Reviews For Naruto GX
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/06/11 - 07:14 am · For: Ezra and Yuki are a sweet tag-team! The Truth Behind Sakura!
*Fist pumps* Sakura's good again. I just hoped nothing comes to screw things up...... This is an awesome chapter, Theez. I can't wait to continue. Actually, I'm about to, so, yeah.... GREAT STORY!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/06/11 - 06:38 am · For: Yuki see's her parents! The Afterlife is a small world!
Dang. It's too hard not to update every chapter. They're all so awesome. It's so cool that you had DBZ come into this story. DBZ is, as I've said before, AWESOME. It's not as awesome your story is turning out to be, though.
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 16/06/11 - 08:58 pm · For: Chapter 1: Memories
i dunno if u hv noticed...
but i posted a OC
u missed it i guess -.-
cn u plz scroll down n add my OC, plz?
ty ^.^
Author's Response: Kazuki is in, he was just added later in the story. Don't worry!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/06/11 - 08:42 pm · For: Chapter 26: Hiashi as Evil as Ever! The New Curse Mark.
I love this Ezra and Yuki romance thing. This chapter was extra awesome because of.... well, everything. I can't wait to read more (but for now I must go to bed T_T). It's just plain awesomeness and coolness wrapped up in one.
Author's Response: Thanks..........Sorry you have to go to bed. I like the fact that you like this! Thanks!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/06/11 - 07:26 pm · For: Chapter 23: Yuki is an Epic Fighter! Hero Vs Wolf!
Finally some warmth from under that ice. Man, I need to start reading faster if I want to keep up with your updates. I really want to get to all the new ocs. Not that I don't like Yuki, because she's awesome, but because I'm eager to see how you made Hitomi.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 16/06/11 - 06:56 pm · For: Ezra Has A New Mission: Bring Peace To The Universe!
Wow! I am really loving where this story is going! My sister hasn't caught up yet, so she hasn't seen her OC. But I will speak for her and say that she was completely awesome! I was gonna tell you that you could change her up a bit, since I also noticed that Suki was a lot like Ezra. But I really like how you portrayed her, and I know Demon Fox would too. Excellent work!
And of course, all of the OCs were fantastic! I'm so excited to see where this story is going! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thanks! I noticed how much alike the two OCs were, and used that to my advantage. Thanks!
Name: Demon Fox (Signed) · Date: 15/06/11 - 06:27 pm · For: OC's invitation!
Hi! I'm silverwolf1213's younger sister, and she told me you were still accepting OCs into your story. I'd love to be apart of it if you would let me!
Name [first and last]*: Suki Takahashi
Age*: 16
Gender*: Female
.Rank*: Jounin
Series [Yugioh or Naruto, or both.]*: Naruto
Family [can't be Jaden's sibling or parent]*: She only lives with her grandma (her name is Izumi) because her parents divorced and neither wanted to take her.
History* [Life story]: At the age of 5, her parents divorced. Due to many legal actions and arguments, the result ended up being that neither of her parents took nor wanted her. Suki is convinced that her parents did not love her at all, even from the beginning, and she really only lets her grandmother be close to her. From then on, she trained to be a strong ninja so people would respect her.
She has small difficulties with letting people close to her, because after her parents abandoned her, she feels like no one could love her. Once she makes friends though, she becomes easily attached, which can be a bad thing.
Appearence* [Picture or description, I don't care.....]: Brown shoulder-length hair that is usually kept down, deep brown eyes, lightly tanned skin. I guess whatever dorm you stick her in, that's the jacket she wears.
Crush [can't be Naruto, Hinata, Ezra, or Sasuke.]: Haha, yeah, my sister told me about how Ezra and Yuki dated only for Ezra to be heartbroken. So I don't really care, can be anyone.
Transformations* [Super Form or not, only for the Naruto series people.]: She has water-type jutsu, so she can turn into a Water Goddess (able to control water amazingly well, like water in the air, ground, lakes, whatever).
Duel Monsters Deck* [Can't have Synchro's, and it can be fanmade, just say, Fanmade]: Fanmade: anything to do with water-types
Goal* [Like the dream a person has, like Naruto wants to become Hokage]: To be the most skilled water-user/dueler in both the Naruto world and Yu-Gi-Oh world.
I haven't gotten the chance to read this story yet, but I really wanted to join. So I hope you'll put me in!
Author's Response: She sounds like Ezra.........a bit......... You know, how Ezra isn't wanted except by his brother, sister, and mother. But you aren't to late! Nice character, you have Silverwolf1213's talent at coming up with cool Characters [although I like a lot of the Character's in this.] Thanks!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 15/06/11 - 07:20 am · For: Chapter 22: Introducing, Yuki Ookami!
I've decided I shall review if the chapter is either really good or has no reviews, so I'm reviewing this one. It's a great chapter, Theez. I totally forgot about Blair until this chapter, but then I remembered the duel after reading this. It's so awesome I can't wait to read about my character.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/06/11 - 03:10 am · For: Danger Lurks, and this time, it's not Hiashi!
Oh wow. It seems things are getting more serious. I'm so excited, I can't wait! And wow about Kazuki, man, is he snotty. Did shadow4000 really make him like that, my goodness. Well anyways, I so cannot wait for more because it seems things are getting a lot more epic and exciting.
But I was just wondering: Do you think you'll make this second turn of events into a sequel or keep it like this?
Author's Response: No, Shadow4000 did not make him like that, I didn't get a personality description from him............. To answer your question, I was going to write up to the end of the first year, and then have Naruto GX and my other story meet up for a sequal, and then do the second year...........With the repeating patterns. Thanks!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 14/06/11 - 04:33 pm · For: Chapter 20: Super Ezke VS Super Sora! The True Ultimate Battle!
I know I just reviewed last chapter, but I had to review again to tell you what an awesome chapter this was. The action was so cool. I loved every minute for it. It makes up for scaring me half to death last chapter. I can't wait to continue reading!
Name: Star of the Sky (Signed) · Date: 14/06/11 - 04:06 pm · For: OC's invitation!
Name: Haiku Katsuya
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Rank: Ra
Series: Both
Family: His mother was Reiko Hyuuga from Naruto world and his father was Kazumo Katsuyo from Yu Gi Oh world. He had no siblings. All of them are dead for reason I shall explain.
Transformations: None, unless it would be okay for him to be able to go Super.
History: His maternal grandmother was part of a clan that knew the fact about the travel between worlds and kept people from abusing it in the Naruto world. His father's mother was part of a group that protected it from being abused in the Yu Gi Oh world. They got to know each other because they were the messengers for each group. Then they fell in love and stayed in the Yu Gi Oh world. When they had Haiku, though, they returned to the Naruto world to let him train so he could protect the gate from being abused. His mother's friend was a Uchiha, and before they could leave, they were caught up in the Uchiha massacre. Fearing their son's death, they sent him through the portal, erasing his memory so he wouldn't mourn over them or try something stupid. He was adopted when he was 8 by a pair of people who loved Dueling. They taught him how, and his love for the game instantly formed. Since then he's been training to be the best. When he meets the Naruto gang, though, his memories start to return. Painfully.
Crush: Doesn't matter
Deck: Fanmade- anything that has to do with demons.
Appearance: (disclaimer: not my pic)
http://th05.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2011/127/0/6/katsuya_hiromi_yu_gi_oh_gx_oc_by_eonlegend-d3frmxz.jpg
Personality: He's really nice to everyone, willing to give them a few dozen chances before he realizes that they don't deserve more. He tries his best not to show the pain that has been with him since he was adopted because he doesn't understand it. He tends to daydream a lot and imagine a world of fighting. Sometimes he has sudden personality switches where he's not trusting and cruel. This is caused by the event that happened with Itachi, who he'd befriended. So what happened in his past, even if he doesn't remember, still haunts him. Oh, and just to put it in, he trains fighting wise a lot because he feels the need he doesn't understand to become powerful.
Goal: To get the memories of when he was 7 and under back.
1) I hope I'm not too late.
2) I hope I did a good job. Tell me if there's any corrections needed.
Author's Response: You aren't to late, and you did really well with this Character! Haiku sounds really interesting! Man, I have some serious thinking about a Duel between him and Ezra! Thanks!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 14/06/11 - 09:04 am · For: Chapter 19: The Ultimate Battle! Ezra and Sasuke VS Sora!
First off I must say DBZ is awesome. Okay, now I've gotten that out of my system. *takes in a deep breath*
HOW DARE YOU SCARE ME LIKE THAT!!?? You had me worried sick that Sasuke and Ezra (who I found out I've been calling Erza for the longest time) would actually die. Good job, Theez. You're story is awesome!
Author's Response: DBZ is pretty awesome. Actually, DBZ is in the series! Along with some other series. Sorry to scare you! But it was a pretty awesome comeback, right? Thanks!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 14/06/11 - 06:49 am · For: Chapter 15: The Plan Starts Here! Ezra and Sasuke, go back into confusion!
I know you said not to review every chapter, but I had to tell you that Hitomi's attitude is fine. It's not something I would think of, which makes it even better. Anyway, to your story, it's an awesome story. I absolutely love it.
Author's Response: Thanks! It's okay to review a lot, I just didn't want you to feel like you had to. I'm relieved that you think Hitomi's attitude is fine. Thanks again!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 14/06/11 - 03:39 am · For: What Has Hiashi Been Doing!? And Whats This About Sora And Sakura?
Sora and Sakura, huh? Wow, I didn't see that one coming. Then again, I never see any of your twists coming. And wow, Hiashi is so evil! He killed his wife and was controlling Sora?! Gosh, again, your twists are giving me whiplash. And poor Ezra, he makes me feel really bad that Yuki broke his heart! Ugh... Well, can't wait to see what new things happen in the next chapter! Keep up the good work!
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 14/06/11 - 02:20 am · For: OC's invitation!
Name [first and last]*: Kazuki Ushiro
Age*: 18
Gender*: male
.Rank*: genin
Series : naruto
Family : mei terumi the fifth mizukage's nephew
History* [Life story]: he lost his dad at the age of 2, lives a normal life with his mom n little sis.....
Appearence* [Picture or description, I don't care.....]: Black messy spikes, bright green eyes, fair skin, normal height n built, black tank top with torn sleeves, cargo pants, a yellow stone for a locket(his dad's)
Crush [can't be Naruto, Hinata, Ezra, or Sasuke.]: anybody'll do
Transformations* : gets a tiger's features, with the fangs, tiger instincts, increased muscular build, etc etc yada yada
Duel Monsters Deck* [Can't have Synchro's, and it can be fanmade, just say, Fanmade]: fanmade (light n fire)
Goal* : to bcome like his dad (kohaku ushiro) who saved his whole village with his fire chakra....a hero
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 06:25 pm · For: The New Hitomi! Ezra's New Sword!
So I literally sweatdropped when I read Sasaui's character. I was so surprised and a little shocked that she would make a character be as mean as Hitomi. And then I found out she was joking, and I sighed in relief. Hehe, can't wait for more HitomiXSyrus interplay, that should be mighty interesting indeed. And I'm glad to see Ezra is still improving. Nice work overall, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I had to improvise, since I had no real description of her personality. Sorry about that..............But I loved that chapter, it was so fun to write! Thanks! Oh yeah, and if you want, you can add another OC!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 05:34 pm · For: Chapter 14: Enter, Sora Hyuga!
Yeah, Sora has some seriously bad timing. And I can't believe that the bullies there can be so mean. I want to go into the story just to hit the bullies. I love it, like always. It's just so amazing I can't help but love it.
Author's Response: Har har, how funny, I'm glad you like it. Thanks! Oh, and you don't have to review for every chapter. You could just do a review for every five chapters, that would save time. Thanks again!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 05:25 pm · For: Chapter 13: Ezra and Jaden's Duel's! Syrus got a love letter?
Wow. Even Hinata's family is pretty twisted. And question, if Hiashi had Crolwer give Erza to him, why does he hate him so much? Okay, now to the praise. That was an amazing duel. I can't wait to continue. It's a great story that I love to read.
Author's Response: Because Hinata was a failure, and he wanted someone to abuse, to answer your question. And then Hiashi just doesn't like him much. I loved writing those duels to, and thanks!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 05:05 pm · For: Chapter 12: Ezra and Sasuke's confusion! They are.... okay with it?!
That was amazing. I can't wait to read more. I'll be up all night reading so that I can get to the new chapter with Hitomi. I'm so excited!
Author's Response: Thanks! I had no idea what her personality was, because I didn't see it, so I had to improvise. She is an insult joker, and she makes Hinata cry, but apologizes. Oh yeah, and she jokes about Ezra's sky blue hair being ugly as well, but thats it. Again, thanks!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 11:21 am · For: Chapter 11: Hinata's Care! Ezra's landed in.... Slifer?!
Yeah! This chapter is up. And it was amazing. I'm so glad you posted these again. I was hoping I'd be able to read more soon, and I can now. I love it like usual. Keep up the awesome work.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 08:33 am · For: Chapter 1: Memories
I just noticed I put Tenshi instead of Hitomi. I've been making so many ocs lately I'm getting the names confused.
Author's Response: I was about to ask who Tenshi was, thanks! Depends on how the story go's............My goal is that while Ezra is still in the Academy that he duel's Harro. But oh well, thanks for reviewing!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 08:18 am · For: Chapter 10: Duel Academy: Entrance exam!
Sweet! I'm so glad this chapters up. The duel was so sweet. I want to say I want Tenshi to duel him, but I'm afraid she'd lose to fast..... Anyway, I can't wait until you post the next chapter. I'm tempted to skip it just so I can keep reading, but I shall force myself to remain patient. I'm not sure how long that will last, so please post again soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! Writing Duel's is fun, but re-writing this one was a pain......But I'm glad you liked it! I'll start re-writing the next chapter right away!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 06:50 am · For: Chapter 9: Hinata Explodes! Sakura's Twisted Plan!
Once again, exaggerated, but it's still awesome. I also think Sakura and Lee are pretty twisted in you fanfic, but as I said, it's your fanfic. You make the characters as you want them. I love it because it gives a new twist to everything.
Author's Response: Haha, keep reading because the reason that they are twisted comes far from now! I know that they are pretty OOC, and thats okay............Thanks for all of the reviews, and chapter ten is back up!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 06:40 am · For: Chapter 8: Naruto's Decision!
Well, this group of people is seriously going to put a twist on things. I really liked this chapter. I can't wait until Naruto and Hinata get together (which I only know because I began to read chapter 12 when the others weren't up.) I hope that the GX world doesn't get destroyed with the people going there.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 06:33 am · For: Chapter 7: A Broken Heart
It's a good chapter, but I think that the reaction was a little exaggerated. I'm sorry, but that's what I think. Other than that, though, it was wonderful.