
I really wanted to scold those kids for throwing rocks at Yami though. Seriously, don't parents teach their kids respect anymore? Yeesh...
Anyway, nice job on this chapter, DestinyGirl! I can't wait to see Part 2! Keep up the awesome work with your writing!
Author's Response:Haha, yep. Love is love!:P
Yeah, I was worried in the beginning about doing this but then it all just hit me and started coming together. Thx so much!
Yes, have you noticed that kids in general are very mean in the Narutouniverse? These kids' parents probably told them to do something like that though....
Thx so very much, Wolf-chan!:D