Reviews For True Sensei
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 13/03/08 - 10:56 am · For: Chapter 1
you need to update soon^-^
Name: naru_chan_fan (Anonymous) · Date: 12/03/08 - 04:52 pm · For: Chapter 1
i love this story keep it updated !!
Name: SilverSoulShadow (Signed) · Date: 12/03/08 - 03:47 pm · For: Chapter 1
AWWWW! Naruto's got someone to be kind to him! FINALLY!
Grr...I hate it when Sasuke, Kakashi, and Sakura are so mean to him... I think the fact that he's got a fox demon in him makes him all the more loveable! XD
Name: SilverSoulShadow (Signed) · Date: 12/03/08 - 03:38 pm · For: Chapter 1
AWWWW! Naruto's got someone to be kind to him! FINALLY!
Grr...I hate it when Sasuke, Kakashi, and Sakura are so mean to him... I think the fact that he's got a fox demon in him makes him all the more loveable! XD
Name: ForyourLove (Signed) · Date: 11/03/08 - 02:57 pm · For: Chapter 1
If you had the same feeling then why post instead of holding onto it until it felt right? XD Weirdo.
Erhm, I don't know...just want for real inspiration to hit you and just put more feelings behind it and drag out the details to make the reader get more drawn in? XD
Or just get a beta who can add that for you so long as you don't mind someone changing things up a lot, heh, I had a beta once that changed like everything in my story; it wasn't even like something I wrote and I loved it XD
Well anywho...yeah I'll let you alone now ^^
Author's Response: I felt that I was being pushed into posting it. People have been asking me to update The Rising Sun, another story of mine that is in the works. However, since the update for that story won't be up for a short time. I felt it was only reasonable to speed this one up some to get them off my back. I believe that if I wouldn't have felt that pressure from my fans, then it might have turned out better. And as for a beta, there are few people who I can trust with my own work.
Name: Patsuki21 (Signed) · Date: 11/03/08 - 02:43 pm · For: Chapter 1
cool this has the making of a good story
Name: Sakuras_Assian (Anonymous) · Date: 11/03/08 - 09:57 am · For: Chapter 1
i liked it. i can't wait to read what happens next.
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 11/03/08 - 09:44 am · For: Chapter 1
More dammit!!!!!!!!!
Name: ForyourLove (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 - 10:54 pm · For: Chapter 1
It feels kinda dry, like you are putting in the effort but just not taking it home. Details lack and it makes me yawn.
Its not like its horrible or anything, you have great spelling and grammar which is something I totally lack in but it just feels like I'm reading a script that just tells you what is going to go on, not the finished product.
Its not a horrible plot but its also not something that makes me want to read more so I wish you luck.
Author's Response: I got the same feeling myself. If you any idea on how to fix it, then please share it with me.