First off, yay for the update! :D

Okay, so I think it was a really good idea to insert the Romeo and Juliet thing in the beginning. Foreshadowing, I love it :)

And then, of course, the Naomi and Sasuke scene was so intense, it gave me chills. I was always worried something would happen after he pretty much scared the crap out of her. I wonder what else will happen between them O_O

Aw, Naomi and Naruto are so cute. I love that little blonde kid, he's so sweet :)

Great update! Keep up the good work with this! Glad to see you got through your writer's block :D