Reviews For Path of my Brothers
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 27/04/15 - 08:18 am · For: Prologue: The Dishonorable Uchiha
No worries! I'm dealing with college too! We would love to see you over at Wattpad. I think the community is more friendly and more family like there. Maybe one day this site will make a come back.
Author's Response: Sounds great! I will definitely try it out over there. Thanks for letting me know about it. :)
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 09/04/15 - 10:12 pm · For: Prologue: The Dishonorable Uchiha
Hey I'm not sure of any other way to get a hold of you so i thought I would comment here. This site is kind of dead :/ Me and Sasaui Uchiha moved over to Wattpad which has an excellent community. Their interface isn't too bad either. You don't have to join but I think you'd like it. I hope to read more of your story soon I'm will waiting ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestion. I'll think about joining as well. Sorry I've been M.I.A. College life, ya know... but I still think about updating every once in a while and hopefully I'll actually get back to it. I'm hoping Summer will be a very productive time with this. But yeah, I'll think about signing up!
Name: Kazusa (Signed) · Date: 26/08/13 - 06:33 pm · For: Prologue: The Dishonorable Uchiha
Excuse me, how to edit the picture senpai...
Author's Response: How did I edit it? Well, first I borrowed a base from an art site with permission, then I drew my character on paint. I put together the three images by using an online photo editing site. To get it on here, I just copied the html code and put it in the summary section of my story. I hope that helped. :)
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 28/06/13 - 08:07 am · For: Prologue: The Dishonorable Uchiha
I don't know why I didn't get around to this when it was out. No offense but I'm kinda glad you deleted it because I like reading stories when their fresh :) This is really original and I like this prologue a lot. I can't believe she's about to leave especially knowing whats going to happen later on. I'm about to go on a reading spree so be prepared for 8 more reviews lol.
Author's Response: I have never recieved a review for the same chapter from the same person, but I'm glad you did because it shows me how much you like it! This was one of my favorite chapters to write. Offense not taken also. Thanks for your thoughts and I can't wait for you to read and review the other chapters.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 27/06/13 - 02:42 pm · For: Prologue: The Dishonorable Uchiha
Seeing as I already had to read through most of this, I figured if go ahead and restart and read them through again. Seeing as the story was accidentally deleted, I figured it would be the perfect time.
Gosh, this makes me miss writing Tainted Guardian, but oh well. Anyway, once again it hurts to see Ayako going through this. It is unbelievably hard to live in the shadow of someone. It's really cool how she's an Uchiha but not really strong or anything and is, in fact, the opposite. Even if that does just make everything harder on her.
We may not see any interaction between Ayako and her family, but I love how instead you show her bond in small ways such as her anger toward her father and the promises she makes. Knowing Fugaku, it's very understandable he'd be the one to push her to this.
Man. It stinks how that was her last goodbye to her parents. That must really hurt her in the future. But it needed to happen in your story, so.....
Great start, TeamWorkIsKey. I'm really eager to read this and hopefully catch up soon-ish.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing again. I was really hoping someone would even if they read it before so I knew if editing was making the story a little better. (I realized I am a dialogue type of writer and am trying to fix that.) Deleting it was definitely not part of the plan. My heart literally dropped and I wanted to bang my head against the wall but oh well. It makes it easier to let readers know when chapters are finished. Anyway, I'm glad you picked out some of the main points such as her living in her brothers shadow and Fugaku's harshness, and I totally agree with you that it stinks her parents won't be able to see how awesome she grows up to be. I find myself cruel for writing this way, but it needed to happen for it to make sense. I can't wait for you to catch up. It's probably easier since I don't have a lot of chapters out now. Editing them is taking some time because I reread them and really question what I was thinking. Haha Thank you for your thoughts once again.