TONFA
The Original Naruto Fanfic Archive

Main Categories

Het Romance [1092]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around different sex couples.
Alternate Universe & Crossovers [651]
Where cast of the Naruto Universe are inserted into an alternate universe.
Essays & Tutorials [17]
An area to submit intelligent essays debating topics about the Naruto Universe and writing tutorial submissions.
 
General Fiction [1739]
Any Naruto fanfiction focused without romantic orientation, on a canon character in the current Naruto Universe.
OC-centric [865]
Any Naruto fanfic that has the major inclusion of a fan-made character.
Non-Naruto Fiction [291]
Self-evident
 
Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance [1575]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around male same sex couples.
MadFic [194]
Any fic with no real plot and humor based. Doesn't require correct spelling, paragraphing or punctuation but it's a very good idea.
 
Shojo-ai/Yuri Romance [106]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around female same sex couples.
Fan Ninja Bingo Book [125]
An area to store fanfic information, such as bios, maps, political histories. No stories.
 
 

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Members: 11985
Series: 261
Stories: 5884
Chapters: 25418
Word count: 47689150
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Reviews For Sand and Snow

Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 05/02/11 - 09:02 pm · For: The First Meet, and a Promise
Oooh! I really liked this! Gaara and OC are so cute! I love fluff! Your character was very original. And I think it's cute that he calls her princess.

Oh, just thought that I'd say this. You used a lot of Japanese words and didn't give translations. You know, like during the duel. It might just be me considering I'm so language-deficient and can't memorize any of the simple words. But it could be helpful to the reader to provide translations for certain words at the end of the chapter.

But your writing is really good! It really flows, and your description is amazing! I loved this whole story in general! And actually, an entire novel could have been made from this. I've never read a good Gaara X OC novel, and I think this could be really good if you decided to extend it. But I understand if you want to leave this as a one-shot. It's still incredible with one chapter anyway. Again, great job on this and I can't wait to read more of your writing! Keep up the amazing work! I wish I could give you a 1,000 but sadly the rating box only goes up to ten.... darn.

Author's Response: Thank-you^^ And I didn't? I thought I had...better go fix that^^; Thanks for pointing that out. And thanks. My sister has also told me that I should make it into a couple chapters, at least. And I've been thinking of doing so lately. And thanks for the rating^^


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