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Reviews For Tears and Rain

Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/02/11 - 02:42 pm · For: Chapter 4
Wow. I'm so glad you took the advice from me and my fellow beta! This chapter turned out amazing! Awesome job! And it's so good to see you around writing again! I'm glad you're alive and well, and I hope to see you around more often. And if you need a beta for the next chapter, you can still contact me if you wish. Again, fantastic job! I hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! You were a really big help; sorry it took awhile to get it posted though. I'm hoping that doesn't happen again, or if it does I'll probably do what you did and put a little notice up :P Oh, I'd LOVE it if you would be a beta again! I'll send you the chapter soon (I have it saved on a flashdrive that's currently not with me XP) Again, thank you so much!


Name: BloodyWolfFangs (Signed) · Date: 17/12/10 - 08:09 pm · For: Chapter 3
I love it! Write more! Write more! I like how you're pulling this all together, though I do think its going pretty fast...

Author's Response: Aw, thank you!! I'll try to slow it down? I already have the story all written out, and I've posted about half of it already XP I'll do a bit of editing to maybe prolong it? Or at least try :D


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 17/12/10 - 05:18 pm · For: Chapter 3
Yes! I'm so glad that you had time to update! I really enjoy reading this story. You're a great writer, and the story is so well-written that I can't wait for updates. Please keep up the good work! I love reading this story!

Author's Response: Thank you!! The reviews are really encouraging :)


Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 06/12/10 - 10:26 pm · For: Chapter 2
hi, me again, i just noticed my last review lacked any 'constructiveness', so here I am! Ok, so this chap was AMAZING, i loved it. Poor Lee, totally cluelesss guy, how did he think a girl would react to that sort of commen!? Well, Sakura'd proabably whack him......

Ok, so this is lacking constructiveness too, but your story is awesoem and didn't need anything better! Maybe a little more action..

Author's Response: Hahahaha thank you! Lee just came on too strongly for her, but he IS lucky Chizuko isn't much like Sakura XDrnUhm, well...when I think 'action' I'm thinking like a fight scene, and quite frankly...I suck at those. Not saying that I didn't attempt to put one in this story, but if you do find yourself reading one.......don't expect much XP


Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 06/12/10 - 10:23 pm · For: Chapter 2
Haha, so sweeet! Adorable, Chizuko is!
From my enthusiasms you can guess who one of my fav characters is. Hinata! I wonder, will she and Chizuko meet? If they did, I wonder how they'd react...

I loved this chap as much (if not more) than the first one! I'm glad you got so many reviews, you deserved 'em!

So, keep up the good work! Can't wait to see where you are going with this story, and please update soon!

Author's Response: Haha, thank you for that! I'm surprised I got so many reviews for this story too XDrnHinata and Chizuko meeting...hmmmmmmmmmm.....rnI'll update whenever...finals are over. Which will be in less than a week XD I still might though, if I really want to put off studying XD


Name: Fire_and_Ice (Signed) · Date: 04/12/10 - 08:33 pm · For: Chapter 2
This was so great! Although it's the second chapter and their relationship has already progressed so much... eh, I'm a little worried about that. And I agree with the Kiba-cutting-Chizuko-off thing. But I do think you improved and it was written well! It's a great idea to have the festival, and Kiba wanting to impress her! It's classic, but original, too!

Plus, I'd be glad to offer any help as a beta! It's okay if you choose someone else. I'm offering, for one thing, because I think it's important for you to have some selection.

So please keep that in mind, and know that you're doing a great job with the story! Thank you for updating! ^^

Author's Response: Oh, heh heh, well...I think it's just seven chapters, and I haven't introduced the conflict yet! Maybe I waited too late to do that, then??? I don't know, I just didn't want to post too much in one chapter :/ And there should be some character development with Chizuko, so hopefully she'll be able to speak enough :)rnrnAnd thank you for your offer! I'm so excited! I don't really know how it works all that much; is it a bad idea to have more than one for a story?? Haha. I just think multiple opinions would really help. But I'll definitely keep you in mind when I'm updating, which will probably be...in a couple weeks, cuz of finals. Oh, wait! My last one's next Tuesday, so maybe just one week :D Unless I want to super-procrastinate :P


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 04/12/10 - 07:57 pm · For: Chapter 2
Great chapter! So much fluff, it's adorable!

I know you said that you wrote this a while ago, but I just want to add a bit of advice. During this chapter, it just seemed that Kiba was cutting off Chizuko a lot. Idk, I understand that she is shy and everything, but I mean, she should be allowed to finish one sentence.

That was my only issue. Everything else was awesome. And if you need a beta, you can contact me if you want. I'll give as much of my assistance as possible.

Please update soon because I'm loving the romance!

Author's Response: Hmm, you know, I never really thought about that...I didn't even notice, haha. But I guess that's true...but there is some character development later on in the story, so don't worry! I think she actually gives a whole paragraph of monologue if I remember correctly ^_^ (once again, it's been awhile since I wrote this; I can't remember every detail, haha). So yeah, hopefully that won't be an issue in the future chapters...rnrnOo, thank you for the offer! I'll keep you in mind when I'm ready to update; it's almost time for finals so it won't be for maybe a couple weeks (unless I really want to procrastinate :P)


Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 04/12/10 - 06:24 am · For: Chapter 1
Hello. I am also very new to this sight. You did a nice job on the theme and plotline on the story. It is moving a bit fast though. You would prosper greatly if you slowed down a bit and just used adjectives =) What did the hospital look like to her? How big was Akamaru at the time? Is this pre-shippuden? Just answer some of these questions in your writing. Other than that i think your good. You have potential as a fanfic writer on NarutoFanFic.org Now if i could just get some people to read my fanfic....lol. Please update and keep with the plot. And don't touch Kakashi! He's mine. Well this reveiwing stuff is such a drag. I wish i was a cloud...

Author's Response: Haha, thanks for the review. I keep telling myself I need to add in more description, but I think I'm limited in adjective-vocabulary, because I find myself using the same words and I feel that makes it worse because it's so repetitive. I need a thesaurus XD And yes, this is pre-shippuden; this is supposed to be somewhere in the time skip. A little on the early side of the time skip, because Akamaru's still small :) Haha, I'll read your story sometime; I'm gonna be slow on this site for the next couple weeks because it's almost time for finals XP And don't worry about your Kakashi; I actually have thought about a story for him though, but I haven't gotten around to it XD


Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 01/12/10 - 10:13 pm · For: Chapter 1
Hey, i like this. It's nice. ^^
Poor Chizuko.

You wrote this nicely, it was very smooth, you know? like peanut butter.. It had a few chunks here and there though. I thought it was sudden for Sakura to have Chizuko up and about so suddenly, and wouldn't she be in a hospital?

The Akamaru going to Chizuku trick was very Kiba like, lol. ^^

9 out of 10 (loved it)

Author's Response: Aww, thank you!! This is one of my first stories, so I would expect it to be not completely perfect. I'm new to this site (I was on Quizilla but they don't really do reviews), so I was kinda nervous when I saw I had reviews; but this is nice ^_^ thank you for the constructive criticism. I guess what was going through my head was that since Sakura was training to be a med-nin then there was really no need for Chizuko to be in the hospital? Especially since her injuries weren't too serious...?? I don't know; I guess that's my subconscious reasoning because it never really occurred to me that she should end up in a hospital XDrnrnAgain, thank you for the review! :D I'll try to ge the next chapter up soon!


Name: Fire_and_Ice (Signed) · Date: 01/12/10 - 07:34 pm · For: Chapter 1
Yay! I'm excited now! This is very interesting, and draws people in quickly with the small tidbits of background information, and then the whole Sakura and Kiba thing. I can't wait for an update! I want to know what happens to her so badly... Thank you for writing the story, you're doing a great job! ^^

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm new to this site, so you're one of my first reviewers, and I'm so glad that according to the reviews I don't suck as bad as I thought I did XDrnrnI'll try updating as soon as I can! ^_^


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/12/10 - 04:39 pm · For: Chapter 1
This is really good! Great job.

But just so you know, Kiba is my husband. So back off! Haha, don't worry, I won't inflict pain...mostly because I'll get in trouble if I do. Plus, I want to know what happens next. So I'll just politely ask for an update instead.

Here it goes:

Please, please, pretty please update quickly! I want to read some more, please!

Author's Response: Haha, it's totally fine; I'm actually a Shikamaru fan, though I will admit Kiba is quite awesome XD Your plea for an update is adorable; I'll try to get the next chapter up as soon as I can!


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