Reviews For Two Worlds, One Family
Name: Crying Cyan Angel (Anonymous) · Date: 02/01/08 - 06:21 pm · For: One Family
i'm sorry i stopped reading when ka...snake dudes lacky came along!
i don't understand why yourhurting them so much!!!!
i understand that it's only a story but why do they have to be raped?
why are your stories so anguisty?
pleasetry and be happier when writing your stories otherwise their really upsetting! i thought that this story was going to be a nice conclusion to two worlds, (cos i thoght that ending morbidly) but this one is just as dark...scarp that DARKER! .....why?
i know you may hate me now but could you please email me andexplain?
thank you
sian@catfoss.com
Name: Cyan Angel (Anonymous) · Date: 02/01/08 - 04:32 pm · For: One Family
Yay SEQUEL!
THANX
Name: Cyan Angel (Anonymous) · Date: 02/01/08 - 04:04 pm · For: Two Worlds
aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww
that was a really sad endding! :(
think happy thoughts!!!!!!!
Name: Cyan Angel (Anonymous) · Date: 02/01/08 - 04:04 pm · For: Two Worlds
aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww
that was a really sad endding! :(
think happy thoughts!!!!!!!
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 02/01/08 - 03:28 pm · For: Two Worlds
awwwwwwwwww
*cries*
so sweet and sad at the same time
*cries again*
you TRYING to drown me in my own tears?
Name: Cyan Angel (Anonymous) · Date: 02/01/08 - 03:17 pm · For: Two Worlds
but if he wasn't in heat?
then whats going on? -_-?
Name: Cyan Angel (Anonymous) · Date: 02/01/08 - 03:02 pm · For: Two Worlds
HE'S ALIVE!? O_O
Name: Cyan Angel (Anonymous) · Date: 02/01/08 - 02:49 pm · For: Two Worlds
awwwwwwwww
LOL!
that was evil! i was all hyped up for the fire bit! you big tease! :)
Name: Cyan Angel (Anonymous) · Date: 02/01/08 - 02:20 pm · For: Two Worlds
ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
how can itasasu be a fav pairing?
INCEST!
i know the royal families used to marry their COUSINS, but the BROS or SISTERS!
EWWWWWWWWWWWWW
by the way have nothing against cousin...(or is it couson?) incest, (my parents are cousins) but bros and sisters, is more than alil too close to home, and repulses me!
Name: Cyan Angel (Anonymous) · Date: 02/01/08 - 01:59 pm · For: Two Worlds
why?
how long do birds live for?
what did you mean considering?
....help?
luv the story by the way!:)
Name: courtney (Anonymous) · Date: 30/12/07 - 12:55 am · For: Two Worlds
i love it it was sad and happy to
Name: Arukasandora (Anonymous) · Date: 16/11/07 - 12:40 am · For: One Family
yay i keep reading it and can never stop but i wish there was a little more to Aisu giving birth
Name: Satoyuki (Signed) · Date: 31/07/07 - 12:30 am · For: One Family
-claps- Laura-chan, this is as beautiful as I have ever seen. I only wish my writings were half as good. Truely, you will go far if you decide to be a writer for a career.... However, you may drive your editor mad with how long it takes you to write chapters. Just teasing.
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-- Katsutoshi96 : No I think that you are quite right. If I were a writer I would be like Shigure, make my editor go crazy before giving them the final copy. MUAHAHAHAA!! But yeah! ^^;
Name: soccerplayer1 (Signed) · Date: 15/05/07 - 01:32 pm · For: Two Worlds
This is a review for the whole story. You shold keep on writing story's like these, and you should hurry up and finish "One Family" they just put me on the edge of my seat. Great job.
Name: soccerplayer1 (Signed) · Date: 12/05/07 - 07:11 pm · For: One Family
This story is very good. I think I may know where you got the acient language part. Oh well, just keep on adding.
Name: invisible_habits (Signed) · Date: 01/04/07 - 11:01 am · For: One Family
I love this story! It's gorgeously written and absolutely wonderful. Please update soon.
Name: invisible_habits (Signed) · Date: 29/03/07 - 05:26 pm · For: Two Worlds
i seriously started crying as sasuke went back to konoha and left naruto behind... this is a beautifully written story, definitely a favourite!
Name: Satoyuki (Signed) · Date: 29/03/07 - 02:04 pm · For: One Family
Kinda creepy, Laura. Really is.
Author's Response: What do you expect? Happily ever after? I still got two chapters left of this thing! Sad... dark... creepy chapters. But that ain't my fault!! <<--Yes it is!! Kitty Kat!
Name: Akumu_Kage (Anonymous) · Date: 08/03/07 - 07:57 am · For: Two Worlds
Aww!!! KABUTO YOU BASTARD, COME HERE AND FACE MY WRATH!!! YOU NEVER EVER ATTACK ANUTHING THAT IS SO CUTE AND CUDDLY!!!! *Glomping Itachi and Sasuke, Naruto and Kiba staring at her like she lost it, again.*
Name: Akumu_Kage (Anonymous) · Date: 08/03/07 - 06:51 am · For: Two Worlds
Aww, so adorable!!! Oh-Rochie is soo ganna get squashed if he tries anything funny!!! *Vein pops and stomps on a cockoraoch.*
Name: Akumu_Kage (Anonymous) · Date: 08/03/07 - 05:24 am · For: Two Worlds
OGM! That was cool and yet ever so disturbing.
Name: Akumu_Kage (Anonymous) · Date: 07/03/07 - 04:15 pm · For: Two Worlds
Awwwww so cute... gah the cuteness burns!!!
Name: Akumu_Kage (Anonymous) · Date: 07/03/07 - 03:57 pm · For: Two Worlds
Obey the Uchiha Libido, DAMN IT!!!!!! And Tahi-kun's right, YA BIG PREVS AND SHAME ON YOU KYU-CHAN!!!! Sasu's a daddy!!!!
Name: Akumu_Kage (Anonymous) · Date: 07/03/07 - 03:28 pm · For: Two Worlds
OMFG that dance was friggen hot, OH-Rochie that bastard is so done for, YATTA SEXY'S BACK!!!! *Overly obcessed with naru, sasu and ita...*
Name: Akumu_Kage (Anonymous) · Date: 07/03/07 - 02:59 pm · For: Two Worlds
Cool and you are evil!!!!! I like it!
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