Reviews For Missed You
Name: bob (Anonymous) · Date: 13/01/12 - 06:47 pm · For: Missed You
lol really? it waz jus gettin interesting...
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 04/06/11 - 02:39 pm · For: Its Stuck!
Very funny. I'd like to know what it is that Sasuke found. And it was very awkward for Ino to suddenly be standing outside the door, hearing a conversation like that. But it was hilarious nonetheless. Great work, definitely can't wait for more updates!
Name: NarutoMasterSage4040 (Signed) · Date: 17/05/11 - 12:41 pm · For: Chapter 4
I love this story! Please don't leave me hanging for long!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 17/05/11 - 03:52 am · For: Chapter 4
Aw, so adorable! It's really cute how the two of them reflect on their lives and show all those precious moments together. The scrapbook was a nice touch. It was very nice to see get a glimpse into their past, including stuff that you made up. Nice work with this, I hope you update soon though. This is really a nice story, very organized and insightful. Keep up the good work, and I hope to see a new chapter sometime in the near future :)
And no, you are not the only one who daydreams about that kind of thing. I can't speak for everyone, but I definitely do it, and I'm sure some of the other writers here do it as well. If you read some of the stories on here, you'll notice that kind of thing. It is actually pretty common. And hey, if you picture something like that in your head, and it is creative, make a story out of it and write it down. That's what I do =D
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 22/02/11 - 01:26 pm · For: Breakfast
Aw... this chapter was so short...
But you have a plot going now, which is exciting. I can't wait to find out what is wrong with Sakura. Her illness must be very serious, and I want to know what is going to happen!
Please update soon! I'm dying from the suspense.
Name: xXxTiNkxXx (Signed) · Date: 15/02/11 - 03:00 pm · For: What just happened?
"I'm piss poor." That captivated me instantly ;P I think your take on Naruto and Sakura's relationship is a-freaking-dorable. And it doesn't seem rushed in the least, considering you're having this take place when they're at an old enough age where everyone understands the time they've shared together. It all fits perfectly.
In regards to story inspiration...I can't really help there, considering the story that I'm writing now I've developed over about 4 years. I had it written on animespiral.com, if you're familiar with that older site at all, and then it wound up crashing. However, I must say that on a day to day basis, after I think about the characters and where I WANT to go with my story, just not where the actual story of Naruto may lead me, a random act of God happens and I come up with new ideas. I know that for my art I'm often inspired by lyrics of my music when I really listen to each word and disect them, so maybe you could try that? Or just day to day happenings; experiences in life that you could possibly incorporate in the story, or maybe even warp slightly to make it work. Anyway, good luck with your ideas, and I really hope that you continue with your story because I would love nothing more than to continue reading :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 10/02/11 - 03:44 am · For: What just happened?
Aw! So cute! I'm really glad you decided to add more to this. This is really good, and I'm happy that there will be more to read. Don't worry, I think Naruto and Sakura are very in character. You did well with keeping their personalities in check.
As for inspiration... I would just say maybe glance at other fics. Not to copy! That would be totally wrong! But I mean, maybe read other NaruSaku stories just to get a feel of how they would act around each other in a relationship. But for actual plots, please don't copy off of others. That is something that you'll have to think of on your own.
For this particular story, try putting in the other characters to help move the plot along. That might help. Personally, it's easier for me to have more people to work with in sticky situations. But that's just me.
Great job on this chapter, and I hope there is more to come! Keep up the good work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 25/01/11 - 04:36 pm · For: Missed You
Awwwwwww! That was so cute! I normally don't care for NaruSaku fics, but I really enjoyed this one! This was so adorable, and your writing is really good. At the end of this chapter, I was looking for the 'next' button, but I couldn't find it, which was very upsetting. I think you could turn this into a longer fic, but if you don't want to, I totally understand. This was an awesome one-shot, and I'm very glad I read this. Thank you for posting this!
Author's Response: np ^^ glad you enjoyed it, i might continue it depending on whether or not i can figure out what would follow this xD
Name: xXxTiNkxXx (Signed) · Date: 25/01/11 - 12:28 pm · For: Missed You
It's a touching little story that definitely shows the compassion that Sakura, even though she denies it, still has for Naruto, even in the manga/anime, so definitely good job with that :) And you didn't turn her into an OOC by making her throw herself on them, which again, many tend to do.. overall I really like this little one shot c: You're very descriptive with your writing, and I think I'll go stalk you to find anything else you've written :D
Author's Response: Lol, haven't written anything else yet really, i did a while back but i kinda erased it cause its bad xD.
Name: xXxTiNkxXx (Signed) · Date: 25/01/11 - 12:28 pm · For: Missed You
Normally when people write One Shots or Romantic Fics, they end up totally ablitherating the personality of the original character(s)...but I was happy to read through this and not find a hint of that :D I'm not a huge fan of NaruSaku romantically, but I think that just this innocent fluff reachers further into a readers heart than sex and having them eat each others faces