Reviews For Last Chance
Name: naru_chan_fan (Anonymous) · Date: 15/01/08 - 03:53 pm · For: Monster
u better not let sakura pregnant cause of naruto or i will get mad!!!
Joking ^_______^ still love u thou
Author's Response: I not giving away the story to anyone, you have to read and see. *Tereshi hides under rock (fans are getting crazy)* I still love all of you!
Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 14/01/08 - 04:58 pm · For: Intro
oh wow you are getting a lot of negativity *runs to Sushix's house, pours gasoline on him/her lights a firecracker under his/her bed and runs* muahahaha sorry Sushix nothing personal really but no trying change Tereshi-chans wonderful yaoi story! It's got het too so smile! I'm going to be working on my het story...sometime. I promise as much as I love SasuNaru, there won't be any yaoi in that one at all.
Author's Response: Thanks Sakuranzu *Big Hugs* I really expected the negativity for Sakura not Sasuke. But I can promise more yaoi to come!
Author's Response: Thanks Sakuranzu *Big Hugs* I really expected the negativity for Sakura not Sasuke. But I can promise more yaoi to come!
Name: Sushix (Anonymous) · Date: 14/01/08 - 01:37 pm · For: Monster
I may be giving the wrong impression, im not really a sakura lover or a sakura hater, kinda nuetral, but i DO hate Sasuke. I f Sasuke is happy, thats bad, Sasuke sad, thats good!So if it was like Kiba and Naruto, I would be like fuck Sakura go Kiba, but its not, its with Sasuke. So Sasuke can burn in hell.
Author's Response: I'm glad you kept reading even though you wanted to kill me. But if you really hate Sasuke that much you are not going to be happy with this story, except for the parts Sakura is winning. I'd hate to loose a reader so please read the warnings before the chapters begin. I happen to have a love/hate relationship with Sasuke so it hurts me to see him sad but I will do it for the sake of the plot on occasion. Again a warning to everyone. This story is Naru/Sasu AND Naru/Saku. And sorry Sushix, Kiba's part is very small in this story.
Name: OmgVikiRawr (Signed) · Date: 14/01/08 - 01:37 pm · For: Monster
OMG
that is all
PLEASE continue :D
Author's Response: I promise I will and soon. Thanks for the review, I love them.
Name: Sushix (Anonymous) · Date: 14/01/08 - 01:26 pm · For: Revelations
Sasuke is sad again yaaayy! this cal-*reads last part* ...you like your house right? Well then, if you dont want to see it burning, naruto and sasuke should NEVER be togather....*foams at mouth*
Author's Response: T.T Sorry, will happen often. *Buying fire insurance*
Name: Sushix (Anonymous) · Date: 14/01/08 - 01:17 pm · For: Can't Wait
*cracks knuckles* I hate you so much...ILL FUCKING KILL YOU!
Author's Response: I LOVE YOU TOO!!!!!!!!!!!
Name: Sushix (Anonymous) · Date: 14/01/08 - 01:10 pm · For: Party Time
i noticed smut....if sasuke and naruto do anything i will kill you...cant thier be at least one story with no yaoi? geez, im really getting sick of it, and if thier is, ill be sick of you!
Author's Response: Ahem, read the warning please. And maybe the summary. THANK YOU FOR READING!
Name: Sushix (Anonymous) · Date: 14/01/08 - 01:00 pm · For: The Fight
Zomg awesome!! lol sasuke and sai.
Author's Response: Thank you, I loved that part too! It was great, it's really a technique from the comic book.
Name: Miss (Anonymous) · Date: 14/01/08 - 04:23 am · For: Monster
Oh come on Naru-chan ! don't be so confused !!! xD
Your chapter was great !!! You're really talented !!!
Looking forward the next !!! >_<
Author's Response: Thank you! I feel loved!! Next chapter will be out real soon.
Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 14/01/08 - 02:43 am · For: Monster
Het is still apreciated on my end! Poor confused Naruto. He doens't even know where those images are coming from. xD
It makes me sad that Sakura actually loves Naruto. I was thinking she was clinging on because he's suddenly the hokage...ah well Sasuke saw him first so the uchiha better get him in the end...or else...jks jks
luff u Tereshi-chan!
Author's Response: At least I didn't make one person mad. Thank you! More emotional termoil to come for all three. I'm so cruel! Thank you for the luff!
Name: Sushix (Anonymous) · Date: 13/01/08 - 10:31 pm · For: The Date
"She wore a snug white shit under a black half jacket with a matching black skirt"
Sakura has shirts made of white shit?!
lmao, bad typo
Author's Response: Your the first person to point that out. Thank you. Hehe.
Name: sonic_richard (Signed) · Date: 11/01/08 - 05:38 am · For: Revelations
Cool, the only part I didn't like was the Gay part in the last chapter. There better be some straight lemon later on!
Author's Response: This story goes both ways, sorry.
Name: Miss (Anonymous) · Date: 11/01/08 - 04:36 am · For: Revelations
Tahnks for the chapter !!!! ^^ Really nice !!!
Aaaah poor Sasuke !!!! T___T
Author's Response: Your more than welcome. Thanks for the review!
Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 11/01/08 - 12:24 am · For: Revelations
Poor poor Sasu-chan!!! .:cries:.
Ah well, that's why you don't sleep with your best friend when he's smashed out of his face.
"why is my shirt cut in half?"
"kunai."
maybe it's because I"m reading in the wee hours, but that just seems really funny to me xD lol
luff you Tereshi-chan!
*chyuu~!*
Author's Response: That was my favorite part too!
Name: Otaku (Anonymous) · Date: 09/01/08 - 06:42 pm · For: Can't Wait
I think u should let sakura find them. It will be awesome!!!
Author's Response: Sorry it's alread written. :)
Name: Suzie (Anonymous) · Date: 08/01/08 - 08:06 pm · For: Can't Wait
hehe i read the whole thing so far and i love it! lol smutty, smutty smut! Anyways screw Sakura she can go die i love SasuNaru!!! keeping writing you rock!
Author's Response: Glad you like the smut, more is on the way!
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 08/01/08 - 06:14 pm · For: Can't Wait
That was A-MAZING!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Name: OmgVikiRawr (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 - 08:44 am · For: Can't Wait
haha wow i loved it xD
Author's Response: Thanks for the reviews, I really look forward to them. Then I know you guys are reading and enjoying!
Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 - 08:25 am · For: Can't Wait
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayz! SasUke!!! xD I find its rare but you gotta love the an uchiha begging *evil yaoi fangirl screech*
lol luff you Tereshi-chan!
Author's Response: I totally agree! Begging and crying *drool* I'm obsessed! ;p
Name: Miss (Anonymous) · Date: 08/01/08 - 02:06 am · For: Can't Wait
OMG !!!!! This chapter is GREAAAAT !! Honnestly , all my patience was worthwhile !!!!! I liked it !!!!
I didn't imagine it would be NaruSasu !!!! xD
anyway , it was a wonderful chapter !!!! thanks again !!!! You're all forgiven for making us waiting !!!!! ^____^
Thank you thank you thank you !!!
can't wait to see the next !!!! xD
And you update so fast ! SUGOIIIII !!!!! XD
*loves*
Thanks again !!!!!
Author's Response: I said it was in the begining silly. Thanks again for the patience.rnrnI post so fast because of all the great review. You guys make me want to give you more!rnrnLots of Love to the readers,rnTereshi
Name: IceNight009 (Anonymous) · Date: 07/01/08 - 03:37 pm · For: Party Time
I don't know if you ever posted this story on fanfiction.net, but this is probably one of the only reviews I leave here in TONFA. It took eleven chapters of plot to get here. I wonder what will happen (other than the lemon) in the next chapter? Naruto will surely be in a confounding situation for the rest of the story... Love this fic! Update soon, IceNight009
Author's Response: I feel flattered thank you! I don't post on fanfiction.net because it doesn't like my computer. But I post on adultfanfiction.net Thanks again! Tereshi
Name: OmgVikiRawr (Signed) · Date: 07/01/08 - 01:08 pm · For: Party Time
EEP I LOVE THIS STORY
as im sure ive already said
if i havent
gomen
EE PLEASE CONTINUE
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 07/01/08 - 09:07 am · For: Party Time
I love your story! I can't wait to read the lemon chapter!
Name: sonic_richard (Signed) · Date: 07/01/08 - 06:19 am · For: Party Time
Very good so far. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you. Please keep reading!
Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 06/01/08 - 08:22 am · For: Party Time
I like individual responses, but general chapter openings are still accepted. I was so sure there would be a lemon in this chapter :pouts:
Oh well. I can't help but start to feel sorry for Sakura though...update soon!
Author's Response: That was a little mean wasn't it? When I got ready to post I relized that what's people were going to think. But in exchance for waiting: The entire next chapter will be a lemon. : )rnThanks for reading and reviewing!