Reviews For Fire Escape
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 30/04/12 - 03:16 pm · For: Episode 35: Wonder Girl
I absolutely loved this episode. It's nice to see Ross happy with everything she has gone throw. I mean, seriously, nobody deserves that. And I was just waiting for her to tell Zabuza, but he wasn't there.
Speaking of which, I became sad reading the end. For someone to go through so much alone they start to feel like they need nobody. That's just terrible. I feel bad for poor Ross.
Great chapter, DDTD. You always find ways to make me love Ross more.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 30/04/12 - 02:54 pm · For: Episode 34: The Hiding Place
Wow. Ross sure did find an interesting place in the old school building. I really like it. It seems like a place I'd love to be since I love the beauty of nature more than manmade things most of the time.
And there's the Ross we all know and love bits good to see her hard attitude again. Though I think she deserved some moments were she's dependent on others. Going everything on one's one can end very badly after so long.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 30/04/12 - 02:45 pm · For: Episode 33: The New King
Uh..... Who was the white aura Interpono showed Lance? Please please please tell me it's not Zabuza.
What's bad is even if that's who the King was, I wouldn't hate Lance. I love him. He's just really awesome and, well, probably one of my favorite characters on here =D. Go Lance! Unless it is Zabuza, in which case I say escape somehow from Interpono.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 30/04/12 - 07:49 am · For: Episode 32: Faces we Remember
Hm..... I think that Kakashi would have spoken or done something, and he seemed to totally disappear after Ross was dragged back, but other than that I loved it. It was a great chapter, and I loved how Ross jumped in the way. It just makes me like her that much more. And good ol' Zabuza and that bipolarness and temper. Then again, Ross did hit a very sore spot.... Anyway, great chapter, DDTD. I loved it. And yes, Ross is insane. Though Haku was still getting there.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 30/04/12 - 07:40 am · For: Episode 31: An Eye for an Eye
So, Hiruzen lives? Wait, what happened? Did he get away from Orochimaru or something? Sheesh, that is going to completely and totally twist every freaking thing. Hiruzen's death played a very major role in the story seeing as it did so much. I mean, I'm so happy he's alive. I absolutely love Hiruzen, but still, super surprised. Which is a very good thing =D. Great job, DDTD. It was an amazing chapter. I love how awesome Hiruzen is, even giving Zabuza a pardon and doing everything he is. I love this chapter and all the characters in it. And I really like the bond that Zabuza and Ross are building.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 30/04/12 - 07:29 am · For: Episode 30: Into the Fray
Hm.... I'm thinking it's Interpono hugging her, possibly in the little boy form. Though I'm not sure if you'll ever answer me since I don't think you reply to the reviews for you old story.....
This was a great chapter, sending me into a spiral when I found out they were right in the middle of the fight against the Sound and Sand. I mean, seriously, that is just so freaking original. And the writing was great, and it was interesting to see how Ross was acting when suddenly thrown into the ninja world like that. I can't wait to see how Zabuza being there will change everything, because by what's going on, I'm sure he's going to try something. But hey, I may be wrong.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 28/04/12 - 10:42 am · For: Episode 29: Those Who Hunt
What the flip? How the heck can it just stop at that? For the first time, I'm glad for being behind. It means I can keep reading. But dang, that is one heck of a twist. And I love the cute little Ross and Zabuza moment there.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/04/12 - 06:42 am · For: Episode 28: Zabuza's Favor
Oh. My. Flip.....
Konoha's after Zabuza!?!?! Okay, I didn't see that one coming. It's a super awesome twist though. It makes me eager to see just how this is going to turn out. I want to read more so badly. Sadly, though, there's some recently updated favorites I need to catch up on really quick. *sigh* Oh well.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/04/12 - 09:03 pm · For: Episode 27: Reality Sets In
Oh my gosh. That was just so amazing. I was crying when she asked/said Zabuza and her father, "You're leaving me". That was just such a sad moment, and now I'm curious as to why he's sending her away. What's going to happen now? Gah, I need to know. Which is why it sucks I have to go to bed *sigh*.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/04/12 - 06:26 pm · For: Episode 26: The Development
Ahhh, progress. Something everyone makes just by trying. Ross just showed everyone that. Even a person thrown into the Naruto world out of nowhere can do what they can just by trying.
And I love the hair ruffling thing. It makes me think of Twisted Heart, Tear Me Apart. I can't remember the character's name simply because it's been so long and I've gotten used to Ross and Spurlee/Tako. But Kakashi would always ruffle her hair. You even had a chapter with that title.
Great job, DDTD. I absolutely loved this chapter.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/04/12 - 06:07 pm · For: Episode 25: Progress like Water
Yeah! Go Ross. You did it! Hooray! Anyway, I'm really glad she did it. I really like how she did it. It was most definitely interesting how she was using paint to focus.
It's fun to see Zabuza around Ross. It seems so silly at times, with how he always teases her and all, and at other parts they're serious like the saving her thing.
This was a great chapter that I absolutely loved. Then again, I love the entire story.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/04/12 - 05:35 pm · For: Episode 24: The Girl
Wow. Well, that was an interesting chapter. I enjoyed the insight you gave us on Zabuza. It was really interesting to see his point of view. I'm also interested in the fact that even though Lance has already delivered the bracelet, he's still sticking around. I was hoping he would. I really like Lance. And it's nice to see that even though Zabuza is nicer, there's still some of the old Zabuza there.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 07/04/12 - 08:52 pm · For: Episode 23: Chakra Training?
The chakra card is most definitely something original. I really like it, DDTD. Then again, I like everything about your story. It's all amazing and original. Her training sessions are very believable. And I really like the fact that even though Ross has a good chakra potential, she can't focus. A bad to balance out the good. Great job, DDTD. It was absolutely amazing.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 05/04/12 - 10:04 am · For: Episode 22: Quiting
Well, just by that I can tell her pain tolerance has increased. That's one of the most painful things to increase. I, for one, know that. Anyway, great chapter. I found it hilarious when she said she'd learned it from a book since it is technically true.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 04/04/12 - 08:51 pm · For: Episode 21: Saving Me
I just realized that I'm about a fourth of the way through this story. Now just eighty chapters to go. Yeah!
Anyway, this was a great chapter. I loved the development of Ross's character. I really liked the saving thing you came up with. It truly gave us a look into who she is. So far it's one of my favorite parts. Now I'm off to read more!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 03/04/12 - 02:04 pm · For: Episode 20: The Memory, The Nightmare
That weirdo starting to freak me out....... And yet at the same time I love the parts that include him. How that makes any sense is beyond me.
Again, great training scene. I find them very believable. I'm also worried about her freak outs. I hope they don't happen while she's near a normal person or in a life or death fight because that could end up being her downfall. And I just noticed she hasn't been having dreams of fighting Itachi.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 03/04/12 - 11:18 am · For: Episode 19: Momochi Zabuza
Wow. This was a really good training scene. it was also very realistic. It makes me wonder if there's any chakra in her since she's in the Narutoverse or not. I'm going to guess not. I can't wait to see how that will affect things. I'm sure whatever it is, it'll be interesting.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 02/04/12 - 10:54 am · For: Episode 18: To Replace
I find the two of them around each other so interesting. Their personalities clash even though they're similar. I'm really looking forward to seeing how that affects their upcoming training. I'm sure it's going to be interesting.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 02/04/12 - 07:25 am · For: Episode 17: Goodbye, Goodbye, Goodbye
Hm.... I wonder if Ross will ever meet Kikan's brother. That sure would be interesting. Then again, just her journey altogether will be interesting.
The goodbyes were really sweet and sad. I liked Ross and Choukan's goodbyes the best. I thought it was the saddest and sweetest. Those two sure did bond. I really hope they see each other again in the future.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 28/03/12 - 06:58 pm · For: Episode 16: Home Bound?
Wow. It's so strange seeing (or reading) Zabuza act like this. I like him though. I can see why Haku's death and meeting Naruto would make him end up like this. By that I mean you're doing a good job at making it realistic.
I think the bracelet thing was really sweet. Maybe now we'll get to see what it does. I can't wait until then. Well, I actually can find out seeing as I'm so far behind......
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 28/03/12 - 02:54 pm · For: Episode 15: Squid
I feel bad for Lance. He has to deal with the thing known as Interpono. That has to be hard, especially since it seems worse and worse with every mention of it.
I think I'm starting to really like Lance. He does some bad things, but he's in a very bad situation. Most normal humans would do what he is if they had to deal with being what I think was said to be the Knight for Interpono.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 09/03/12 - 03:44 pm · For: Episode 14: The Angel
I am starting to be super creeped out by Interpono. One time I kinda imagined it or something similar crawling up my bed, then leg, and, well, it left me creeped out for a while. And this chapter just makes it worse. I mean, it's, as you said, the perfect bad guy. You have everything a bad guy needs plus more with creativity added. I don't know if there's any way anyone could improve him because he's so amazingly awesome.
Ooh, Lance and Ross again. More fun! I love seeing those to bicker and I find the way Ross affects Ross interesting. How must all this Game be affecting him? And then to accidentally kill someone who didn't need to die. Sheesh....
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 09/03/12 - 03:30 pm · For: Episode 13: Human Side
Wow. I never realized just how bad her relationship with her mom was. It's truly sad to know what happened between them. And then you add the part with her difficulty of her death. I feel like this chapter gave us a better look at who Ross truly is. I'm both happy about that and sad. Poor Ross......
This was a great chapter. I liked how you changed the original plot without really changing it too much. I really like that. Though, once again, I'm going to miss Haku.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 09/03/12 - 03:20 pm · For: Episode 12: The Bar Fighter
Crap. Zabuza is too smart for Ross's good. He now knows that she knows him. And ahhh!!! Poor Haku is dead T_T. Then again, it makes more sense I guess. It explains why he doesn't seem as kill-y as before. Still, I feel terrible for Zabuza. I love the way you wrote him. It was excellent and very realistic. It makes me really excited to see where this story's going.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 09/03/12 - 03:15 pm · For: Episode 11: Unlikely Normality
NO WAY! Zabuza? Crap, Ross, grab a rusty knife! Either that or get Interpono. That thing can unnerve/scare-to-death anyone.
It is a really great twist. One I probably should have expected because of the poster. And After The Ashes...... Okay, you can just forget the part about the rusty knife and Interpono....
Anyway, this was an amazing chapter. I must read more!