Reviews For Fire Escape
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 05/07/11 - 12:47 pm · For: Episode 6: The Game
You're.... a genius... I loved this, it was brilliant. I had no idea the plot ran that deep, and you completely caught me by surprise. Now I know what you meant by how Lance was lying. No kidding, this is a huge plot development, and I loved it! This was awesome. I seriously have no more words now. Keep up the amazing work, this is so good!
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you! I'm really glad you liked this episode! I had a heck of time writing it, let me tell you. Interpono is a really interesting character to write but its fun to write as it because it has so many personality traits that don't even come to light in this episode O_O
I fully intend to use Interpono and Lance again through out the story, I'm almost sure of it! They're just to awesome, and important in their own ways, to not be mentioned again at some point XD
Anyway, I thought it would be fun to change up my usually writing style because I hardly ever get things this complex into a fanfiction so I hope you're ready for all the bumps and twists this story is going to take :D Thanks for reading Silver-sempai!!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/07/11 - 03:38 pm · For: Episode 5: The Face of Evil
Haha, well, I'm glad my previous review amused you so much that it encouraged you to update another chapter. And if you like, yes, you can call me Silver. I love nicknames :D
Other than the whole latin verse thing, I really liked this chapter. But yeah, Google Translate sort of sucks at deciphering some languages :P
Once again, Lance likes to spook people? Seriously? He killed her, how does that make him feel about scaring people now?
I did like the description of the Interpono and the back story behind the little boy. It's so tragic, and then you twist it into such a creepy form that it really gave me chills.
Nice work with this chapter! I like where this is going, I seriously can't wait for more. Perhaps a third update today? Haha, nah, I'll take what I can get. The two chapters today were awesome.
And I keep forgetting to say this, but nice banner!
Author's Response: Ha, I love Interpono! It is an interesting little monster to say the least, one I would actually like to use again someday. Never know with characters like it. Yes, the Latin was annoying, but I choose Latin because it's a base language (a very old base language). Also, I went over five or six different translating sites to make sure my translations were as close to perfect as I could get them XD
Sadly because Latin is a broken up language that other words came from the way it comes out is still a little strange, but it was fun to mess around with for this one story.
The back story of the little boy is actually a story I heard floating around the high school in my home town years back so I re-told the story here, not sure if it was true or not, but it fit into Interpono's character so nicely I couldn't resist!
I'm glad it was creepy, Interpno I mean, because that is exactly how it was supposed to be. There wasn't really supposed to be anything likable about it other then it being down right creepy. I had so much fun writing that part of this chapter that I was a little sad when it was over :D
And don't worry, Lance's part is better explained later XD Besides that though, thank you for reviewing! It's always fun to read your reviews! This reply is getting kinda long, ha ha, so I'll finish it up by thanking you for the comment about my banner! I made it myself XD
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/07/11 - 02:58 pm · For: Episode 4: Interpono, Inbetween Worlds
O_O
Well.... uh.... certainly didn't see that one coming. I will commend you on originality. I feel like these types of stories always just involve a random portal that sends the girl to a different world (usually the Naruto world, obviously). I like that you actually had a captivating twist to it.
I can't say that I like how the boy was really only trying to 'scare' her, so I'm hoping that'll be explained more?
I did like your writing during the scenes where she was hit and then in the hospital. It was so fast-moving yet descriptive, showing the chaos of the dilemma.
I really liked this chapter, though I don't like cliffhangers :( Update soon please? This is so awesome, I seriously can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Um... thank you? I think??
He actually wasn't trying to scare her, he--- I'm not going to tell you. It'll spoil the whole plot between Ross and him. Anyway, my portal gets much weirder from here I can assure you >XD
Anyway, I'm glad to know I don't totally suck at Sci-fi then, I'll take that rather then totally hated. *Shrugs in defeat*
Thanks for the Review Silver! Can I call you Silver? That's my favorite color :D
Name: ontuva (Signed) · Date: 30/06/11 - 02:36 pm · For: Episode 3: The Encounter
Whoa, that was a bit creepy. I would be freaked out too! XD And a cliffhanger! You evil, evil person! I can't wait to read the next chapter! :3 (Ps. I'm glad you like my reviews! XD)
I really much liked the ending, where Ross starts to feel like she's cracking. Stress can do that!
Author's Response: I am rather fond of cliff hangers :D They give people something to look forward to and I do so love writing off them. It makes the next chapter a bit more suspenseful, even if nothing happens XD which is wrong because a lot will happen in the future! THANKS FOR READING!!!
Name: ontuva (Signed) · Date: 30/06/11 - 02:30 pm · For: Episode 2: Life as I know it; a Horrible Short Term Agreement
XD She falling asleep on the cereal reminded me of Ace from One Piece. Then I just couldn't stop laughing. I still am!
I had somewhat hard time concentrating, because all I could think of was her landing on the cereal. But still - great chapter! Now we know a bit more about the main character and why she acts like she does. She seems a bit angsty, but then again, all teenagers do (it's part of the age I guess).
Off to the next chappie! ->
Author's Response: Ross has sleeping problems so she tends to dose off constantly, if only for a few minutes, and then wakes up again. That's what happened with the cereal lol Anyway, this chapter leads to more creepy chapters in the future mwahahaha. I feel so spooky XD
Name: ontuva (Signed) · Date: 30/06/11 - 02:25 pm · For: Episode 1: Knock out Girl
Whoa, you started a new story! And I must say, I like things have started in this one! Ross seems like an interesting character (definitely different from Jinni!). She's not too sugar-coated if you know what I mean. She has an edge!
Have to go to the next chapter now, I'm too eager to read this to stop and make a proper review! XD
Author's Response: Hahaha, don't worry about it to much! I'm just glad to see you reading this new story of mine! You are by far one of my all time favorite reviewers lol Thank you for being so supportive during my time on this site!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 30/06/11 - 01:12 pm · For: Episode 3: The Encounter
Total movie moment? Maybe a little... Still as creepy as ever? Oh yeah...
Seriously, I couldn't stop myself from being so creeped out from this mystery person! I tried thinking about who it could possibly be, but I still have no clue :( Quite upsetting.... but that means more suspense and more action, I think. Haha, I seriously can't wait for more now! Keep up the great work, this is so cool!
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D This chapter was a little hard for me to write because I don't usually write suspense, but rather comedy. I really hope to get better at this type of writing but it'll take a lot of practice XD YOU WILL NEVER GUESS YOU THE MYSTERY PERSON IS!! MWAHAHAHA!!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 29/06/11 - 05:52 pm · For: Episode 2: Life as I know it; a Horrible Short Term Agreement
Yup, I definitely love Ross. She's so.... different. And that is actually saying something. I've read a lot of stories where the protagonist is 'different', but she really ends up being just one of a thousand copies. Ross is genuinely different. She has all the qualities that one would never expect to see in a fanfic story, yet, I personally find her a very addicting character to read about. Just the way you write her makes her that much more interesting. This little look into her life provided so much valuable insight, developing her personality and her home life so well, and I loved it. Great work! It was amazing, truly amazing. I can only imagine what teh rest of story holds, keep up the great work with this!
Author's Response: Well Ross is actually the recreation of an old OC of mine who was a mary-sue like no other, I swear to god. But I dug up my old drawings and stories and said "What the heck? WHY NOT!?" And then Ross was born! There will be some mary-sueness in this story, I know that for a fact because I couldn't get rid of all of Ross' original abilities and not feel bad but she has for sure come a long way from Quizilla, I'll tell you that much. I'm glad you like her so far, I hope I can keep you interested in her character through out the story :D
Name: Ejdj (Anonymous) · Date: 29/06/11 - 05:30 pm · For: Episode 2: Life as I know it; a Horrible Short Term Agreement
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Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 27/06/11 - 07:06 pm · For: Episode 1: Knock out Girl
Oh wow. Now... I liked this. Talk about originality. I love Ross. It has only been a chapter, and I love the character you created. Actually, Iove your writing style. It is amazing! I would love to see this continued, please keep up he great work with this! I would love to read more about your character, she seems so unique, not like the cliche excited fangirl. Ross actually has flare and originality, and I love that you made a character like her; uniqueness that his site needs, I think. Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response: Wow O_O Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed Ross' character thus far, I hope I can keep you entertained through the next chapters :) I actually have the next three written already, ha ha. Ross is an extremely fun character for me to write because she is so different from most of my OCs who, in contrast, are very hyper and jumpy. Ross is, in a lot of ways, more real then most of my characters and I'm hoping she can connect with the more somber crowd where Jinni had a hard time adapting XD
Thank you so much for you review!