Reviews For Fire Escape
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 24/02/12 - 02:58 pm · For: Episode 10: Indirect Heart Break
AHHH! I absolutely love Choukan. He's just so cute. I'll be sad if she leaves him if she leaves the village. The little guy is just so lovable!
I also love Ross. Just her view on everything is just so interesting and different. Not only that, but you're writing is still wonderful with just the right amount of description. I was really sad when Choukan's mother and Ross talked. I hate that she lost her husband. It's just so sad =(. I hope she can cheer up with her son still there.
I'm not sure this will matter since you're done with this story, but it so deserves this:
For an explanation of this award, you can look at the end of my bio thing.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/02/12 - 05:32 pm · For: Episode 9: Rain Water Rider
Yeah, Raki sure is lucky. I'm glad that Choukan didn't get too badly injured. I like the kid too much to see him hurt so early on. Then again, I love all of your characters and I'm so glad I read this because every chapter is exceptional!
Ooh, another person. I can't wait to see where this will lead. I can't wait to see what will happen when she actually starts to be involved in the Naruto world. Great job, DropDeadThenDance!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/02/12 - 07:31 am · For: Episode 8: Selfishly Selfless
Poor Ross. She just isn't having any luck. I love Choukan. He's just so adorable! And, despite me feeling bad for her, I think it's fun to see Ross having such a hard time. It's a nice way to start and it shows us more of her personality concerning how she see how the Naruto characters act (as in how she doesn't really want to be all nice like the other characters are). I hope that Ross finds more land soon. If not, she'll have to hope that the horse can swim.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/02/12 - 06:46 pm · For: Episode 7: Lassie the Dog
Ahhh!!! Poor Hanafubuki (sheesh that's a long name). To be so young and watch his father die. I feel really bad for the poor kid. It's nice that you're making Ross show weakness in this instead of instantly being strong. It's so different when I remember what you did in My Twisted Heart, Tear Me Apart where she knew what was going on. Great job with this. Your fanfic is absolutely amazing!!!!!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/02/12 - 05:03 pm · For: Episode 6: The Game
I see creativity runs in your family. You can completely turn me around just as easy as Yuumai (JubileeOfPuppies). I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS!!!!! I'm extremely glad I decided to go back and read this because it is mind blowing. The creativity in this is phenomonal!!!!!! I love Lance. He's just overall amazing. And despite his evilness, part of me still finds Interpono intriguing. This was a wonderful chapter!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/02/12 - 04:49 pm · For: Episode 5: The Face of Evil
Having a vivid imagination sucks at times. Why? It made Interpono that much creepier. I keep imagining it with a twisted smile and it's head cocked to the side. Though it does really amuse me (even if I had no clue what it said because I'm on my mom's iPod and was unable to look up what it said). I hope it will be in the future chapters. I also find Lance fun even if I can't figure out why he loves spooking people. I doubt he'll ever do that again. Well, it seems she's off to the Narutoverse. I'm so excited!!!!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/02/12 - 04:09 pm · For: Episode 4: Interpono, Inbetween Worlds
Huh, this is kinda like what I have planned for my fanfiction, Final Wish. Well, not exactly, but death certainly plays some part in it.
Hm... I think she needs to add that Yuyuyashu (or whatever it's called) because it makes me think of it =P. I loved this chapter. It's definitely nice to see your creativity in this. I love Ross's attitude as well. It was fun to see hers collide with this mystery guy's. I'm curious as to what drove him to scare poor Ross.
The writing was amazing. You kept it realistic despite the impossibleness of this event. You also described her dying well since you got the chaos she had to be experiencing just right. Great job!!
Name: winterstrife (Signed) · Date: 12/02/12 - 01:02 pm · For: Episode 100: Good News
I feel kind of bad for reading 100 chapters and this being the first time I've reviewed, but I blame you for it, because I just couldn't stand pausing in between the chapters for long enough to do it.
Anyway, I liked this story a lot, and I liked Ross as the main character. I loved how you wrote Zabuza, and his violent/creepy behaviors, especially in the beginning. The way he and Ross grew close to each other seemed very natural for their characters, and he was pretty sweet in the end, in a tough sort-of way...? Lance and that weird (I'm going to spell it wrong if I try) guy/place/IT were kind of an odd addition, but it worked out, and the bracelet was a nice way to boost Ross's power without actually making it 'hers', so to speak.
Anyway, the things I disliked... well... the load time on my computer between the chapters was annoying. XP
All in all, an enjoyable read, with some colorful characters and interesting interactions with the canon timeline. I look forward to reading more of this (I think I saw a sequel), and I'm excited at the prospect of more Zabuza? and the baby. Thanks for the good job, and good luck with your continued writing!
Name: UzamakiMasumi (Signed) · Date: 21/01/12 - 11:35 pm · For: Episode 34: The Hiding Place
I really like how you've developed Ross's character. To be honest, her angsty personality pissed me off at first, but I knew it would be worth it to stick it out. She's really maturing and becoming more real with each passing day.
Name: The Avid-reader (Anonymous) · Date: 16/01/12 - 02:29 am · For: Episode 100: Good News
Whoa way to end on a shock note lol i like it tho shows youve got spunk an complete confidence in your work HATS OFF TO YOU!
Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 03/01/12 - 08:20 pm · For: Acknowledgments
Yay! I got mentioned, awe thank you so much :D SOrry for disappearing off the face of the planet for a while but I'm BACK!
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The way you ended was cruel and unusual. Come ON! You can't leave us hanging like that ToT I wanna' see Zabuza's reaction >:D
I just love this story so much. It's been such a joy to read every chapter and follow Ross's journey. I even ended up loving Lance and (more so) Interpono by the end of it. You're such an amazing writer and I can't wait to read more from you :D
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Seriously though, don't leave us hanging like this haha
Name: tigerseye (Signed) · Date: 01/01/12 - 05:47 pm · For: Episode 100: Good News
Oh, that's like the perfect ending! I love you (in a non-creepy I-like-your writing kind of way) I wasn't expecting the ending but it worked really well! I'm trying to imagine Zabuza as a father. Well, Amaing story!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/01/12 - 03:29 pm · For: Acknowledgments
:D Thanks for the acknowledgement, it makes me feel special. Even though you really deserve all the reviews I give. Don't think this is the last of me, I'll be sure to keep up with your work ;)
And lovely picture, by the way. It's very sweet.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/01/12 - 03:25 pm · For: Episode 100: Good News
o_O Holy... fudge nuts... She's pregnant?! Or wait, the better exclamation is...
ZABUZA'S A DADDY?!
Wow... *facepalm* I just... I can't... I can't fathom that it's already over... It's over... Wow...
This was a great way to end, even if it surprised the heck out of me. This was a really amazing story, and I loved reading it the entire way through. Thank you so much for writing and finishing this, I think I'd be very disappointed if I had never read this in the first place.
Great job with this entire story, DDTD. I really loved this story, and I'm happy to see that it has come to a wonderful end. Excellent work with this entire story, it really was a brilliant read. I can't wait to see more writing from you. Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response: How do you respond do fast??? Ha ha, thank you so much for reading this whole thing! I personally hold you on very high regard for the finishing of this story. I really had fun writing this and I am both happy and sad that it has ended, though I'm glad you liked how I decided to finish out the story :) It was really a worth while project, I must admit! Thank you so much for all your support!!
Name: JubileeOfPuppies (Signed) · Date: 01/01/12 - 03:24 pm · For: Acknowledgments
Aw, you mentioned me? Even though I only reviewed this every thirty chapters or so? Haha, thanks muchly 3D! What little I've read and how very much I've heard I loved. And great work with the picture, I enjoyed watching you color it. IT'S AN IT! I can't tell... Congrats on finishing, HAPPY NEW YEAR! Rock the 2012 we shall.
Author's Response: Of course I mentioned you, stupid head! You were a huge help in making this story and you were here the whole way through it! Hell, you even were there when Ross was still Nezumi for god's sake! Now, doesn't that make me feel old! Anyway, I always loved coming to you for help, so thank you for all of it! You're a big spark plug in the engine of my creative brain :D Thanks sis, I'm glad you were here to help me!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/01/12 - 02:30 pm · For: Episode 99: Swing Set
Haha, Choukan is just making friends with everyone, isn't he? Gai likes him as well, it seems.
Another easy-going chapter, and it was still just as nice and sweet. I love reading about how things seem to be really looking up for Ross.
Great job, DDTD! Wow, only one more chapter.... I'm so excited yet sad... *sniffle*
Name: ZombieCat5 (Signed) · Date: 30/12/11 - 08:55 am · For: Episode 1: Knock out Girl
Their is no way to discribe this. It was so amazing and so you DropdeadthenDance.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 30/12/11 - 07:25 am · For: Episode 98: Oil Base
Aww, Lee is the new babysitter? That's kinda sweet. I hope he and Choukan will get along. And wow, she's a painter. I guess that makes sense, everyone needs a form of expression. Nice episode! Keep up the good work! Oh my god, there ade only two more left... Eek! I'm so scared yet happy for it to end...
Name: Avid-reader (Anonymous) · Date: 29/12/11 - 02:37 am · For: Episode 97: Homework
=) kibas my favorite lol j.s. Anyway mellowing out isnt bad you somehow make mellow interesting haha love your work! Oh an you will make it to ep. 100 i believe in youuu!
Name: Avid-reader (Anonymous) · Date: 29/12/11 - 02:12 am · For: Episode 96: A Little Life
I was wondering that myself haha ebisu just kinda started talking to her after he found out zazuba was her teacher. Another well done episode! (sooooo been waiting for interpono to rear its ugly head again too. IT puts an interesting twist on the story)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/12/11 - 09:05 pm · For: Episode 97: Homework
Ooh, a babysitter? Who is it?! Anyone we know? I wonder who it is! *gasp* Suspense is killing me!
I'm glad you found your flashdrive, that's wonderful news! Gosh, I sure hope you make it to episode 100, it would be quite saddening if you didn't :(
Anyway, great job with this! Keep up the awesome work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 21/12/11 - 04:31 pm · For: Episode 96: A Little Life
Heck yeah! Choukan is in the Academy! That's so exciting! Good for him, I'm glad that he gets to study to be a shinobi. I wonder how he'll do with school XD Nice chapter, keep up the awesome work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/12/11 - 03:24 am · For: Episode 95: Develop
Jeez, I almost thought she would say no for a second there. Phew, that's a relief. I like that Choukan and Konohamaru are friends now. I feel as though I knew it was going to happen eventually, but I can't help but love how things seem to be falling into place. Great job on this, can't wait for the next one! Keep up the awesome work!
Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 19/12/11 - 09:19 pm · For: Episode 95: Develop
the ending was cute. two thumbs up. i'm a little sad that its ending though...
Name: The avid-reader (Anonymous) · Date: 15/12/11 - 07:46 pm · For: Episode 94: A Day like Today
*sniffles* lil rossy's grown up so fast. Useing that motherly instinct deep down inside her. I knew you wouldnt dissapoint. Thanks for another well writen episode =D cant wait till the next