Reviews For The Dotted Line
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 08/12/09 - 08:26 pm · For: Space Heater
You know i kept on checking 'cuz i wanted you to update, and when I saw you did i yelled "Yay!" right out loud...
My brother gave me a strange look.
Update soon!
Author's Response: Ah, brothers,what would we do without their strange looks.rnAnd,just to be nice, I'll upload the next chapter now. ;)
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 08/12/09 - 11:26 am · For: Living Arangments
:) Nevermind, the Sasuke parts are ok, I guess i'm just not used to them! Goodjob, please update soon!
Totally Awesome Story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. And if the Sasuke parts are really bothering you, please tell me! I can take it :)
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 07/12/09 - 06:06 pm · For: Ignorance Is Key
Wow, nice! Please update soon! Kay, sorry, a little criticism. I don't think the Sasuke point of view is that good. But, I like the rest of it! Anyway, update soon, please!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I've written up to chapter 7 so his POV will be sort of like that for a while. But please tell me what to do to fix it!
Name: Icestorm (Signed) · Date: 07/12/09 - 10:53 am · For: Ignorance Is Key
This is a pretty interesting idea. It really stinks for her how she lost her information. Why didn't she read it while she was in the Nexus?
Author's Response: Well, she thought she could read it later. She's quite a lazy person.