I've been meaning to get around to these stories for a while now. And I finally have! I really like the prologue. It's full of suspense and mystery. I'm going to try to read this and Broken Wings at the same time.
Oh! Yami's so cute! I love stories that give Gaara a companion even though they change what he will become so much. They're just too cute. ^_^ But seriousness from children! It's a sad life a child must have to be that way.
And that last paragraph! Ah! I must know more! XP
Author's Response:Oh, wow, thanks so much!:D It totally surprises me when I get a new reader, I love it! ^_^ Thanks so much for your kind words. In BtD, it'll actually look more into the prologue in either the next new chapter or the one after that.
Thanks, I rarely ever find stories like that, and when I do, they're all unfinished:( Yes, yes it is.
Haha, thanks so much!:D
Huh. So that's where Yami's been. I liked this, but I must admit, this sounds like it will end in the apocalypse.
So, Serenna(or Kayla? Which is it?) The good news is, I created an account here, Hinata-Moon. The bad news is, I can't access it. Anyways, I'm still working on a new chapter for Chain, I'll tell you when it's done. One question though: What's the name of your novel and where is it going to be published? So I can read it.
Author's Response:Hey, Gabe!!!! So glad you could join! ^_^ You can still call me Serenna, if you want. Um... Well the series is called The Girl of Destiny, and the first book is called Fate Arises. It's not published yet, I've been talking to Tate Publishing, and if that doesn't work then I'm going to publish it myself:D That would be awesome if you could read it!!!
Can't wait till you can access your account, then you can add some of your stories on here:)
This fanfic is one of the best ones ive read on this site!!! Really awesome so far!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much!!! I hope I don't disappoint you in the future!
This fanfic is one of the best ones ive read on this site!!! Really awesome so far!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much!!! I hope I don't disappoint you in the future!
woah...
the prologue was intriguing...
i couldn't take my eyes off it O_O...
it felt so real...as if watching a trailer...
anyways...
hi :D
hi... long time no see... :)
oh n i loved this story...u write it so well... :D
woah... nw that'll b like a major change in gara's nature right?
cnt wait to read the next chapter... >_
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing!:D I try my best, glad you enjoyed it:) Hi!:D Glad to hear from you again, sorry I've been away, I'll try not to let that happen again!X( Thx! And yep, this will change Gaara, maybe for the better, maybe for the worst... There's no telling what could happen!! *evil laugh* Thx again, glad you read and reviewed!!!:D
Darn it! I missed when it first came up because I was off reading something else =(. Oh well, then I'll just review now! And trust me, I'll make sure it makes up for not reviewing the very second it was out like I should. It's so awesome you should have heard about its awesomeness, what, 60 minutes ago (I think that's how long my gmail says it was.....)
Anyway, here's the review part:
HOLY CHRISTMAS TREE (please just don't ask)!!!!! That was amazing. I mean, seriously, I can't believe this. It was just mind blowing. And just like before, I so say that prophecy would make an excellent book of it's own! I mean, seriously, everything about this chapter was phenomenal. No, not even that. You've done it, DestinyGirl. You. Have. Done. It. You've achieved YOUR STORY status (for explanation, go to my account thing)
This is the YOUR STORY reward. I don't see it as much of an honor since it's being given by me, but I still feel the need to do this. I think it's something new and fun =D. And also, I loved the ending. The whole Messenger of Death and Demon Shukaku thing was amazing. I kept on looking at that and wondering what was going to happen next. And I LOVE LOVE LOVE Yami. She's one hundred percent awesome, and three hundred.sixteen percent amazingly-out-of-this-world. She has that sweet, caring side like Hikari, but she also has this dark part deep within her born from being an angel of darkness. Her kind nature seems to balance out that dark anger. It's wonderful. And I loved the friend thing, even if it was sad. Darn, why do you have to be so awesome. I keep on wanting to say more and more things about the incredibleness of this story, but my brain is being fried by that very incredibleness. Okay, overall, it was so totally YOUR STORY material and completely blew me about five galaxies over.
Author's Response:Lol, don't worry about the time!:P I'm just happy you reviewed!:D
Haha, I say random things like that all the time!XD Thx so much for the amazing compliments, I feel so special now! Yeah, I decided to add in the prologue since everyone really needs to know what their reading about (if their new)... Aww, thanks for the reward!!!:D YES!!! I have a YOUR STORY award!!!XD
It is to an honor, if it's given by a friend (that's you) then it means a lot, so thank you! Yeah, even though I wrote it, I really liked that part as well.XD I'm so glad you love Yami! We'll warm up to her in the next couple of chapters... so be prepared! Lol, and over-fried brain!XD That happens to me a lot, too. Then I have to take a break from reading so many great fanfics.... Thanks so much, and I'm happy you reviewed!!!:D
Oh... my... gosh...
I really didn't think you'd post this so soon XD I'm happy you did. This is amazing! It's just as good as BW! And yet, it's not exactly the same either, which I'm thankful for. Yami is both similar and different from Hikari. She's still nice, but that darkness about her makes her different. The Messenger of Death... wow... I really want to see Gaara and Yami grow as friends; the two of them together, with such underlying darknesses about them can really mesh, and I'd like to know how that all turns out.
So when you say companion to BW, does that mean Yami and Hikari will meet? I kind of hope they do, that'd be pretty cool ;)
Well anyways, this was amazing. It's so good to see an update from you; your writing is phenomenal. Excellent job, DestinyGirl! Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response:Ohmygoodness! I'm equally shocked to get a review so fast!:O Thanks!!!
Lol, I was worried since it's been a while... I'm glad to know I haven't lost my touch!XD Yeah, I wanted to make everything as different as I possibly could. Since Yami is an angel, she's also pure, yet she's the element darkness, so she's got a darker personality than her other half, Hikari.:) Your in luck! I'm writing the next chapter as we speak and it's about Gaara and Yami's growing friendship! I'm actually really, REALLY excited about writing this story, I already have Part I of it figured out!:D
Yes, their paths will cross later on... They'll probably get wind of each other before they actually meet:P
Aw, thanks so much!!:D I promise I won't let you down!