Reviews For Fire Escape
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 29/07/11 - 04:14 pm · For: Episode 37: Reappearance
:D Zabuza's back!
And wow, what a reason for disappearing! I am really happy right now. This was awesome. I love the love/hate relationship they have. Omg, I wanna keep telling you how awesome this was, by I must go on to read more! Great work with this!
Name: Silvercatninja13 (Signed) · Date: 29/07/11 - 03:34 pm · For: Episode 39: I Had You
Oh...snap... O_O That was...well, unexpected, for lack of a better word. Heck, that was an awesome chapter! I loved it!!
Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 27/07/11 - 03:52 pm · For: Episode 36: The Night
Ugh! The shortness of your chapters kill me but the sheer awesomeness of this story keeps me coming back ToT
Name: Silvercatninja13 (Signed) · Date: 27/07/11 - 03:27 pm · For: Episode 36: The Night
That was a great way to end the chapter. I love your writing style, it's great!
Name: Aubrey (Anonymous) · Date: 27/07/11 - 12:59 pm · For: Episode 36: The Night
awww I feel sorry for Lance now.
Though I'm sad to see the old man go, I am happy to know Tsunade will be comming in the story(hopefully lol you change it up so much I don't know whaht to expect).
And where is Zabuza??? He reminds me of a father figure to Ross, I can only picture him being away from her if it was something important.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 27/07/11 - 10:29 am · For: Episode 36: The Night
EEEPPP!!!!
She's going to kill Lance?! Wait, he killed the Hokage?! I was so hoping he wouldn't do it?!
Hmm... do I hate Lance?.... I don't think I do..... Darn it!
Ah... sad, sad chapter, but awesome nonetheless. You always surprise me, and that's why I love this story. Great, excellent, wonderful, fantastic job on this chapter. Keep up the amazing work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 27/07/11 - 10:21 am · For: Episode 35: Wonder Girl
I liked this! It was awesome to see how much Ross has improved! And when she was excited, I felt so happy for her!
Then she started thinking about how she didn't need Zabuza around, and I loved how well you brought up her past attitude and applied it here. It was great!
Ah, I can't wait to read more! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Ah, thanks so much! Sorry I have been responding to your reviews lately but I still love reading them so thanks for that! Anyway, Ross is a bitter kid so it makes sense that she hasn't really moved on from things that happened to her as a child. At the same time, she feels she has a kind of connection with Zabuza though she doesn't know why, and she feels she can't depend on him always being around. It makes her seem rlike a very confused character. Anyway, thanks much for the reviews Silver-san!!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 27/07/11 - 09:32 am · For: Episode 34: The Hiding Place
Ooh, interesting discovery for Ross. That's a really cool place, and it seems like an interesting development for the story.
But what I really liked was how Ross was basically like 'Forget him!' It was very cyclic in her personality. She started out independent, and she realizes that she will always want to be independent (to some extent). I really liked that.
Great work! Now I'm off to the next chapter!
Name: Aubrey (Anonymous) · Date: 26/07/11 - 09:13 pm · For: Episode 33: The New King
This is so great. You keep the story going a whole different direction then others. Any other author would have had the charactor actually meet and be introduced to Kakashi.(the ones im used to reading anyway) But Ross just made an appearance and left. I can't get enough of Ross's and Zabuza's relationship. I wander what Kakashi thought of the whole spectactle. This story is very good, keeps me wandering :).
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 26/07/11 - 12:58 pm · For: Episode 33: The New King
*screams into pillow for ten minutes*
Okay, I'm done.... Oh the scream? That was in response to Interpono and his absolute creepiness.
And tell Lance that, oddly enough, I love him even more! I'm so typical fangirl, I love the mysterious hot bad-but-wants-to-be-good guy.
Gah, loved this one! Great job! Excellent! Keep up the fantastic work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 26/07/11 - 12:31 pm · For: Episode 32: Faces we Remember
The last line was the best way to end this chapter :D
Another great chapter! Seriously, this is getting better and better! Getting a look at Zabuza's feelings about his deceased sidekick was brilliant. It was amazing. And of course, the encounter with Kakashi was so intense, especially with Ross jumping in like she did.
I just loved this whole chapter. Another personal favorite! Ah, this is so good, I can barely stop smiling. Keep up the wonderful work!
Name: Aubrey (Anonymous) · Date: 25/07/11 - 02:30 pm · For: Episode 1: Knock out Girl
Woah..I did not expect that. This is soooo much different then any other story about someone going to the naruto univ. I like it.
I love the suprises. This is so much better then the usual stories. I am honestly addicted now lol. I love how Zabuza cares so much for her. I wander how they will manage in Kohona for a week. I'm so excited to see if she meets naruto and everyone and what the reaction be when they find out Zabuza ia alive :D
Keep up with the updating please, Im loving it lol!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 25/07/11 - 12:45 pm · For: Episode 31: An Eye for an Eye
Wow, Sarutobi is so awesome! Nice work on this chapter! Short but intense fight, and what's even better, the Third Hokage lives! Wait... I wonder how the storyline will be affected now...
Ah, more importantly, I can't wait to see how Zabuza and Ross will handle living in Konoha :) I'm so excited to read more! Keep up the awesome work!
Name: Aubrey (Anonymous) · Date: 24/07/11 - 07:20 pm · For: Episode 30: Into the Fray
Now I'm excited to see if she'll meet nauto and the gang. I like how this story stared out. People usually have oc come in before Orochimaru. So far I really like this story, keep it up please.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/07/11 - 06:35 pm · For: Episode 30: Into the Fray
Beautiful picture, by the way. You're a great artist and an excellent writer. You're multi-talented :D
O_O My name is in glittery lights... Thank you so much for the shoutout! Although, I review because I think this story deserves it ;D
Wow! Way to jump right into the action! You'll probably get annoyed with me eventually because I keep saying this; this is so original. You jumped right into the action of the Chuunin Exams, not even missing a beat to throw Ross into danger. It was incredible. Instead of going step by step to see the start of the exams to this point. Then again, with Ross's training taking the time it needed, this is a good place to throw her into, I think :)
Oh, you were spelling it Kohona, when it is actually Konoha. Just a heads up.
I'm so excited to read more now! And there were 5 updates today! I definitely won't be greedy at this point, I'm so amazed you posted this much.
Fantastic work with this chapter. I loved it. Great job!
...But I still don't like cliffhangers....
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/07/11 - 11:57 am · For: Episode 29: Those Who Hunt
Zabuza's back! And... they were captured by ANBU.... Why with the cliffhangers?! Ugh....
Wow, now I seriously can't wait for more. I would ask for more updates, but four chapters in a day was WAY more than I could have asked for. I'm so content with it, and they were all amazing.
Great work! These chapters were excellent. Keep up the amazing work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/07/11 - 11:48 am · For: Episode 28: Zabuza's Favor
Konoha! Ah, we finally hear a little bit about the Leaf and its actions! Oh man, that means things will be even more intense.
I don't have the patience to write a detailed review because I really want to go onto the next chapter. Just know that this chappie was really good, as always! Now, I'm off once more!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/07/11 - 11:27 am · For: Episode 27: Reality Sets In
*sniffle* It's... just so sad....
Great parallelism... We see Zabuza sending her away for her safety, and then you throw in that flashback of her father leaving her. It's all so sad, but it's beautifully written. And the suspense is now killing me.
Great work. I'm almost scared to read the next chapter, but I'm going to anyway!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/07/11 - 11:19 am · For: Episode 26: The Development
Wow! Great progress, in both the story and Ross's practice! It's interesting to see her training so hard, and even through all this struggle, she has managed a bit of improvement. Not too much, yet enough to make this story flow right. And also, with all these struggles, the reader really feels happy along with Ross when she makes progress. It's excellent. Great work! I'm off to the next chapter!
Name: lakey101 (Anonymous) · Date: 24/07/11 - 08:55 am · For: Episode 25: Progress like Water
I am absoulutly loving this story!! You are an amazing writer!!!! Please update soon!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 22/07/11 - 06:32 pm · For: Episode 25: Progress like Water
Wow, a water type, huh? I honestly thought that she would be fire. Haha, who knew?
It was interesting to see how Ross has adapted to focusing on her ninja work. Seeing what she thinks really made everything flow really well.
And of course, I still love Zabuza :D He's developed so well as a character, especially in this fic.
Great job on this chapter! I loved it! Keep up the incredible work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 22/07/11 - 11:58 am · For: Episode 24: The Girl
Aw, would you look at that? Zabuza is actually nice :D Nice character development. We get to see exactly what goes on inside that head of his, especially since his bipolar attitude is always getting in the way. It was really great insight into his personality. And we actually see Lance for a bit. So he's still hanging around? Huh... Things always get more interesting in this story.
Great job with this chapter! Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response: Uh yes, Zabuza is an interesting one. He likes to keep poor Ross guessing whenever possible, but I thought the readers would like to have some idea what he really thinks of her as to get rid of any confusion! Anyway, I'm glad you learned something about him from this episode as that was its purpose, and throwing Lance in there is always fun because he is such a little creeper! But nothing about him is explained, which makes him even creepier! Mwahaha, I am so evil XD Anyway, thanks again for reading Silver-san!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 22/07/11 - 11:31 am · For: Episode 23: Chakra Training?
Wow! Creative, I really liked it! This chakra card sounds really interesting. And I like how you explained it. The whole idea and explanation was creative, it was awesome! Well done, I really liked it. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Aw! You're always so mice silver-san! I'm always glad to hear that people like my wacky little inventions for my fanfics! It's fun to design my own special ninja tools as well, and giving them to Zabuza was a bonus XD Anyway, onto your next review!!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/07/11 - 03:19 pm · For: Episode 22: Quiting
Aw, thanks for the lovely shoutout :)
Once again, a great training session. She has improved some in the month with Zabuza, which is good. And there was no bipolar attitude in Zabuza, though I'm sure it's there somewhere.
Haha, can't wait for more! Keep up he amazing work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/07/11 - 11:42 am · For: Episode 21: Saving Me
Hmm... Zabuza truly is a bipolar one. I like it, I think it works for him. It's quite suiting.
Anyways, nice character development! I love how we still learn about Ross's character. Her personality truly is a deep one, and it's so interesting learning more about her.
Keep up the great work!