Reviews For Vengefull
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/05/11 - 06:43 pm · For: Chapter 28: Troubles
Aww, I love that. That's so cute, they are both the same in that they are able to relate to one another. And I never actually thought Sasuke could feel insecure about himself, I'm glad you pointed that out and put that there. It actually helps the story flow a bit. I liked this chapter, and I look forward to seeing the Chunin Exams. That is going to be epic! I'm so excited, I can't even stand it! Update soon please, and keep up the fantastic work with your stories!
Author's Response: Itz what you would actually expect to be going on behind his rough facade. :) I will update asap. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 05/05/11 - 04:06 am · For: Chapter 27: A Great Night
That was an amazing dinner party! And Naruto finally asked Hinata out! It's about time, darn it! And Sasuke's such a hopeless romantic, it's adorable :D
This was a very steamy chapter. Those passionate kisses were really something.
Good job with this. I continue to be impressed with each new chapter. Keep up the good work, and I hope you update soon!
Author's Response: I will, I'm glad you keep enjoying them. :) Romance and Steam...does life get any better LOL.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 02/05/11 - 03:43 am · For: Chapter 25: Dinner Party Part 1
Ah, I recognize those characters from your previous story. Should have seen that one coming. Nice beginning to the dinner party. And Hinata's outfit looks amazing, by the way! Genius! I really want to continue onto part 2, so please update soon! Oh, glad to hear you got a new computer. Good for you!
Author's Response: Thanx.rnLol, those characterz r based on my real life BFFz (same names). LOL. It makes it easier when you already have a surplus of knowledge on the charcterz. LOL. Creating them is easy as well, but not as much fun when your friends read it. LOL. rnAnd I came up with a simple idea 4 Hinataz look in this scene bc it workz best 4 her. LOL. I will update soon.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/04/11 - 05:22 pm · For: Chapter 24: Invites
*stars in eyes* Can't.... Wait.... For.... Naruto and Hinata!!! Cutest couple ever!
And that was kinda sad about Sasuke's dream. It kinda seems his dreams are progressively getting worse. Not good at all.
I didn't see that one scene coming.... I can't believe they both saw each other naked.... Awkward, but I couldn't keep from laughing my butt off.
I am so looking forward to this dinner party. I cannot wait to see how things end up. Good job with this, even though it was a tease for me since I want to see the dinner party so badly! But it was funny and sweet at the same time. So great job on this chapter. I hope you are able to update your stories soon. Sucks about your computer, by the way...
Author's Response: thanx 4 ur cncern bout my comp. LOL.rnAnd NaruHina is SO ADORABLE. :)rnI actually had that happen 2 me with this dude who was like my brother...my BFF...after we went swimming h went n2 shower then I did...akward timing. LOL. rnSorry 2 b such a tease...I just can't help myself. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/04/11 - 08:17 am · For: Chapter 23: New Mission?
Haha, I love that idea of a dinner party! It's so fitting for the plot, I think. I can't wait to see what happens between the teams. And I'm also very proud of Sasuke. He's one of the few guys who respects girls. Well done, Sasuke! Great chapter; it introduced a nice twist and I am looking forward to that little scene. Keep up the good work with your stories!
Author's Response: I will, thanx 4 all your reviews. :)rnAs I said on my response 2 dispised...there may not b many updates this coming week...stuck at my nana and papaz w/out the internet (cue exagerated terrified scream). But there will be updates. I wil make sure of that. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 23/04/11 - 09:04 am · For: Chapter 22: A New Friend With A Crush?
Yay! Some NaruHina references! I love that pairing, I hope they get together in this. And I had to hand a round of applause to Sakura for completely destroying Ino's crush. At least now Salacia barely has any competition... or at least I hope. Great job with this and I can't wait to see how Salacia talks to Naruto for Hinata. This I really want to see! Keep up the good work with your writing!
Author's Response: Glad you liked that that is like my fave pairing. LOL. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 22/04/11 - 05:25 pm · For: Chapter 21: After the Promise
Poor Sasuke. He really cares for Salacia. I hope he feels better about protecting Salacia. They are both strong and it's really cute how they care for each other. And yay for the Chunin Exams! At least Salacia gets to participate. Can't wait to meet her new teammates, that should be interesting. I am so psyched to see them all in the Chunin Exams! Good job and keep on writing! I'm so excited to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Her teammates r gonna b awesome...I'm going 2 b basing them off 2 of my BFFz...trouble is...i can't decide which onez...lol.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 21/04/11 - 08:13 am · For: Chapter 20: The Big Date
1) I'm so upset. You embarrassed my husband! Kiba is the most awesome guy ever!
2) The roller coaster/Ferris wheel thing was very interesting. It was kinda ironic for Salacia, so I liked that little tidbit because it showed her personality.
3) I didn't go AWWWWW at the scene so much as I fell out of my seat in shock! Then I jumped up and screamed in jubilation at the cute fluffiness. I'm so happy for Sasuke and Salacia! That was adorable!
Author's Response: 1) I'm sorry about the Kiba thing...first guy n my head that didn't have too much to do with Sal. Again I am sorry. :(rnrn2) Honest 2 the fates that is exactly how I am. Rollar coasterz cause me to laugh and have fun. I hide my face if i ever have 2 get on a ferris wheel lol.rnrn3) I couldn't help the fluffiness. LOL. :) I love fluff. That is like my dream proposal...on a hill with fireworks going off. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/04/11 - 08:25 pm · For: Chapter 18: Back Home
Aha! Sasuke is not smart enough to outwit Salacia! Something big is going to happen, and I can't wait to see what it is! And that kiss was so sexy! Passion and romance! Gotta love this couple! Keep up the good work with this story!
Author's Response: I will. I wish a guy would kiss me like that...you know without wanting something else (*wink**wink*) afterwards. Oh sorry...overshare...side thought. LOL. JK. I am VERY random. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/04/11 - 08:12 am · For: Chapter 17: Good Morning
Wow, quick thinking. That was impressive. I was sure Dai Gen was going to slaughter them. And Sasuke is very sweet and understanding in this story. Who knew he had such a soft side? I love it! Good job with this chappie, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: I liked his softness. I'm just glad other people do as well. :) More to come. :)
Name: Eclair (Signed) · Date: 17/04/11 - 10:49 pm · For: Character info
Love this story, its awesome! I look everyday for your updates! Keep writing more!
Author's Response: As long as there is enjoyment in writing it and as long as there are readers i will be there. :) LOL. IDK if that makes sense...but it's 5:30 AM and i have not been asleep...sue me. LOL. JK. rnGlad you like my story. :)
Name: Brookgir2 (Anonymous) · Date: 16/04/11 - 05:33 pm · For: Character info
I love you wrirting! I can't wait until the next chapter comes out. Sasuke is one of my favorite characters and i like how you show his soft side.
Author's Response: Thanx. :) I will. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/04/11 - 06:56 pm · For: Chapter 15: The Village
Hmm, I can't decide which song fits. Gosh...
But this was a good chapter. The skinny Umbridge made me laugh. I can just picture it. And the way she acted towards Salacia and Sasuke, my goodness! Has she no appreciation for the cuteness? Jeez. But yeah, another great chapter. Good job with this. Keep up the good work with your stories!
Author's Response: It was really a trick question, i knew a friends mom like that...she hated that I would hold my bfs hand whenever we hung out with her duaghter. It was funny.rnI would say that the leader was like Aunt Petunia and Professor Unbridge mixed together, like an experiment gone horribly awray. LOL.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/04/11 - 03:32 am · For: Chapter 14: In Depth In Thought
Oh wow. I actually didn't see that bonding thing coming. Good job of putting that in. At least Sakura actually has a heart and is grateful to Salacia. And that was a good observation Salacia made about Sakura, about her being an innocent. I really liked that point, so good job of throwing that in. And Salacia's point at the end about herself was kind of deep as well, about how if she were normal, she wouldn't have Sasuke. And that's an excellent observation to make, for Salacia and the readers. Fantastic job with this chapter, full of deep and insightful points. Hope to see a new chapter soon!
Author's Response: There will be one soon. And thank you for another great review. I like to be deep in my writing through all of the other stuff. LOL. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 14/04/11 - 04:00 am · For: Chapter 13: First Mission Day One
Gwah! Really? He left? Why?! Salacia was supposed to kill him! Darn it... Jeez, I was shivering the entire time for that chapter. It was so suspenseful, but it was so good. Yoshio appearing was completely unexpected, and I'm so excited now! Can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Good stuff is coming. I have plans for when where and how Salacia may or may not (cant tell you LOL) kill Yoshio.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/04/11 - 03:41 am · For: Chapter 12: The Morining of the Mission
Awww!!!!!! He said it! How adorable! Their lives together are becoming really cute and sweet. They're becoming so much closer, making them even more adorable together. Now I can't wait to see how the mission goes for them. I'm so excited!
Author's Response: Glad you like it. :) I've got big plans for the mission. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/04/11 - 03:48 am · For: Chapter 10: The First Morning
Awww!!! That ending was really cute! It was a good idea to throw that song in. It fits in really well with Salacia's past. That's a creative way of showing her thoughts and emotions. Well done with this chapter. I look forward to the next one!
Author's Response: Yeah, where words fail music speaks. So i like to include songs whenever I can. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 11/04/11 - 05:52 pm · For: Chapter 9: Weak? or Not?
Awwwwww! Sasuke's a softie! It's so cute! He cares for her! He loves her! It's so adorable! I love their budding relationship, you write it so well! I'm so happy for the two of them. Now I look forward to seeing where their lives go from here. Can't wait to find out! Keep up the good work with all of your stories! I hope to see an update soon!
Author's Response: :) I am so glad you are enjoying it. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 09/04/11 - 03:50 pm · For: Chapter 8: Life
Oh no! Sasuke, don't think she is weak! Don't, please! But um, yeah, I think I see where this is headed. Cuter relationship! Yay!
Author's Response: LOL. You'll see. LOL.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 09/04/11 - 08:54 am · For: Chapter 7: Some Hearts
You're right about challenging the characters; that is important for a story. But still....
WHY?! This whole chappie was full of fluff and mushy emotions that I love so much! And then you did that! You're so cruel. Well, now I really want to know more about what happens after this cliffhanger! So please update soon!
Author's Response: But it's cliff hangers like that that keep people reading. LOL.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/04/11 - 09:41 pm · For: Chapter 6: Alone
But sappy is cute! Fluff is adorable! I love all this mushy stuff! Their relationship is developing quite nicely. Can't wait to see where it goes. And I can't wait to see Salacia on her first mission so I can see her awesome attacks!
Author's Response: It's coming. LOL. The date i have planned is like the fluffiest thing ever. Super Sappy. LOL.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/04/11 - 06:05 pm · For: Chapter 4: Warning
The kissing thing was kinda OOC. But it was still cute anyways! I love fluff! The beginning was good, and Sasuke was very understanding towards Salacia. I cannot wait to see how their relationship grows! I'm so excited for the next one!
Author's Response: He does get fluffy with her, but...i try to be a bit more into his soft side...obviously creating one. LOL. Don't worry the real Sasuke is still in there. LOL.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 07/04/11 - 03:39 pm · For: Chapter 3: Stuck With Me
It's official. I love your writing. It's just so amazingly phenomenal that I don't even have any other adjectives to describe it. On the surface, this story appears to be cliche, but your writing makes it so original. The plot, your writing, and the characters' personalities make this fanfic incredible and unique. Well done, and I hope you update soon!
Author's Response: By tonight definately. :) Thanx 4 liking how i write, :)