Reviews For Divine Intervention
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 21/03/13 - 02:38 pm · For: Moving Out
I missed this at first when it came out O_O
The fact that Yukari is a ninja shocked me. And she knows everyone, she was Kakashi's student and is Inoichi and Ibiki's student? :O This was really surprising because you didn't really put a basis for that in the prior chapters. In a way that was good because it comes as an interesting shocker to the readers but at the same time I kinda wish there was more foreshadowing to this.
This is a nice twist though, I'm looking forward to her being on the mission with the others. Good work on this chappie.
Author's Response: I wanted it to be a big surprise. Since she's such a secretive girl I figured it would have been an interesting twist to not include that information in the first few chapters. Hopefully the lack of foreshadowing wasn't too much of a disappointment! Since she didn't even want to tell Naruto I was like hmm, she wouldn't have told the readers either! XD
I'm really glad that you enjoyed it! I'm so excited to get these next few chapters out. Shit's about to go down, ya'll!
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 19/03/13 - 01:31 pm · For: Moving Out
I really like your story so far. There is a lack of good Naru/Oc fics and it makes me sad. On another note I was just as surprised as Naruto to find out that she is actually a ninja. I can't wait to find out how the meeting with Orochimaru will turn out differently.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It makes me incredibly happy to hear that you enjoy this! And I know right? I've been searching for years for good NaruXoc fanfiction and it's so incredibly hard to come by. That was like my whole motivation to write this story.
I wanted it to be a huge surprise that she was a ninja. What goes down with squad 7 and Orochimaru is going to be an even bigger surprise. Hopefully it'll knock your socks off! Stay tuned, new chapters should be up within the next week or so!