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Reviews For Fire Escape

Name: Halleluyah no yuki (Signed) · Date: 23/04/16 - 04:24 am · For: Episode 1: Knock out Girl
hey hey hey.. soooo, first I'd like to apologize, I've been a total sleeper here, I've read the entire story (kihika:and sequel !me:shut up, you're not helping! )ahem so, I've kinda been mooching off your hard work this entire Time and I know how annoying that can be so please feel free to mooch off me anytime (kihika:smooth
me:still not helping! )so anyways I'd like to personally tell you how awesome this story is, I really love Ross, and the thing with her mother (kihika:thats in the sequel you idiot!
me:shut it? )so I think my favorite character would be interpono though I still feel bad about the carrot top but I love haku's sister and the whole zabuzaXoc thing, I really like this story and I'll try to review as much as I can.. ja'ne!


Name: Fitsofrage (Signed) · Date: 03/11/13 - 07:17 am · For: Episode 46: Just one of those Days
Awesomeness!


Name: ontuva (Signed) · Date: 02/01/13 - 11:48 am · For: Episode 43: Sensei
Omg. XD I had to review. This was just so amazing, I was laughing out loud. xD Konohamaru's and Ross' chemistry is just plainly awesome! I want to see more of them. AND ZABUZA. *_* OOO, THE CONFRONTATION~


Name: ontuva (Signed) · Date: 02/01/13 - 11:34 am · For: Episode 39: I Had You
Alright, I haven't reviewed like in...ages! (It's probably been over a year... o__o) But nonetheless, I am back and ADGKAGAL! I read the earlier chapters with my phone and because it's a pain in the bum to write anything with touchpad (my sausage fingers do not enjoy it ;_;) I had to wait until I got to my computer.

THIS STORY IS AMAZING. It's simply just is. Reading this makes my muse sing and just - WOAAAH. I love this.

You've made good bad guys (Interpolo still makes me cringe) and I...well I don't hate you Lance, but you are quite despicable. You killed Hokage. :(

I love your Zabuza. I just love him. Adore him. He makes my socks turn in my feet. *_* AND THIS CHAPTER AND THE KISS. WHOAA. I hadn't thought it'd happen this quick. I'm happy it did though. :3

So, on to the next chapters! I probably won't review everyone of them, because with old age becomes laziness (and because I want to rush to the next chapter XD).

*bows* I love this story. Thank you for writing it!


Name: LadyGIR (Signed) · Date: 25/06/12 - 11:52 am · For: Episode 2: Life as I know it; a Horrible Short Term Agreement
She fell asleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep!? Into the frootloops with you, you dastardly sleeper you! Those dream things are sooooo confusing! I wanna know what they are! Her mom annoys me -.-

Author's Response: Wow! I really wasn't expecting anymore reviews on this after it was over! I mean, wow, thank you so much for the two reviews you've already left on here. It's really cool to see a new reader on here even after it's finished!! I'm glad you are enjoying it so far, and yes, Ross's mom is meant to annoy lol Thanks again for reading!!


Name: LadyGIR (Signed) · Date: 25/06/12 - 11:49 am · For: Episode 1: Knock out Girl
THIEF! She a total thief! Yeeeeees! And BWAH!? You on the topity tensy listy thingy! I likea that freaky flashback slash dreamish thing she had, it was real neat :D


Name: CricketFighter (Signed) · Date: 23/06/12 - 09:08 am · For: Episode 100: Good News
Awesome awesome awesome! I finally got to read all the way to the end of this, very awesome stuff! I'm kind of sad about the ending, but I know that there is a part two, so it's all good!!

Thanks for posting this!! It was a really fun, emotional, and crazy ride!!


Name: CricketFighter (Signed) · Date: 22/06/12 - 09:45 pm · For: Episode 93: Life Moves Forward
Aw Choukan is so cute! He gets so excited over the little things, and that makes him really lovable, I think!

Okay, let's see if I can make it to the end of this before the night is over!!


Name: CricketFighter (Signed) · Date: 22/06/12 - 08:50 pm · For: Episode 90: My Vendetta
Well, I spent most of today reading this story and, goodness! It takes a long time to go through this!!

I didn't want to miss anything, so I read slow, but it was hard too because it was exciting XD

Anywho, I really like this chapter, and I like how everyone interacted in it. I kind of felt like I was watching a movie, maybe, or part of one :P Anyway, really really good stuff!!

Can't wait to get some more done!!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/06/12 - 07:12 pm · For: Acknowledgments
I read this chapter way back when you posted it. Bet ya didn't know that. I didn't think I was worthy enough to be mentioned in this story because I stopped after, what, two or three chapters? But now I at least feel like I somewhat deserve it. It just took me a lot of extra time to do so. Though you definitely deserve every last one of those reviews and more.

Now, finally, on to the sequel.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/06/12 - 07:08 pm · For: Episode 100: Good News
I think the only reason I'm not completely and totally dumbfounded is because of the fact that I've seen her picture and the banner, so yeah.....

Wow. It's so hard to believe this is the end. I must say I am so happy there is a sequel to this for two reasons. A) I have to read more. And B)......

If it wasn't for that sequel, my resolve to read every last one of these chapters would have steeled. If there wasn't one, I wouldn't have discovered my absolute love for this story and every single characters in it. If it wasn't for the sequel, I wouldn't be saying thank you from the bottom of my heart for writing such a mind blowing story that you actually finished.

So, I believe you know how strongly I love this right now. I love Ross, I love Zabuza now more than I ever would have before, I love the joy reading this brought, and I love every single story you've written.

Really, I have nothing else I can think to say besides thank you.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/06/12 - 06:55 pm · For: Episode 99: Swing Set
Holy cow. I only have one chapter left. It's so hard to believe, though.....

I love Choukan, just as everyone else seems to. And I love seeing all the happiness and joy and peace. And speaking of swing sets, my family recently put one up. It was hilarious to watch. Okay, I'm on to my last chapter. Wow. I still find that hard to believe.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/06/12 - 06:46 pm · For: Episode 98: Oil Base
I was wondering if he'd ever meet Lee after seeing his appearance in the bingo book (what? I can't resist looking at your pictures!). I guess he does. And I loved the art thing. It seems to just tie into her character very well. And I'm sure her picture was absolutely amazing.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/06/12 - 06:39 pm · For: Episode 97: Homework
I'm going to love seeing Choukan in the next story. He's officially one of my favorites of this one. I find it so cute when he hangs our with Kiba or Konohamaru. Ooh. Maybe Kiba will be his jonin instructor. Doubtful, but still a fun thought XD. And ooh. A babysitter. I wonder who it is? Someone we know or someone random?


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/06/12 - 06:31 pm · For: Episode 96: A Little Life
Sheesh. I think I'm going to have this cheesy grin stuck on my face before the end of the story. I loved this, though, and am so glad that little Choukan is in the Academy. I was a little worried there. And so, I only have a few chapters left. I guess I'm both sad and happy about that..... I must read on!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/06/12 - 06:19 pm · For: Episode 95: Develop
I love how tough Ross is. It reminds me why I love spunky, strong characters with attitude XD. Anyway, this was a great chapter and extremely cute. I loved seeing Choukan so happy. It's like they've all become one big happy family. I am so glad there's a sequel. I die if there wasn't.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/06/12 - 06:12 pm · For: Episode 94: A Day like Today
Ahh. This was so cute. I loved it so very, very much. It's always so heartwarming seeing family type of moments. I love it. I also can't wait to see more of it. But, of course, there has to be some type of problem *sigh*.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/06/12 - 06:06 pm · For: Episode 93: Life Moves Forward
I seem to have this kinda sad-happy smile with every chapter now. Everything is happy yet sad at the same time. I'm glad that Zabuza left them something to live on. It'll help them a lot. And now, she'll strive until he comes back. Like she said, love moves on. And what a life she has.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/06/12 - 05:59 pm · For: Episode 92: Angel’s Breath
I was nearly crying when Ross said she forgives her mother. It truly shows how much she's grown. You know, I really wanna meet her. I have a feeling she would make a great friend.

This story really is drawing to a nice close. I'm glad to see Ross seems to have helped so many people in so many ways. Wow, I just absolutely love this.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/06/12 - 05:47 pm · For: Episode 91: Family Feud
I was crying while reading this. It's just so sad, and it made me love Ross so so so so much that I wanna go into this world just to hug her to death. I love this character, and nothing will change that. I also love her toughness, and I love imagining her with Zabuza's sword. Really, she is now among my top 5 favorite characters of other people. I must say, I'm so very, very glad I read this.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/06/12 - 05:37 pm · For: Episode 90: My Vendetta
That last paragraph is among my top five favorite.s I absolutely loved it! It was such a great way to end this. And I have to wonder why they'd be after Ross. I think I'm just forgetting who the Hisames are. Oh well.

This was a great chapter. I found everyone trying to help her very touching, and it also showed how loved she was and how many people she'd helped. It shows that she'll be helped through her time without Zabuza. Now I must read more!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/06/12 - 05:24 pm · For: Episode 89: A Letter from Home
What the... She's dead? She's really dead? How could you do that to poor Mikan and Choukan! I mean, you made me fear for her life with the kidnapping, now she's dead, and Choukan is orphaned.

I guess I'm happy that Ross gets to take him in, but I'm still so sad. I guess I'll just have to read on and see how this turns out.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/06/12 - 05:14 pm · For: Episode 88: Young Shinobi
I laughed my head off at Jiraiya's last comment. It's so true, though. It's sad to see Zabuza having to leave T_T.

But I know he comes back, so I can't be too sad! I can't wait to read on, and I can't wait to see how it officially ends.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/06/12 - 04:47 pm · For: Episode 87: Proximity
I felt weird reading this....... Then again, I've read it in books, so I guess I've just adapted. I guess this had to happen, though, seeing as Ross does have his child.

I feel sad that Ross is going to have to lose Zabuza, and yet, at the same time, it has that closing feeling as well. So great job, DDTD.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/06/12 - 04:38 pm · For: Episode 86: After the Thunder
Hehe. I already know there's a sequel, so haha! That news doesn't affect me XD.

Anyway, I really enjoyed this look into her mind. She has changed a lot. It makes me think dying was the best thing for her. It really makes the story feel like it's drawing to the end. And Zabuza.....

YOU ARE SUCH A CREEPER!!!!!


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