Ok so that was freaking awesome! Although it's pretty much what happened in the anime/manga, it was nice to see another person's thoughts and actions, Ayako's that is. And you did good with her POV also! It was cool to see everything described from her POV. Short review I know, but everything is solid so I don't have much more to say. On to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Oh thank you! Yeah, I know, sometimes I feel like I should keep things almost as they were. I only had Ayako stop him instead because well she's his sister. Why wouldn't she if she was there? I'm pretty confident there will be more chapters in her POV, and the other OCs I have too. Eh, long or short, I love to read what you think, and reply to it! :) Thanks again!