Reviews For For the Fun of It
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 25/09/11 - 05:32 pm · For: Original Sasaui Uchiha Chapter 3
O_O You've greatly improved, let's just say. I'm much, much happier with TG as it is now.
I don't know, I don't really want to critique something written so long ago, especially when you've acknowledged the mistakes at this point. As a statement of positive feedback, I'll just tell you to use that quality that you're writing with now. It's amazing.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/09/11 - 03:09 am · For: Unnamed Fanfic
*facepalm* You keep getting all these wonderful ideas, Sasaui! Gah, it makes me wish you weren't so jam-packed with so much stuff. This was really good. You had great description and great flow of describing the story. You introduced the characters well and even left us on a suspenseful cliffhanger that will most likely never be resolved (darn it!). By the way, that doesn't mean I want you to do this story! Don't do it! It's amazing, but don't do it!
Anyways, nice job :D
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 16/09/11 - 06:22 pm · For: Inner Warrior
Ah, I remember this. I really did enjoy the parts that you had submitted, but I know how swamped you are, and you know that I would never encourage you to take on more than you can handle ;) But I did like rereading it, it was just that great of a chapter. Good work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 14/09/11 - 01:45 pm · For: Fallen Angels by Sasaui Uchiha
*facepalm* Perhaps I should read the author notes... Yeah, now I remember that this is from Sasaui's PotS. It threw me off because it was so familiar, now I know why :P
Anyways, I really like the idea of this. You're a very helpful person, you know that? You keep posting round robins meant to help others or give them breaks. Good for you! Keep up those awesome ideas flowing, alright? The world needs creative ideas :)
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 14/09/11 - 01:03 pm · For: Fallen Angels by Sasaui Uchiha
wow.... kool...!!
just da way sasaui portrayed it guess... i dunno... just felt i read it b4...
anyways... nice... jeez u girls r awesome... Hw do u come up with such good ideas.. >_<
xD
Name: DropDeadThenDance (Signed) · Date: 14/09/11 - 04:59 am · For: Fallen Angels by Sasaui Uchiha
I liked that :)
It was interesting, for sure. A little polish would make this story really nice. I only found a couple small typos and such, so it's fine.
Now, honestly, I'm not a big fan of this kind of stuff, but this wasn't too showy or dramatic. It wasn't sickeningly cliche by any means. I was actually interested to the end, so thanks for posting it up. It's really hard to write and interesting fic, even a short one, about angels because so many people have kind of ruined them. You know?
It's nice to see there are some ways to make it a nice read though :D
Maybe I'll pop in here some time, just to check it out again XD
Thanks again and keep writing!