Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/08/11 - 08:49 pm · For: Chapter 3
Ah. The two of them are working together. That would explain it.
Anyway, I can't wait to see where this goes. I especially can't wait for action. I saw in Silverwolf's review that you said something about it, and I really can't wait to see it. Reading this story has built up that need to see the conclusion of all this. Man, I'm so hooked!
Author's Response: Yeah, I felt just that way when I was writing it too :) I hope the action doesn't disappoint, Silverwolf sure seemed to enjoy it lol.rnrnIm glad you really like this story, its always great when people review of course, but Im really glad you also liked it :) I cant wait to see what you think about the last two chapters :)
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/08/11 - 08:32 pm · For: Chapter 2
So there's two people wanting to take over this city? I may just be confused, but it seemed the first person and the sorcerer were aiming for that. Either way, it was awesome. You're story is great, and I'm sure all this knowledge from Reincarnations help. It kinda reminds me of a kekkei genkai I've thought of.
Author's Response: Again glad you liked it. Yep, both of them are working together. Interesting about the Kekki Genki, Id like to hear more about your idea.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/08/11 - 02:06 pm · For: Chapter 1
It's short, but it's still good. Reincarnations, huh? I wonder what kind of twist that will put on things. That, and what is going to happen in the future of these three people, all of them knowing of their past lives. It seems really good, with fantasy and magic that hooks me. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you :) I really put a lot of thought into this story, and I really wanted to play up the reincarnation angle. It gave it a new twist. Glad you like it!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 04/03/11 - 03:45 am · For: Chapter 5
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! It's over! This was so good! The action was everything I expected and more! You beat my expectations! :D As much as I want a sequel, I think it would be good to end it here. Sequels are hard to write, and to have the characters be reborn again is a little... not original now. But you're the writer, so it is up to you. Fantastic job on this story, I really loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you :) Yes, I feel now is as good a place to stop as any, mainly because my creativity needs to take a breather. I'm glad the action was suitably active. :) Yeah, I've always wanted to do "The horribly tragedy, what it's effects are in the next life." But if I do that'll be a long way down the road. To quote idioms "enough is enough" and "time to quiet while I'm ahead". I'm glad you enjoyed my little story :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/03/11 - 04:22 pm · For: Chapter 4
Hooray! This was very informative! I'm happy now. Good job on this, it actually does take a lot to explain a plot without seeming boring. But it worked for this scene. You did awesome! Now, I will eagerly await the upcoming action!
Author's Response: Thank you :) It felt better to add some element of changeability to the plan. ALso I'm working on the action now. I hope it doesn't disappoint.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/03/11 - 02:43 pm · For: Chapter 3
Ugh... making me wait for the action *grumble grumble*. Good chapter. You put in a lot of development for both the characters and the plot. But with all that is going on, I think it would be a good idea to have someone take the time to thoroughly explain what the plan is. It was only a little hard to follow because so much is happening at the same time. Slow down a bit, please. But it was still a good chapter, so I hope an update comes soon!
Author's Response: Hmm good advice. I think I'll have the purple robed sorcerer do a monologue. He knows the most of whats really going on, so it should organize the main points and ideas. I'm thinking I should use chapter 4 to clarify things, before plunging into the action (yes it's not a myth, there will be action) in chapter 5. I'm a fan of a long build up to a (hopefully) epic confrontation. Thank you for reading and reviewing :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/03/11 - 03:33 am · For: Chapter 2
Yay! This chapter was better than the first one! And now I can say that I do like this story! Your characters are developing well, and the plot, from what is shown, looks really good. I'm so excited to see how this turns out!
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm trying to write a story thats fun to read and to write (it has to be both to be a good one) I still haven't decided which way to go with the ending, but I can tell you that I'll definitely continue the plot into the character's next lives.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 02/03/11 - 05:19 pm · For: Chapter 1
Hmm... well, it does seem interesting. Just the way you wrote it makes the story seem really magical and full of fantasy. I can't say I like it just because nothing has happened quite yet. I do like the characters, just not sure where the plot is headed. Then again, that should just make the story seem even more suspenseful and interesting. I will say I will continue to read this, so please continue!
Author's Response: Thank you :) I have posted another chapter tonight, and I wouldn't mind knowing how it stakes up against the first chapter. The first chapter felt easier to write so that's why I ask. Also, thank you again for commenting :) I myself am not yet sure where I'm taking the plot, beyond some very general goals. I have two endings in mind, and I still haven't chosen one to go with, so we'll see where it ends up :)