Reviews For Path of my Brothers
Name: crimson sun06 (Signed) · Date: 14/07/14 - 05:12 pm · For: Chapter 13: Concerns
I usually avoid OC centric stories as most of the ones out there simply use OCs as Mary-Sues. Despite some weaknesses your story stands out I must say.
Every other character seems true to the canon which is a big plus in my book.
Good luck with the rest of it.
Author's Response: Well thanks for giving it a read and letting me know what you thought! I know what you mean. I still believe I could do a lot more with my story and make it a lot better, and I'm not completely satisfied with the beginning to this day, yet I don't want to go back and redo them again (trust me I've thought about it) because it's not fair to my readers by making them start over... AGAIN. I do feel like I'm getting better as I continue to edit the next chapters and get to the really good stuff. I'm glad you think the canon characters aren't OOC. I tried really hard to make sure of that. Thank you! I'll definitely need it to get through the story! Your thoughts are well appreciated.
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/07/14 - 12:58 pm · For: Chapter 13: Concerns
Another great chapter! Not much going on but it was cool to see things wrapped up and everyone's thoughts on the situation that just occured. I didn't see anything wrong in the chapter so again, solid haha. Sorry my reviews are so short, but it seems to me you have everything in control. Great chapter! update soon :D
Author's Response: Well, thanks again! Haha So far, I think I have a good hand on this... but I'm not sure how long that'll last! I can't to read what you think about the next few chapters. I promise it gets good soon!
Name: Fire_and_Ice (Signed) · Date: 07/07/14 - 11:53 pm · For: Chapter 13: Concerns
Very interesting plot development! A bit filler, but of course necessary. Nice to see progression in the storyline :) good writing, and I look forward to the next installment! Thanks!
Author's Response: Oh my gosh, I nearly fell out of my bed at seeing your review! I love new reviewers. Thank you so much. I know, fillers can be boring sometimes, and I wished I didn't need them but I do sometimes. Still , as you mentioned, it was necessary. Unfortunately the next two kind of are as well. :( My apologies in advance! Thanks again for your thoughts. I hope to see them again. And also thanks for reading!