Again this didn't feel up to your former standards, but (now that I'm finished reading) if I were to give you a general piece of advice it would be to work on both your attention detail and the (now) writing quality. Occasionally you produce scenes that really feel a bit stinted and in need of fleshing out, but otherwise your storytelling style is very humourous and highly engaging. This was actually a really fun read, so thank you for taking the time to write and upload it for us. I look forward to future installments.

Author's Response: Thank you for all the reviews and I do feel the same way as you do about it being a bit rushed. I think before I upload another chapter I am going to go over the first three and see if I can't make it a little better. Also, thanks for being honest, constructive criticism does not bother me at all. Actually I welcome it with open arms. ;) I hope you keep reading and thanks again.

Yes, yes, yes... fine. Chuunin exam. Woop de doo. You still haven't explained why Kakashi didn't come to see Naruto for two whole weeks. I mean, that was seriously odd for the start of a relationship when he was so 'obsessive' before...
Moving on: Gaara! Yay! I love Gaara! Oh... and you didn't indicate the thoughts with anything at all in this, which made them difficult to pick out from the normal text and therefore a tad confusing...