Reviews For Naruto GX
Name: krina (Signed) · Date: 17/06/11 - 12:42 pm · For: OC's invitation!
Name: Krina Nagumi
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Rank: Chunin and Slifer
Series: Naruto
Family: Kohana and Satoshi Nagumi are her parents. She has a twin brother named Kosuke.
Transformations: None, unless you can think up a cool demon transformation.
History: Her family moved around a lot before settling in Konoha. When there, something seemed to go wrong with Kosuke. He started acting violent and merciless. One time, one a mission (they're on the same team), he attacked all of them. His strength was so great that they would have died if it wasn't for their sensei. After that Kosuke disappeared. They found out later it was because a curse placed on their family generations ago that the purest of hearts in the clan will turn into monsters. Since then she's searched for a cure for her brother. And always fearing she'd turn into a monster like him.
Crush: Whoever you want
Personality: She's very reserved and keeps others out of her heart. Krina's afraid to show the pain that's within her. She's really sweet to her friends and helps others when needed.
Deck: Fanmade - Bird type monsters
Appearance: (disclaimer: I don't own this)
http://i896.photobucket.com/albums/ac168/Aokidanza/Other/Anime/Girls/tomboy-2.jpg
Goal: To find a cure for her brother.
Author's Response: Nice Character! I'll try to include her as best I can.......Since it's kinda late, and I need to start wrapping up the story.........But I'll try my best! Don't worry, I'll get her in, I just need a nice set up. Thanks!
Name: Demon Fox (Signed) · Date: 15/06/11 - 06:27 pm · For: OC's invitation!
Hi! I'm silverwolf1213's younger sister, and she told me you were still accepting OCs into your story. I'd love to be apart of it if you would let me!
Name [first and last]*: Suki Takahashi
Age*: 16
Gender*: Female
.Rank*: Jounin
Series [Yugioh or Naruto, or both.]*: Naruto
Family [can't be Jaden's sibling or parent]*: She only lives with her grandma (her name is Izumi) because her parents divorced and neither wanted to take her.
History* [Life story]: At the age of 5, her parents divorced. Due to many legal actions and arguments, the result ended up being that neither of her parents took nor wanted her. Suki is convinced that her parents did not love her at all, even from the beginning, and she really only lets her grandmother be close to her. From then on, she trained to be a strong ninja so people would respect her.
She has small difficulties with letting people close to her, because after her parents abandoned her, she feels like no one could love her. Once she makes friends though, she becomes easily attached, which can be a bad thing.
Appearence* [Picture or description, I don't care.....]: Brown shoulder-length hair that is usually kept down, deep brown eyes, lightly tanned skin. I guess whatever dorm you stick her in, that's the jacket she wears.
Crush [can't be Naruto, Hinata, Ezra, or Sasuke.]: Haha, yeah, my sister told me about how Ezra and Yuki dated only for Ezra to be heartbroken. So I don't really care, can be anyone.
Transformations* [Super Form or not, only for the Naruto series people.]: She has water-type jutsu, so she can turn into a Water Goddess (able to control water amazingly well, like water in the air, ground, lakes, whatever).
Duel Monsters Deck* [Can't have Synchro's, and it can be fanmade, just say, Fanmade]: Fanmade: anything to do with water-types
Goal* [Like the dream a person has, like Naruto wants to become Hokage]: To be the most skilled water-user/dueler in both the Naruto world and Yu-Gi-Oh world.
I haven't gotten the chance to read this story yet, but I really wanted to join. So I hope you'll put me in!
Author's Response: She sounds like Ezra.........a bit......... You know, how Ezra isn't wanted except by his brother, sister, and mother. But you aren't to late! Nice character, you have Silverwolf1213's talent at coming up with cool Characters [although I like a lot of the Character's in this.] Thanks!
Name: Star of the Sky (Signed) · Date: 14/06/11 - 04:06 pm · For: OC's invitation!
Name: Haiku Katsuya
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Rank: Ra
Series: Both
Family: His mother was Reiko Hyuuga from Naruto world and his father was Kazumo Katsuyo from Yu Gi Oh world. He had no siblings. All of them are dead for reason I shall explain.
Transformations: None, unless it would be okay for him to be able to go Super.
History: His maternal grandmother was part of a clan that knew the fact about the travel between worlds and kept people from abusing it in the Naruto world. His father's mother was part of a group that protected it from being abused in the Yu Gi Oh world. They got to know each other because they were the messengers for each group. Then they fell in love and stayed in the Yu Gi Oh world. When they had Haiku, though, they returned to the Naruto world to let him train so he could protect the gate from being abused. His mother's friend was a Uchiha, and before they could leave, they were caught up in the Uchiha massacre. Fearing their son's death, they sent him through the portal, erasing his memory so he wouldn't mourn over them or try something stupid. He was adopted when he was 8 by a pair of people who loved Dueling. They taught him how, and his love for the game instantly formed. Since then he's been training to be the best. When he meets the Naruto gang, though, his memories start to return. Painfully.
Crush: Doesn't matter
Deck: Fanmade- anything that has to do with demons.
Appearance: (disclaimer: not my pic)
http://th05.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2011/127/0/6/katsuya_hiromi_yu_gi_oh_gx_oc_by_eonlegend-d3frmxz.jpg
Personality: He's really nice to everyone, willing to give them a few dozen chances before he realizes that they don't deserve more. He tries his best not to show the pain that has been with him since he was adopted because he doesn't understand it. He tends to daydream a lot and imagine a world of fighting. Sometimes he has sudden personality switches where he's not trusting and cruel. This is caused by the event that happened with Itachi, who he'd befriended. So what happened in his past, even if he doesn't remember, still haunts him. Oh, and just to put it in, he trains fighting wise a lot because he feels the need he doesn't understand to become powerful.
Goal: To get the memories of when he was 7 and under back.
1) I hope I'm not too late.
2) I hope I did a good job. Tell me if there's any corrections needed.
Author's Response: You aren't to late, and you did really well with this Character! Haiku sounds really interesting! Man, I have some serious thinking about a Duel between him and Ezra! Thanks!
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 14/06/11 - 02:20 am · For: OC's invitation!
Name [first and last]*: Kazuki Ushiro
Age*: 18
Gender*: male
.Rank*: genin
Series : naruto
Family : mei terumi the fifth mizukage's nephew
History* [Life story]: he lost his dad at the age of 2, lives a normal life with his mom n little sis.....
Appearence* [Picture or description, I don't care.....]: Black messy spikes, bright green eyes, fair skin, normal height n built, black tank top with torn sleeves, cargo pants, a yellow stone for a locket(his dad's)
Crush [can't be Naruto, Hinata, Ezra, or Sasuke.]: anybody'll do
Transformations* : gets a tiger's features, with the fangs, tiger instincts, increased muscular build, etc etc yada yada
Duel Monsters Deck* [Can't have Synchro's, and it can be fanmade, just say, Fanmade]: fanmade (light n fire)
Goal* : to bcome like his dad (kohaku ushiro) who saved his whole village with his fire chakra....a hero
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 - 10:09 am · For: OC's invitation!
Name: Hitomi Yamamoto
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Rank: Slifer (since she's in GX, I didn't know what else to put)
Series: Yu Gi Oh GX
Family: Mother: Aiko
Father: Toshiro
Twin Brothers: Taro and Tora
Older brother: Harro
Sister: Yumi
Transformations: None
History: Her parents own a card shop. Her older brother, Harro, is a well known duelist around the world. When she was young, Harro taught her about dueling. Since then she's been improving her skills. She was only now allowed to go to the academy because her parents just now got money.
Crush: Syrus
Deck: Fanmade - Fallen Angels deck. Top four cards are Chaos the Fallen Angel and Holy the Fallen Angel. Chaos is more for attack and Holy is more for defense. Another card is Avenging Angel, the fusion of Chaos and Holy. The last card is Rising Angel Child, which can become Heaven's Angel when you use the Rising Light spell card, but she doesn't get that until later on. All of these but Angel Child were given to her by her brother. She found this rare card in a Fallen Angel's duel pack.
Goal: To beat her brother.
I haven't read the other part of the story, but I was told chapter 50 was the deadline and I wanted to get my character in.
Author's Response: Cool character! Fallen Angels, that is a pretty cool deck. And a crush on Syrus, I did not see that coming, but cool! She sounds a lot like Syrus, since Zane is his older brother, and Harro is her older brother. By the way, can you give me a good description on Harro's deck, I'm planning on some Duel action between Her and Him, and Ezra VS Harro. But if it's the same type of deck, just tell me. I'm re-writing Chapter's ten and eleven today, so don't worry! You'll know what happen's soon enough!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 23/05/11 - 02:49 pm · For: OC's invitation!
Yay, Sora's gone, and all is right with the world! Whoohoo!
And oh my gosh, I started a trend! OCs included, wow! Everyone's doing it now, I feel like such a trendsetter.
Name [first and last]*: Yuki Ookami
Age*: 15
Gender*: Female
Rank*: ANBU
Series [Yugioh or Naruto, or both.]*: Naruto
Family [can't be Jaden's sibling or parent]*: none, they were all killed on missions
History* [Life story]: She was born an only child, and her parents loved her very much. But her parents, as jounin for the Leaf Village, were killed on the same mission trying to defend their village. Yuki was only 4 when her parents died; since that day, she trained to become stronger and make her parents proud. But the burden of her deceased parents still hung on her shoulders greatly, so she joined ANBU at the age of thirteen to kill her emotions and not have to think about her parents.
Hiashi sends Yuki to Duel Academy to blend in, but he wants her to keep and eye on his children (or break Naruto and Hinata up, just something along those lines).
Appearence* [Picture or description, I don't care.....]: She has long black hair that reaches her mid-back. Her eyes are silver. Outfit... whatever dorm you want to put her in, she wears that outfit.
Crush [can't be Naruto, Hinata, Ezra, or Sasuke.]: none, she's heartless :D
Transformations* [Super Form or not, only for the Naruto series people.]: She has the ability to harness the powers of a wolf. She can use certain features, such as just claws, smell, or hearing, or she can change all the way and turn into a full wolf.
Duel Monsters Deck* [Can't have Synchro's, and it can be fanmade, just say, Fanmade]: Idk, a wolf deck? Make them up if you want, I don't care :D
Goal* [Like the dream a person has, like Naruto wants to become Hokage] She just wants to give her life for her duty; she feels that is all her purpose is, since she has no one to care for her.
Everything else, you can totally have fun with. I like the idea, good luck!
Author's Response: Cool OC! And yes, Sora is gone! Well, not forever, I mean, I can't just kill a Character off like that. And yes, you inspired the idea of that on another person, and I saw that and yeah...... But Yuki sounds pretty cool! ANBU is harsh, and at first when Sai was introduced I thought that he was just a jerk, but when I heard about the Foundation I'm like "Oh my gosh that is cruel." Deceased Parents, I can make use of that. Very easily. Yuki seems like a good OC. She'll make a good character for this story! Thanks!