Reviews For Incoming
Name: dalaw (Signed) · Date: 13/09/08 - 08:12 pm · For: Chapter 1
awsomeness i liked it.
Name: greylord (Signed) · Date: 07/05/08 - 07:24 am · For: Chapter 1
fair
plot is a little used but still very well employed
Author's Response: Yeah, thing is I didn't notice until WAY later that I actually started basing my story off of another one (it says in the disclaimer in chapter 7). I feel bad for doing that, so from now on the story is all my ideas, my plots, and any similarities will be coincidental.
Name: Vixkill (Anonymous) · Date: 09/04/08 - 05:59 pm · For: Chapter 1
you must do really well in english classes! enjoyable story.
Name: Patsuki21 (Signed) · Date: 29/02/08 - 09:31 pm · For: Chapter 1
hey kima im patsuki frosty's friend and im here because i heard your doing a bachalorette party im just seeing if you wanna tie our stories together like you could use a scene from my story where the girls are except from their point of view
ps im also the best man
Name: Frosty (Signed) · Date: 27/12/07 - 09:50 pm · For: Chapter 1
Wow, Keems. I'm really loving this! Hurry up and write more of it! I did find a grammer problem, but it looked like more of a typo than anything else...
Name: Koyuki (Signed) · Date: 26/12/07 - 10:12 am · For: Chapter 1
Awesome story. A few little "*" stars popped up here and there in the story, but overall it was a fantastic story. ^-^ Update more often.
Author's Response: Yup. The asterisks are supposed to be there. Details are at the end of the chapters.
Name: Noleta (Signed) · Date: 16/12/07 - 01:16 pm · For: Chapter 1
This is extremely well written....keep going!