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Reviews For Fire Escape

Name: Babygirl22 (Anonymous) · Date: 13/10/11 - 05:07 am · For: Episode 31: An Eye for an Eye
Please update soon! This story is AMAZING!!


Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 06/10/11 - 04:49 pm · For: Episode 77: The Snake Charmer
Bah! I haven't reviewed in so long O.O

*le gasp!*

Anyways the story is progressing amazing as usual. I would go into more detail but I'm suppose to be working *shifty eyes*

Anyyywaaays!

Yep. Great. You rule:D

And yup I know what he's saying without needing google! WoopWoop!


Name: Fire_and_Ice (Signed) · Date: 03/10/11 - 08:38 pm · For: Episode 77: The Snake Charmer
OH. MY. GOD. Seriously, what is this?! I don't check the recent stories for a while and then when I do --BAM! A long, wonderful, beautiful, well-written piece of art from like my FAVOURITE author! I grew wings and ended up in heaven. Every spare moment of my time these last few days I've been reading through all 70+ of your God-given chap- oh, pardon me, episodes. To sum up my feelings of your story, I need a heart.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/10/11 - 07:45 pm · For: Episode 77: The Snake Charmer
Ah, epicness has arrived once again :D

The entire chase scene had me laughing, it was so funny to see TonTon chasing Ross. And then Kabuto shows up, and I gotta say, I wish he would just stay out if the way so I can see how Ross reacts to Orochimaru! ;) Nah, I'm kidding, I do like it, and it makes me that much eager to see more. Keep up the awesome work, this was amazing!


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 30/09/11 - 03:25 am · For: Episode 76: The Slug Queen
Haha, I loved the way you ended that. Ross running away from the lunatic Sannin to find protection from the pervert Sannin XD

Wow, Ross always has the worse luck, huh? She always gets involved in the things she doesn't want to :P But, it makes for a much more interesting story ;D

Excellent work with this chapter! I'm glad to hear you got your new computer, but don't worry about slow updates. Don't overwork yourself ;) Keep up the great work!


Name: Kakashifan727 (Signed) · Date: 21/09/11 - 04:01 pm · For: Episode 18: To Replace
Meh, I think I see a pattern here. Small grammar mistakes here and there, but I don't feel like going Nazi right now.


Name: fey4life (Signed) · Date: 20/09/11 - 07:25 pm · For: Episode 75: Peppermints
Normally I'm one of those horrible, lazy people who don't review but Im trying to get better and I thought I'd start with your story. I just love it! Zabuza is one of my favorite characters, after my best friend force fed her love for the mist duo they grew on me. I rarely find a story that features them and I am so happy! You created a very well rounded OC and she fits into the story very well. I don't know if I like the whole looking like haku, but I can understand it's point and I'm sure you know what your doing. I can't wait for the next chapter! So Please write as fast as you can, for all your stories. They are very much loved!


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/09/11 - 05:15 pm · For: Episode 75: Peppermints
Aha, the lightheartedness of this chapter made me really happy. It was just so fun to read :D And then the suspense towards the end had me shivering, as it leads right into the epicness of the arc. I can't wait for the next one, keep up the awesome work!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/09/11 - 01:26 pm · For: Episode 3: The Encounter
Wow. That was an intriguing chapter. First you had Ross being called by that mystery person. That was creepy enough as is. Then you added the ending with the foot steps. For all I know, that can be one hundred percent normal, but that's just it. I don't know.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 18/09/11 - 06:20 pm · For: Episode 2: Life as I know it; a Horrible Short Term Agreement
Wow. This was truly amazing. I think I am in love with your character. Why is it that the characters with attitude are always the most addicting? And then she has a suck-y life, something else I seem to love. You have two of the things I love packed into one, so yeah, I'm definitely in love with your character. I highly enjoy the little dreams she has. They fascinate me and make me wonder why she has them. And the face in the cereal thing was very humorous. Her life with her mom is, well, both interesting and complicated. Good, though. You are very descriptive, which I like. Correction, love. It makes the story so much easier to follow. Your story is amazing, DDTD.


Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 13/09/11 - 06:07 pm · For: Episode 74: Snack Buddies
Awe, gotta love Naruto lmao


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/09/11 - 03:23 pm · For: Episode 74: Snack Buddies
Aww, they are getting along. How nice is that :) Hehe, Naruto's goofballness is adorable, and Ross's serious personality balances out so well. And they are similar, I guess I can kind of tell.

Yay for teamwork! They beat Waraji and Zori so well, haha!

Great chapter! I love your updates! Keep up the awesome work!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/09/11 - 02:38 pm · For: Episode 1: Knock out Girl
Nothing...... I'd tell you how amazing your story is, but the word from before decribes how many words I can think of to describe this. It was just..... Wow. You're writing was out of this world, and so was Ross. I am so in love with her already. First you portrait her as this tough, scary girl, and then you suddenly throw in that silly anime part of her. It was magnificent. And I can't even begin to tell you how much I loved the dream at the beginning. It was one hundred percent awesomeness, and two hundred percent blowmymindawayness. Then again, so was the entire story. And speaking of your stories, I really need to get caught up in My Twisted Heart, Tear Me Apart. I'm only on chapter nine or so.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/09/11 - 02:09 pm · For: Episode 73: You Vs. Me
It's the best feeling in the world when I come home from school to find one of my personal favorite stories updated :)

Haha, poor Ross, having to deal with Naruto. But actually, in the end, they seemed to get along, or almost I suppose. I wonder how long that will last.... But his prank was so classic that it was funny, I loved Ross's reaction: she wanted to laugh and destroy him at the same time. Heehee ;)

Excellent and fun chapter! I can't wait to see Naruto's training with Ross XD That's definitely something I'd like to see. Keep up the awesome work!


Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 11/09/11 - 12:31 pm · For: Episode 72: Masked
Wahoo! Another episode!


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 09/09/11 - 06:19 pm · For: Episode 72: Masked
AWWWW! Ross is seriously really sweet when she wants to be. I know most other teenagers would give the toys to the little kids anyway, but I don't know, I found it really nice how Ross did it. :3

Wow, what an intense fight. Ross seriously has improved. She's even able to beat those two lackeys XD

Excellent chapter! Keep up the awesome work!


Name: tigerseye (Signed) · Date: 06/09/11 - 06:57 pm · For: Episode 71: The Ghost
Love the new banner! You're totally right about how it illustrates Ross and Zabuza's relationship. *ducks kuni* The mask was an interesting twist, I'm exited to see how it will affect Zabuza when he sees her wearing it. Keep writing!


Name: JubileeOfPuppies (Signed) · Date: 06/09/11 - 05:14 pm · For: Episode 71: The Ghost
I kind of only half read everything, aside from the last chapter, which was very entreating. I would consider reading it thoroughly, if you would stop spoiling the plot for me!

Anyhow, very fun, love the way you make Ross think about Haku so often. Keep it up, and stop talking to me about it. XD I WANNA READ IT FOR MYSELF FOR A CHANGE!


Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 06/09/11 - 04:42 pm · For: Episode 71: The Ghost
I love Haku, but I'm happy that Ross isn't trying to be him and that Zabuza doesn't see her as him.

... It would be cool to see how Haku would react to Ross LMAO

Anyways! Haha, Zabuza's gonna freak when he sees that mask :O

Nice Episode, as always, and love the new banner!

Eeep! O.O Don't shank meh! *hides behind a random prep* Okay, now you can throw the kunai XD


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/09/11 - 03:26 pm · For: Episode 71: The Ghost
First off, I love the banner! It's gorgeous! And you're right, it really does add effect to this chapter.

Wow, a mask just like Haku's.... And it's so good to know that Ross doesn't have those insecurities about being compared to Haku anymore. She's her own person, and even with a similar mask, it's good to know that she's happy that she's just Ross ;D

I really liked this chapter; it did add a lot to her character. I'm sorry to hear about your computer. Don't worry about updates, take your time with them if you need to. But I hope you get an awesome new one ;) Nice chapter! Keep up the amazing work!


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 04/09/11 - 02:11 pm · For: Episode 70: The New Journey
Haha, Zabuza's so evil! Poor Ross, having to go on an expedition that she obviously doesn't want to be on.

Of course, that means more action for her, which means entertainment for me ;) I can't wait to see how Ross and Tsunade deal with one another. That in itself seems really interesting. And Naruto learning Rasengan... oh boy.

Nice chapter! It was awesome, as always! Keep up the good work!


Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 04/09/11 - 01:29 pm · For: Episode 69: A World Beyond Your Eyes
Dude I am so addicted to this story it's not even funny =.=
Great episode, like always :P


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/09/11 - 03:53 am · For: Episode 69: A World Beyond Your Eyes
Wow, Zabuza finally got his answers, huh? It was terribly awkward and threatening for poor Ross though. You were right about he bitterness of their relationship, but that's what makes it well-rounded.

Great chapter! Keep up the awesome work!


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/09/11 - 08:40 am · For: Episode 68: The Snake of the Leaf?
Haha, I like the fact that Ross is out of chakra, and the only thing she's worried about in the end is Zabuza yelling at her. XD

Anyways, what a terrific way to end this battle! I loved it! Anko coming in really surprised me, as did the ANBU arriving. But then, of course, Zabuza and Jiraiya coming in really tied up the ending.

This was another epic episode, great job! Keep up the amazing work!

Oh, and I hope the first day of your senior year went well! Mine starts next week :(


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/09/11 - 08:29 am · For: Episode 67: Rope Burn
Amazing battle, as always! The fast pace really makes it more epic, in my opinion. It's like a movie. Moving fast shows the intensity of it.

And wow, what an ending by Ross. It has me worried about what will happn now! So I'm quickly off to the next chapter! Nice job on this wonderful battle!


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