Reviews For In Front of the Walnut Tree
Name: Lizard (Signed) · Date: 06/10/11 - 11:42 pm · For: Chapter 1.
Oooh my goodness. I love how you started this off!
This intro is definitely heartwarming, just thinking about what it'll be like when everyone's healing after the war.
I already know I'm going to enjoy this story a lot. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 05/10/11 - 05:13 pm · For: Chapter 7
Ah, I've missed this story! It's so cute! Yamato's feelings for Satomi really make me smile, as he seems so clueless as to what it is he actually feels. And Satomi is equally cute, I really love those two together :) Haha, Setsuke is jealous of a little kid. That's so funny XD
Great job on this update! It was awesome! Keep up the good work with your writing!
Author's Response: Aww, I'm glad you have! I missed it just as much. :) Thanks for reviewing! :)
Name: freckledginger (Signed) · Date: 02/08/11 - 10:58 am · For: Chapter 6
I love this story. I think it's really adorable how instead of making Yamato and Satomi fall in love instantly, their feelings are slowly growing for each other and they don't really notice it.
I hope you update soon, I'd love to see what happens next!
Also, I absolutely love Setsuke. He reminds me so much of my OC Kei. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/07/11 - 09:55 pm · For: Chapter 6
Nice! Yamato is slowly realizing his feelings for Satomi, and it's going very well. I like your pace in this story. And the different points of view are always fun. Especially Setsuke. That was probably the funniest part. 'Ooh cupid, you're back in business', I nearly laughed my butt off.
Great work with this chapter. It's really going very well. Keep up the incredible work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 22/06/11 - 07:41 pm · For: Chapter 5
Aww, Yamato's all flustered because Satomi is good with kids. :D
Yup, I really do love Setsuke, haha, I can't help it! But Yamato and Satomi are slowly starting to grow feelings for one another, so things are going good. Slow and steady, yet fun and interesting. Great job so far! Keep up the awesome work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/06/11 - 04:17 pm · For: Chapter 4.
Excellent! I love this so far, it's already caught my interest! You're doing very well with your characters, and I do commend you on attempting a gradual romance, rather than the speedy one. Slower relationships are always more fun to read.... even if they are pain to write, trust me, I know ;) But you're really doing well so far.
But I just have to say... Setsuke is my favorite character :D He acts just like a brother to Satomi, I think its so cute and hilarious at the same time.
Great work with this story so far, I really am enjoying this. Keep up the amazing work, you're doing awesomely so far!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/06/11 - 03:44 pm · For: Chapter 2.
*nods head* Much much better. She's not a Mary-Sue, which is a great improvement and a huge relief. You did very well creating her character, so congrats to you.
The prologue set up the story very nicely. And it is cool to read a story that is set after the war, so it should be very interesting to see how things go. I especially liked this chapter because of all the other OCs. They all mesh into a very interesting group of people. I look forward to seeing how they work with each other.
Overall, nice start. I can't wait to see where this story goes, so keep up the good work with this!
Author's Response: Thank you! It was actually your review on my first fanfic that, for a lack of a better word, inspired me to create Satomi. Its weird because it took me about a week to create Harumi, which was the Mary Sue in my first fanfic, but it only took me about an hour to create Satomi. But I think its safe to say that it was easier for me to create a character off of actual people, then a "perfect" one. Also, I have a lot of things planned for the two groups for sure, especially Herupu. C; thank you again for the feedback!