Reviews For Life as a Father
Name: jdtwins2009 (Signed) · Date: 26/09/07 - 06:46 pm · For: Mist and Shadow
Great as ever! Keep it going
Name: jdtwins2009 (Signed) · Date: 29/08/07 - 08:44 pm · For: Mist and Shadow
This is great. Keep it up
Name: jdtwins2009 (Signed) · Date: 07/08/07 - 10:17 pm · For: Mist and Shadow
I noticed only two or three spelling mistakes. But I deffenitly like where its going. Keep it up!
Name: jdtwins2009 (Signed) · Date: 31/05/07 - 03:17 pm · For: The Two best in the Leaf
AH THIS IS GOOD
Keep this up
I have been really busy lately, sorry for not revewing lately.
Name: battousai1889 (Signed) · Date: 26/04/07 - 02:26 am · For: The Four Will Come Together
Great read! As always you deliver an excellent story. There are a few grammatical errors here and there, but they aren't too bad. Only thing I found odd, is the pseudo-Captain Planet earth fire wind water plot device. However, it wasn't bad. Cheers Mate!
Author's Response: When I was righting I was thinking more the Avatar type thing. Different masters of elements and warriors. Not the stupid kids that had to rely on Captain Planet to save them. Thanks for the response. AH
Name: jdtwins2009 (Signed) · Date: 21/04/07 - 01:13 pm · For: The Two best in the Leaf
This is getting better and better.
I cant wait to read more.
Name: jdtwins2009 (Signed) · Date: 16/04/07 - 02:17 pm · For: The Two best in the Leaf
Keep it up, I have been busy so I couldnt say that until now.
Still Keep it going
Name: jdtwins2009 (Signed) · Date: 28/03/07 - 02:30 pm · For: The Two best in the Leaf
Im still loving it.
Name: jdtwins2009 (Signed) · Date: 22/03/07 - 07:46 pm · For: The Two best in the Leaf
I wished it would let you vote Loved it.
Name: katana_uchiha (Signed) · Date: 21/03/07 - 07:45 pm · For: The Two best in the Leaf
this is soo freaking good
Name: jdtwins2009 (Signed) · Date: 09/03/07 - 07:39 pm · For: The Four Will Come Together
I loved that.
Keep it up.
Name: jdtwins2009 (Signed) · Date: 09/03/07 - 02:31 pm · For: The Four Will Come Together
OMG!!!!!!
That was awesome.
Name: jdtwins2009 (Signed) · Date: 09/03/07 - 09:22 am · For: The Four Will Come Together
When are you going to write more? I really love this story.
Name: jdtwins2009 (Anonymous) · Date: 26/02/07 - 06:36 pm · For: The Four Will Come Together
Ooo that got good at the end.
Name: jdtwins2009 (Signed) · Date: 21/02/07 - 02:07 pm · For: The Four Will Come Together
Hey is this site being wierd for you to?
Keepwriting the story its good.