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Reviews For Fire Escape

Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 02/06/12 - 07:30 am · For: Episode 60: What's Real
I'm starting to get used to the entire Ross/Zabuza thing, and yet he still finds ways to creep me out. And seriously? Thinking anything can own Ross? That's like saying someone owns the sun.

I think it was really cute that Zabuza protected her, even if it was followed by him being possessive. That dude had too many puppies taken from him as a kid. I still loved it, though.

Haha. Lance almost had his butt kicked by Zabuza. I still love Lance, but that would have been hilarious.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 02/06/12 - 07:21 am · For: Episode 59: Bloody Affection
He...... Lance just kissed her...... Is he wanting to die?! That's just crazy, even if he was just trying to figure out something. Bad Lance!

Wow. This was definitely an interesting look into his mind. It shows how hard he's fighting to survive. Hehe. Jubilee. Just like Yuumai's penname =D. That is honestly the first thing I thought of.

Crap. Now I have to read more to find out what's wrong. Then again, I was going to read anyway. This way I'll just be tortured until I find out.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 02/06/12 - 07:10 am · For: Episode 58: Like You
Sheesh. Reading this has my brain pumping as it tries to think of FW. It makes it hard to focus on the story =P.

This was a wonderful chapter. I loved the fight scenes, and now every time Zabuza ruffles Ross's hair, I think of Jinni and Kakashi. I think it's interesting to follow Ross's thoughts. It's strange to think of her like Zabuza. She just seems too unique to be like anyone else.

Great chapter, DDTD. I absolutely loved it!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 02/06/12 - 06:32 am · For: Episode 57: The Intoxicating Angel
Interprono still creeps me out XP.

It's interest in her makes me fear for Ross's future. The little Crusader there at the end left me kinda agape. I mean, that would really suck for the poor girl. And I am very interested in this game of Interpono and his terms. I still really want to know just what Ross being the Angel means. I must read more!

Too bad Yu Gi Oh is on right now T_T


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 01/06/12 - 12:49 pm · For: Episode 56: Bracelet
Sheesh. Lance has made an enemy out of Ross, that I'm sure of. I really liked this chapter, simply because I like seeing Ross's thoughts. I was also liked to see her life like this again. She deserves some peace and normalcy after everything she's dealt with. Great job, DDTD. It was a great chapter that I loved.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 01/06/12 - 11:10 am · For: Episode 55: Welcome Home
She should have stabbed Saru a few more times for what he did to her family. That stupid, greedy dirt bag deserves * huffs angrily*.

Despite the family betrayal, this was quite a cute chapter that I rather enjoyed. It was great, DDTD. I love seeing the family back together again. I really liked the last line. It made everything more complete.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/05/12 - 04:28 pm · For: Episode 54: First Battle
Yeah! The Hanabukis are alright. And I found the last sentence really sweet and cute. The perfect way to end this chapter.

This was amazing. I loved the fight, and I enjoyed seeing Ross's development so far. Great job, DDTD.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 12/05/12 - 09:10 am · For: Episode 53: Faces
Wait wait wait wait. Are they still alive? Please tell me they're alive. And that they'll be saved, because Kabuto is far worse a fate than death. That guy really creeps me out, though Orochimaru is still ten times worse.

This was a great chapter. The whole Zabuza Ross thing still kinda creeps me out because it seems like Zabuza is doing it purly out of ownership at times, yet other times out of affection. His bipolar mind is so confusing.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 12/05/12 - 07:49 am · For: Episode 52: The Disaster
What. The. Flip?!

You killed them? You killed Kikan and Chiukan? That is just...... It's just...... Sheesh, I can't even think of a correct adjective. I can't believe they're gone. I must know what happened! I'm very glad I'm behind right now.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 12/05/12 - 07:23 am · For: Episode 51: Home Coming
So, we finally get some type of information on this bracelet. It sounds as if it cancels out genjutsu. Now I want to know what else it can do.

Yeah! We get to see Kikan and Choukan again! I'm so excited. I've been missing that little kid. He was just so adorable.

I just have to read this reunion. I'm sure it'll be great.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 10/05/12 - 06:19 pm · For: Episode 50: This is Not a War
Give me a second......

*begins running around and circles screaming "FINALLY!!"*

Okay, I'm back. Sorry, but I had to do that. I am finally half way through. Now just 50 more chapters and the acknowledgments. I'm so happy!

Anyway, this was a great chapter. I would have loved to see Zabuza and Kisame both physically and verbally clash, but I was satisfied either way. You truly did an amazing job at adding Ross into this story. She didn't screw it up and wasn't some super powerful annoying Mary-Sue, though I doubt she'll ever be. She was just perfect, only changing things ever so slightly. Speaking of which, I am sure she's in for a load of questions. And I'm really interested in the genjutsu thing, and I loved her being trapped between Itachi and Interpono's nightmare worlds. Probably my favorite part.

Great job, DDTD. This was an amazing addition to your amazing story.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/05/12 - 06:48 pm · For: Episode 49: Enemies Appear
Now that was one heck of a fight scene. I love how even with her knowledge, Ross couldn't beat Kisame and Itachi. And I find it hilarious she'd be fighting him after her dreams. Speaking of Itachi, how is it his genjutsu doesn't affect her?

And now Kakashi has joined the show. I like how she can change things without really changing the plot. It's very fun to read. And now even more fun is about to begin =D


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/05/12 - 06:38 pm · For: Episode 48: Konohamaru's Mission
I find it hilarious that he actually refers to Ross with male terms. I wonder if he'll ever learn......

Oh. My. Gosh. Zabuza is going to join in? Gah! I must see this. Sheesh, lately there's just a lot of things I really want to get to.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/05/12 - 06:33 pm · For: Episode 47: Creepy Guy?
Well, don't worry, Ross. I forgot about Itachi and Kisame, too. Now I must know how her sudden appearance will change anything. If it changes things......

Gah! Danzo!...... Nope still more afraid of Orochimaru.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/05/12 - 06:26 pm · For: Episode 46: Just one of those Days
I just choked laughing at everyone mistaking Ross's gender. And it's even funnier that it's the pervs (and Konohamaru) who mistake her for a boy. And I don't know why, but I also laughed hard at her McDonalds thing.

This was a great chapter and very entertaining. It went from being given homework to the sudden appearance of the Pervy Sage. This was a great chapter, DDTD, and I absolutely loved it!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/05/12 - 06:17 pm · For: Episode 45: Focused on You
*hangs head and shakes it* There is seriously something wrong with Zabuza's mind. I'm starting to think Haku should be thankful he was male. Trying to understand the creep's mind with Ross is so strange.

I loved reading this chapter. I really enjoy the parts with Ross's fighting spirit. It's just so great to see her draw strength when up against this demon opponent. I just love Ross =D.

Great chapter, DDTD. I really enjoyed it.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/05/12 - 06:07 pm · For: Episode 44: Honesty
Sheesh. It's so strange, because I find it cute that Zabuza likes her, but then ibeonder if it's more of a possessive thing and I have to wonder if that's why or......

Let's just leave it at Zabuza confuses me.

I loved this chapter, DDTD, and I can't wait to see where this whole Ross/Zabuza thing goes.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/05/12 - 06:00 pm · For: Episode 43: Sensei
I loved the meeting between Ross and Ebisu. It was just hilarious. That stupid, perverted, Shino-glasses-wanna-be wearing dude really annoys me, so I loved seeing him put in his place. Go Ross and Zabuza. I loved how Ross advised Konohamaru not to look up to him or anything, and then Konohamaru's reaction to Ebisu's approval.

And now the reunion between Zabuza and Ross. I just have to read it!!!!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 30/04/12 - 04:40 pm · For: Episode 42: Learn From Me
Still laughing like crazy at the Mister Sensei thing. I absolutely love it. It's just hilarious. And I found it interesting that you had that twist of both of them being the trainer and trainee. It'll be interesting watching Ross trying not to strangle Konohamaru. And now you have me curious about that bracelet. Darn it! I must know!!!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 30/04/12 - 04:28 pm · For: Episode 41: Mister Sensei
I was laughing my butt off by the end with how often Konohamaru called her Mister. It was just hilarious, and I loved how Ross acted in response. I find it really interesting that the trainee is becoming trainer. Great chapter, DDTD!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 30/04/12 - 04:19 pm · For: Episode 40: The Reaper and The Devil
That was so freaking awesome. I never expected the Reaper to make a sudden appearance, but it's so amazing he did. So I take it Hiruzen actually did take away Orochimaru's jutsus.

And I love Lance. I don't care if he's a totally selfish killer, he is awesome. I love him, so you can assure him he won't be getting any hate mail from me.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 30/04/12 - 04:10 pm · For: Episode 39: I Had You
JINNI! Her name was Jinni. I don't know where in the world it came from, because before I couldn't remember it for the life of me. But Kakashi used to always ruffle Jinni's hair the same way.

Anyways, your version of Zabuza is very, very unpredictable. I never would have thought that something like that would happen now, and then boom! Great chapter, DDTD. It was fabulous.

Sasaui U.: Zabuza's a creeper......

Me: No way! Out of my reviews, Sasaui U.!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 30/04/12 - 03:59 pm · For: Episode 38: Learn the Advantage
Ah sheesh. Zabuza would be too good acting like what Ross accused him of. Though it was really fun to read about. I love the strange relationship between them. It's, as I just said, strange. But that just makes it fun ;).


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 30/04/12 - 03:44 pm · For: Episode 37: Reappearance
I'm so glad Zabuza is back, but the reason why he disappeared makes me sad. It reminds me of how recently Zabuza lost someone and makes me wonder how much he's hurting on the inside. Great chapter, DDTD. I loved this chapter, and I really love your story.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 30/04/12 - 03:26 pm · For: Episode 36: The Night
Ahh. The white aura was Hiruzen. I got confused and thought Interepono was just pointing him out.

WHAT THE HECK!!!???!!! Bad Lance. How could you kill Hiruzen? He was so great and amazing and caring and the best Kage ever.

And yet I still love Lance. What is wrong with my brain?


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