Now that was an epic twist on what happened in the canon. Ayako being there was awesome! The fight was awesome everything was awesome. We got a bigger glimpse at her powers too, turning the water into ice. This chapter wasn't bad at all, I like a good fight scene :P. Anyways I'm excited to see what happens next because Sasuke's curse mark being revealed was one of my favorite episodes ever so I can't wait to see what you do with it. Update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with me and giving me your lovely thoughts in a review. This chapter was one of the tough ones to edit, and I know there are going to be more :(, but I really wanted to get this one out there. I'm glad you liked it, especially the fight scene because I always think I don't write them well. I hope no one rips on me for having her turn the water into ice, though. IT'S NOT LIKE HAKU'S KEKKEI GENKAI, I PROMISE! I am currently working on the next chapter with Sasuke's curse mark. I'll try and make it as awesome as I can.