Reviews For Naruto GX
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/06/11 - 03:41 pm · For: Gaara can Duel? Strike Of the Sand!
Gaara can duel?! Wow, his entrance surprised me, and his card did as well. That's pretty cool that there is a card of his demon. And now there are four more Shadow Riders; I cannot wait to see those duels! Oh, and the little bit about Suki and Jaden made me laugh :D
Keep up the great work with this story! This is really good, and I love how much it has improved. Excellent job!
Author's Response: Thanks! Gaara can duel, that it true. Although, he was a last minute decision [I hate writing about Duel's that were already made up by the Anime people.] Thanks!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 27/06/11 - 07:17 pm · For: Danger Lurks, and this time, it's not Hiashi!
Ooh. One of my favorite parts in Yu Gi Oh GX is coming up. And great job with this chapter. I loved it. Your story is just too darn amazing.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 27/06/11 - 07:10 pm · For: What Has Hiashi Been Doing!? And Whats This About Sora And Sakura?
Wow. Never would have guessed Sakura and Sora. It'll be confusing if Sora (from KH) enters the picture..... Oh well. I know you can manage if that does happen. And you can tell I barely know Zelda because I had to look up Ganon's name on google. Anyway, great chapter. I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in so long.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 27/06/11 - 05:50 pm · For: Hiashi Is the Worst Father Ever. Here's why..........
You don't update for so long, and then I come back to see TWO updated chapters! And they were well worth the wait too! Great! I was so impressed, really. So...Jaden and Suki, huh? Haha, can't wait to see what you do with that ;P The duel was awesome, and the drama had me in suspense, as usual. Keep up the amazing work with this story, it's awesome!
Author's Response: Sorry for not updating, I was at overnight camp................. Jaden and Suki................ I don't know where that'll go. Thanks again!
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 27/06/11 - 08:42 am · For: Ezra and Suki VS Camula!
nice chapter!! :D
i was just thinking...
make kaz's personality fun loving kind of...
he is friendly with everybody other than ezra...
for some reason.. he just dosen't seem to like ezra..
otherwise he's kool...
Author's Response: Thanks! Cool personality. Sort of like Android 16 to Goku. Again, Thanks!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 18/06/11 - 06:45 pm · For: Chapter 1: Memories
Hitomi's personality:
Since you already had her like this, she jokes around, sometimes sounding mean, but that's the only time she is mean, so she expects people to know she's joking. She trains every second she can to try and beat her brother. When you talk about dueling, she can talk someone's ear off. She'll talk to her cards (doesn't mean she has to have a duel spirit. she just talks to them because she had to take care of her siblings for so long she never had too many friends). She's more on the happy side and likes to duel.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/06/11 - 01:37 pm · For: Ezra's New Jutsu!
*screams loudly into the pillow* Whoo, okay, I got that out of my system. I had to make sure Demon Fox didn't hear me, otherwise this amazing chapter would be spoiled for her.
I can't believe you came up with this. I was already so surprised with each twist that you make, but this tops them all I think. Poor Ezra, a fifth parent who doesn't love him? That sucks.... But it really does tie in Suki's past very nicely, giving it so much more depth and purpose, and it gives more meaning to Suki and Ezra's relationship.
Huh, thank goodness the two never listened to their friends when they tried to set Suki and Ezra up together. Talk about awkward...
Now I definitely can't wait to see what is going to happen next. Things are definitely getting more interesting. Keep up the great work, I really do love this story!
Author's Response: That would have been awkward.... But oh well. Thanks!
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 18/06/11 - 09:35 am · For: Ezra's New Jutsu!
hehe.....
a
a sudden twist... :P
true siblings eh?
nice!! :D
just askin... wen ezra goes to Dbz n bakugan world... can he take kaz(kazuki) with him? plz...
thanx :D
Author's Response: He will be. Don't worry.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 18/06/11 - 04:45 am · For: The New Hitomi! Ezra's New Sword!
I can't really say anything bad about the way she was joking because I'll do that sometimes -_-'. Yeah, well, great chapter. I love Hitomi. I think she's awesome. Would it help you if I went ahead and gave her a personality or would you prefer just sticking to what you've got?
Author's Response: It would help a good amount. I might just stick to what I've got because the story is almost over, but she is in the sequal. I have no idea what to call it because it isn't written yet. But once I've finished the Shadow Rider saga, I'll be doing the one with more DBZ and Zelda and Kingdom Hearts, and a bit of Yugioh and Naruto, but not a whole lot. Thanks!
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 18/06/11 - 02:58 am · For: Chapter 1: Memories
:P
sorry i forgot to put kazuki's personality....
series: both
personality: Fun-loving, happy-go-lucky, loud, talkative, irritating...
Author's Response: Thanks! I had to make up what was going on in his head, so now, I don't! Thanks!
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 18/06/11 - 02:53 am · For: Danger Lurks, and this time, it's not Hiashi!
lolz
wats with kaz being so egoistic :P
n cool! so kaz n ezra r gonna duel :D
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 18/06/11 - 02:30 am · For: Ezra Has A New Mission: Bring Peace To The Universe!
Hey hey cool!
thanx for adding Kaz.... :)
i liked his personality :D
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/06/11 - 08:51 pm · For: Christmas Morning!
T_T I'm so happy he got a present that I'm crying. Now I don't have to hunt you down. It's a great and happy chapter. I loved every second of it. I've always loved Christmas things, and this is one of my favorite Christmas-moments-from-stories ever! This was amazing. I really hate sleep because it makes me not be able to read the next chapter. And it's the one with Hitomi, too =(
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/06/11 - 08:25 pm · For: The Christmas Party!
Ezra is so cool. He's so nice to everyone. I'm glad he's at least having fun despite his horrible past. Great duel, by the way. I feel like I should start telling you that since I always think it but never voice it. This chapter was amazing like the rest. I'm so glad I only have one more chapter before I can read about my oc.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 17/06/11 - 05:24 pm · For: Now For The Next Shadow Game Person.........Camula!
Oh man, HUGE plot development for Suki. I'm gonna have to keep my mouth shut at home before Demon Fox finds out, she's still on like chapter 10. *sweatdrop* Yeah, it'll take her a while before she actually reads about Suki. So I'll just tell you that once again, you have done great work with her character. Nice job!
I definitely can't wait to see what happens, this is getting so good, what with all of the other OCs and the main plot. Keep up the great work, I'm so excited!
Author's Response: Don't worry, it'll be fine. Trust me, the next chapter will be a twist. Thanks!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/06/11 - 02:13 pm · For: Christmas Is Almost Here! Ezra Is Finally Home!
Not ONE christmas present? Heck, just have someone kick Hiashi's butt if he tries to interfere. Ezra can just go Super and kick him through the portal. I feel bad for Ezra. He's had such a hard life. I really hope he gets a present this year. If he doesn't I may just have to hunt you down.
Author's Response: Okay, don't worry, he might..................Thanks!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/06/11 - 02:06 pm · For: Ezra Has Changed!? Darkness Flows In His Heart!
Awesome! That's the only word I can think of when I read this chapter. I loved the fight scene. I'm glad Ezra's back. I was afraid they'd lose for a second, but then wonderful Trunks helped. I hope that Ezra's sadness goes away soon....
Author's Response: Trunks is wonderful, isn't he? I thought this chapter was awesome to....................Ezra's sadness goes away, I can tell you now. Thanks!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/06/11 - 01:56 pm · For: The Truth Behind Ren!
HOLY CRUD! I was right....? Wow, maybe that feeling wasn't as stupid as I thought. You surprised me by making it be what I thought it would be (even though I thought the feeling was stupid but now know it's not). This chapter was wonderful. I wonder how this will unfold.
Author's Response: Thanks! Sorry I didn't respond................I didn't want to give it away..................But now that you know that you were right, I have no guilt! Thanks!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/06/11 - 01:50 pm · For: Hinata and Naruto Have Gone To The Next Level! A Switch Color Transformation?!
Can you, by chance, have Hitomi throw Hiashi into a volcano? And add Sora to that pain vest while your at it? And fights fair? Hah. He forced Hinata to act like she liked him by threatening to kill Naruto. Fight fair my butt.
Okay, now that I'm done grumbling to myself, great job! I hope Ezra will come back soon (and that this feeling about Ezra and Ren goes away soon. I don't know why, but I keep thinking they're the same person. Stupid weird feelings). Anyway, I loved how in Super form Hinata and Naruto switched hair colors. I actually laughed a bit. Okay, I'm off to figure out what the truth about Ren is.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/06/11 - 01:39 pm · For: Sasuke Can't Fight Sora Without Ezra? Ren is the Perfect Substitute!
Yeah, that feeling's getting stronger. I wish I could get rid of it since he probably has nothing to do with Ezra. Especially not the way I'm thinking. Anyway, I'm really glad Ren stepped in. I thought Sasuke would be sent to the hospital. Again...... Great work on this chapter, Theez. Like I expected, it's amazingly wonderful.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/06/11 - 12:58 pm · For: A New Person! The Mysterious Ren.
Why is it I have a strange feeling Ren has something to do with Ezra. Oh well, probably just a totally dumb, random feeling. I loved this chapter. It, like the story, is amazingly awesome. I think I'd die without it.
Name: krina (Signed) · Date: 17/06/11 - 12:42 pm · For: OC's invitation!
Name: Krina Nagumi
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Rank: Chunin and Slifer
Series: Naruto
Family: Kohana and Satoshi Nagumi are her parents. She has a twin brother named Kosuke.
Transformations: None, unless you can think up a cool demon transformation.
History: Her family moved around a lot before settling in Konoha. When there, something seemed to go wrong with Kosuke. He started acting violent and merciless. One time, one a mission (they're on the same team), he attacked all of them. His strength was so great that they would have died if it wasn't for their sensei. After that Kosuke disappeared. They found out later it was because a curse placed on their family generations ago that the purest of hearts in the clan will turn into monsters. Since then she's searched for a cure for her brother. And always fearing she'd turn into a monster like him.
Crush: Whoever you want
Personality: She's very reserved and keeps others out of her heart. Krina's afraid to show the pain that's within her. She's really sweet to her friends and helps others when needed.
Deck: Fanmade - Bird type monsters
Appearance: (disclaimer: I don't own this)
http://i896.photobucket.com/albums/ac168/Aokidanza/Other/Anime/Girls/tomboy-2.jpg
Goal: To find a cure for her brother.
Author's Response: Nice Character! I'll try to include her as best I can.......Since it's kinda late, and I need to start wrapping up the story.........But I'll try my best! Don't worry, I'll get her in, I just need a nice set up. Thanks!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/06/11 - 12:28 pm · For: Where the Heck is Ezra? What happened?
=O A chapter with zero reviews? Well, I'll just have to fix that. It's short, but it's really good. I can't believe Sasuke would be cruel enough to blame Yuki like that. It just wasn't nice. She can't help it if she falls for someone else.... Oh well. Great chapter! I really hope Ezra comes back soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! Isn't Sasuke cruel? It was sort of hard to write a few chapter's that didn't have Ezra in them........But thats fine..............Yuki is sort of to blame, but I guess you're right..........Thanks!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/06/11 - 07:39 am · For: Hinata's not Buying it! Ezra Can't Hide Everything!
Uh oh. This can't be good. What's wrong with Ezra? I'm kinda glad I waited to read this because that means I can just go ahead and read to figure out. This story is so awesome I don't think I can just review every few chapters. There's too many chapters that have great things to review about. This story is just sooo amazing. Oh, and I think when Goku says HAAAAA he has one more "A" at the end =)
Author's Response: Oh, you'll see.................And thanks for the tip for when Goku does his KamehameHAAAAAAA!!!!!!!! :). Again, thanks!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/06/11 - 07:26 am · For: Trunks is Baffled! Things weren't supposed to happen so quickly!
T_T How could she? After everything Ezra did for her, how could Yuki break his heart like that. It's just not cool. I hope that Ezra ends up with someone good. Well, we know he does because of his kids, but still, I have to worry because there's so many twists in your story.
Other than Yuki breaking Ezra's heart and making me want to teleport into the story and whack her, I loved it. You're an awesome and creative writer, Theez.