Reviews For Naruto GX
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 06:15 am · For: Chapter 5: Siblingly Love
I love this story. I didn't think I'd liked it, but after forcing myself to finally try to read it, I found out I LOVE it! I'm so glad I try new things sometimes.
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 04/05/11 - 02:45 pm · For: Chapter 5: Siblingly Love
Good chapter I must say! Really great improvement. I've never tried to imagine what Hinata's room would look like, but I like what you did with the walls.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 04/05/11 - 12:36 pm · For: Chapter 5: Siblingly Love
This chapter was a lot better! Good work with your improvement.
This was a longer chapter, so you were able to write more and describe more. The Chidori scene was described well and the intro to new characters was decent.
And the scene with the three siblings was touching. It was sweet to see them all together, and there was quite a breakthrough with Hinata.
Very impressive, I'm happy to see that you are bettering yourself in your writing. The only complaint I would have is to space your sentences. I mean to start a new line when the dialogue switches between people, that way it is easier to see who is talking. But that's it.
A good job well done. Keep on writing, and your improvement will definitely show. I'm happy to see that you are improving. Keep up the good work!