Reviews For Naruto GX
Name: coolninja90skid (Signed) · Date: 20/04/15 - 12:24 pm · For: Chapter 1: Memories
can I be in the story
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 02/07/11 - 03:20 am · For: Chapter 1: Memories
noo... i dnt wanna coz u unnecessary trouble..... dnt Change that chapter... just his deck n future battles... ^_^
n just as urufu-chan said..... cant wait to see hw u end this book n start the nxt one... seriously this series is awesome!!
Author's Response: Haha, already did. :) That's okay, Thanks!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 18/06/11 - 06:45 pm · For: Chapter 1: Memories
Hitomi's personality:
Since you already had her like this, she jokes around, sometimes sounding mean, but that's the only time she is mean, so she expects people to know she's joking. She trains every second she can to try and beat her brother. When you talk about dueling, she can talk someone's ear off. She'll talk to her cards (doesn't mean she has to have a duel spirit. she just talks to them because she had to take care of her siblings for so long she never had too many friends). She's more on the happy side and likes to duel.
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 18/06/11 - 02:58 am · For: Chapter 1: Memories
:P
sorry i forgot to put kazuki's personality....
series: both
personality: Fun-loving, happy-go-lucky, loud, talkative, irritating...
Author's Response: Thanks! I had to make up what was going on in his head, so now, I don't! Thanks!
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 16/06/11 - 08:58 pm · For: Chapter 1: Memories
i dunno if u hv noticed...
but i posted a OC
u missed it i guess -.-
cn u plz scroll down n add my OC, plz?
ty ^.^
Author's Response: Kazuki is in, he was just added later in the story. Don't worry!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 08:33 am · For: Chapter 1: Memories
I just noticed I put Tenshi instead of Hitomi. I've been making so many ocs lately I'm getting the names confused.
Author's Response: I was about to ask who Tenshi was, thanks! Depends on how the story go's............My goal is that while Ezra is still in the Academy that he duel's Harro. But oh well, thanks for reviewing!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 - 03:54 pm · For: Chapter 1: Memories
Other than a few spelling mistakes I saw, it was awesome. You made the same mistake I used to with aloud and allowed. I can't wait to read more. This is very creative and original. I'm so glad you redid these chapters or I'd be hopelessly lost.
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 27/05/11 - 09:56 am · For: Chapter 1: Memories
Just so people know, there are still spots open for OCs. Once I'm done with like Chapter Forty I might have to stop, but if It's a character I'm always happy to accept! Also, they don't have to be good guys, they can be evil if you want!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/05/11 - 07:36 pm · For: Chapter 1: Memories
Since you are allowing OCs to enter, I figured you could probably consider this a joint story. I made joint stories a challenge under my name. You can submit this to my challenge, it's called 'Joint Stories!'
Author's Response: I just did! Thanks for issuing this Challenge!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/05/11 - 10:08 am · For: Chapter 1: Memories
To theez,
I think when the site went down, everything that had been submitted in the last month or so was erased. It happened to one of the chapters for my story, and that had been uploaded in mid-April. From what I've seen, it happened to everyone, but some people haven't noticed it yet.
I'm not an administrator or anything, so I can't guarantee that your work will reappear again. Have you saved your work on your computer or a flash drive? If you have, just paste it back into your story. If you haven't, then I'm sorry to say that you might have to write it again. As I said, I'm not administrator, so I am not entirely sure if you have to rewrite your work or not, I'm merely making assumptions. I know it sucks, but if you want help writing and posting your stuff again, you can ask me if you want. I'd be happy to help you out.
Good luck.
Author's Response: Thanks, that's what I thought to. But at least my latest chapter isn't deleted......... But otherwise, I can rewrite it...... I did like the fights......... but I'll wait and just update on the present for now. I'll try to upload soon!
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 15/05/11 - 04:34 am · For: Chapter 1: Memories
I'm so sorry for everyone who is just reading this. I'm still wondering what happened to my work also.... if someone could help me figure out what happened, please tell me.
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 05/05/11 - 11:24 am · For: Chapter 1: Memories
Hello! This is really interesting. You've got a good story going, but the only problem is
A: spacing
and B: everything is all bunched up and everything is summarized. Instead of telling what happened, you should try to show it. Like instead of saying that Ezra was scared you could show he was scared by showing him walking along the road and getting freaked out when a bunch of people grab him.
I really liked the idea though, and i think i got the gist of it. it seems interesting that Hiashi is his father and he's a brother to Hinata and Hinabi and Sasuke.
BTW: if you go to account info and press reviews recieved you can respond to your reviews personally...
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 04/05/11 - 06:34 pm · For: Chapter 1: Memories
Thank you all for the reviews! I'm so glad that you like it. Thanks for the tip on how to space, Konan. Again, Thanks!
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 04/05/11 - 02:22 pm · For: Chapter 1: Memories
Put < p > (no spaces) in front of a new paragraph to space it out.
Name: Theez (Anonymous) · Date: 02/05/11 - 06:17 pm · For: Chapter 1: Memories
Thanks SilverWolf1213. I can really understand where you are coming from, and I'm not offended at all of what you had said. In fact, I can probably use this to improve the story. Thank you so much. Thanks for the nice review on Ezra, I am glad that you like him. The brother of Sasuke and Hinata was an idea I had from the start. I always liked the idea of someone being able to switch out of Byakugan and Sharingan. Just no one had thought of it [although I did see a character in Naruto Abunai have a Sharingan in one eye, and the other byakugan.] I can see how it is rushed, I just want to get to the Yugioh [although they will stay in the Naruto world for a little longer, a lot of important stuff to the story will happen there.] Again, thank you for that review, and I will use this to help with my writing. Thanks!