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Penname: Fire_and_Ice [Contact]
Real name: Nanashi
Membership status: Member
Member since: 03/04/10
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Hey everybody! My name here is Nanashi because I feel like it, but you can call me Kaycee :)

So, I love this site with all my heart, and I'm a fan of so many different authors and stories.

Some pairings that I love are:
~Naru+Hina
~Neji+Tenten
~Kurenai+Asuma
~Sakura+Lee
~Temari+Shikamaru
~Kakashi+Anko

And just about every character and an OC:
~Kiba+OC
~Sakura+OC
~Kakashi+OC
~Shikamaru+OC
~Lee+OC
~Sasuke+OC
~Choji+OC (personally, I think there should be more Choji romance fics)
~Gaara+OC

In general, I love romance fics and OC fics...or both if I can get them! Action too, and adventure of course! I'm branching out though, now I'm just looking for an interesting story that captures my interest.

Currently, I'm writing a fanfic myself, but I'm trying to make it everything I want in a fanfic and more. For starters, I'm trying to make it long, interesting, enjoyable and funny. The problem is that I don't want to post the first chapter yet because it might take me a long time to write the next few chapters, and I'd hate to become interested in something just to have to wait a month for the next post... So yeah writing is hard and I try to support writer's with all I've got. It's a tough job and I know it.

If I were to post my story soon though, I would hope that people would consider letting me know what they think of it... Positive or negative really, as long as it's constructive. Always tell me how I can improve myself and my writing, please!

Anyways, that is all for now. Thanks a ton!!

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Title: People Who Are Important: Book Two by XoxgaaraxoX
Rated: 18 Liked [Reviews - 66]
Summary: {2 New Chapters March 5, 2009} Sasuke's back and Sakura doesn't know how to react to him. Can the emotionally stunted Uchiha fix his mess? Naruto finally starts to see Hinata, Gaara's son turns one, and Shikamaru pops the question! Sasu/Saku, Naru/Hina, Shika/Tema..REVIEW!!!!
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Neji and Tenten, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Sasuke and Sakura, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Shikamaru and Temari
Characters: Gaara, Hinata Hyuuga, Pair SasuSaku, Pair ShikaTema
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 | Completed: No | Word count: 147431 | Read count: 21159 [Report This]
Published: 03/03/08 | Updated: 19/06/09


Reviewer: Fire_and_Ice Signed Liked
Date: 23/04/10 Title: Chapter 25: Book Two Comment Special

Hi there! I've been a user on TONFA for a short while, but I love your stories, People Who are Important, books one and two. I just saw how few people reviewed the first one and it made me mad that something as great as that got so few responses. So I don't know if you're on hiatus, never to be seen again, or if you've lost your driveto write the story. Whatever it is, I hope you see this. I want you to know that you are an amazing author, and your writing inspires me to dream up one of my own, which I hope to work on soon! I would really appreciate if you could continue writing, but I definetely can't force you into anything...Anyway, I think you do a great job of portraying Gaara's personality, especially post-akatsuki-disaster, what with Senji-chan and all! ^^ I believe Shia is perfect for Gaara, and you realistically built their relationship. Hopefully you continue on, it would be a waste to throw away your talent. That sounds cheesey, but believe me, its very true. Your stories are marvelous and more people should say so, in my opinion. Thanks for your time, and I sincerly hope the story doesn't end here, so abruptly. Whatever you choose, I hope it turns out for the best. ^^ ~Fire_and_ice



Title: Truthspeaker by fUnKyToEs
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 205]
Summary: The story of a girl who falls into the world of Naruto and realizes that knowledge isn't always the safest thing to have.
Category: OC-centric
Characters: All, OC, Pair OCSasu
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 68 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 365426 | Read count: 260087 [Report This]
Published: 01/08/08 | Updated: 20/07/10


Reviewer: Fire_and_Ice Signed Liked
Date: 03/04/10 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

I love your story! I think its amazingly written, and I know that if I got a review, I'd hope for it to be encouraging, so I thought I'd help you out. I'm sure you got plenty of reviews for this last chapter, and I can't wait for the next one...hopefully it starts where this chapter left off, and even though I have a hunch that Grace is going to be naive and run away or mention Naruto or something, I can't help but hope that it's semi-romatic or that she doesn't anger him... So yeah, I love your name, and I apologize for not reviewing before now. Please keep up the great work, and maybe you could give me some tips for some ideas I have, because I want to write a story, but I don't think it would work out... thanks, and please upade soon!



Title: Naruto: Sound Sisters by SBgirl04
Rated: 12/12A Liked [Reviews - 15]
Summary: About a year after the 4th ninja war, an unknown family settled down in the outskirts of the beautiful village of Konoha. Although they try to live a normal life, they soon encounter a secret that will devastate the wonderful friends they make along the way.

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Category: OC-centric, Het Romance > Fluff, Het Romance > Angst, General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden
Characters: All, Naruto Uzumaki, OC, Pair OCGaa, Pair OCKiba
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 31836 | Read count: 173944 [Report This]
Published: 17/09/08 | Updated: 01/02/17


Reviewer: Fire_and_Ice Signed Liked
Date: 14/06/10 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 6.2 - Decisions of Love

Oh my goodness! I love this! It's so believable, with the relationships and personalities! I especially love the fluff from this chapter, with all the blushing going on, it's just so sweet! I really hope you update soon, I can't stand the anticipation, plus I want to see where Kiba and Imai's relationship goes! :3 The story's awesome!

Author's Response: Thank you sooooo much!! I love hearing it\'s believeable! I\'ve been trying pretty hard to keep all the canon characters in character as well as figure out how they would react to different scenarios and different people. But yeah, I will try to finish up Ch. 7 as fast as I can. It\'s gonna be veeeeery interesting as well as confusing. :P XD



Reviewer: Fire_and_Ice Signed Liked
Date: 28/07/10 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 7 - First Pain

Well, you were right! That certainly was confusing... I have my suspisions about what Gaara has to do 'as Kazekage'. I can't mention it though, or else I may spoil it for others. This chapter was amazing! Usually I hate angst, but this was very well writen angst. It wasn't too much, but but wasn't like she had no reaction. I almost want to say that Gaara didn't explain or say enough to Imao at the end, but really, that's just who he is, and it's totally how he would react in that situation. I can't blame you for that. It was a good way of portraying her heartbreak, the yelling and avoiding, because Imao never does those things, and it just gives you a sense of how painful it must be for her. Altogether an awesome chapter, and once more, I can't wait for the next one to come out! But take your time, because if youre rushed, then the story is rushed. I'd rather have one great chapter every 3 months than 5 rough chapters in 3 days, personally. Thanks for updating, you're doing a great job!

Author's Response: :D Thank you soo much for your feedback. And yeah, this was a very weird chapter for me to write. I wish I could explain the reasons to why it\'s all happening but it would pretty much give my whole story away and people will stop reading. :S So, yes, all in due time. Trying very hard to keep all the characters in their respective character/personalities but still having them go through new experiences and learn how to cope the best they can. Ah! I\'m so excited. The next few chapters are going to be very interesting and a little shocking! w00t!!! Thanks again!



Title: Forgotten Thunder by Kamisori
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 52]
Summary: ::Sequel to Thunder and Swirls::

Kamichi tells me that ghosts have no reason to keep track of time, but I do anyways. It’s been four years. Four years since I was killed and so much has changed. Most of my friends have moved on without me, but there are three that keep my, “spirit” alive. Two visit my grave regularly, and one has made it her life’s mission to bring me back.

And she thinks she has finally found a way.

[Shino/OC] [Lee/OC] [Kakashi/OC]
Category: OC-centric, Het Romance > Fluff, General Fiction > Post-Naruto, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Sasuke and Sakura
Characters: All
Genres: Drama, General, Humor, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Death, OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 13966 | Read count: 47629 [Report This]
Published: 28/06/09 | Updated: 21/07/10


Reviewer: Fire_and_Ice Signed Liked
Date: 24/07/10 Title: Chapter 11: Lucky Eleven: Life Goes on Once More

Bravo! Very impressive! I read the other reviews before writing this, so I can say that I like it the way it is, but I also would have liked it if you had dragged it through saving Jessica. I read this as you were writing last year, and was very disppointed when you stopped updating. I understand your reasoning, so I'm not angry, and I was pleasently surprised when I saw that you had finally concluded it! Thank you for that. No matter what I could imagine, you are still the writer, and whatever you write is the story. That's your right. I loved the Sai/Shino rivalry, and Kamichi was believeable. I can't imagine writing something about a topic so vague as angels, heaven and hell, but you did an amazing job! I think the ending is suitable and satisfying. Congratulations, and I hope you enjoy the site even without your story. In a story I'm working on, I'm actually including a Shino/OC romance, and it's difficult! If I find help in your work or use anything of yours, I'll make sure to give you full credit! Thanks again for writing both stories and finishing this one! It has made my day, and inspired me to work on my story more!

Author's Response: Well...gosh, you got me all flustered! ^///^ The best thing about writing about a topic so vague like heaven and hell is being able to keep it in character while adding your own twist to its make up. Yay! Shino loving! Feel free to use my story, but just done plagerize. It\'ll get you kicked off. =( Thank you for the review!



Title: Kokoro Uchiha by Rowanrose
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 125]
Summary: Kokoro-DO NOT READ

Any of you have not read Kokoro Uchiha before, a new version called Cygnus Olor is up, so don't spoiler yourselves. =_=. For those of you who have and have been waiting for an update, please go ahead and read the latest chapter; it's an announcement. (no i'm not dropping Kokoro Uchiha) Thank you~
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto, General Fiction > Timeless
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: Kokoro Uchiha
Chapters: 43 | Completed: No | Word count: 86283 | Read count: 170929 [Report This]
Published: 21/07/09 | Updated: 23/06/12


Reviewer: Fire_and_Ice Signed Liked
Date: 01/08/11 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42: Bonus chapter: The Sibling Debate

Ahahaha! Wow, that was pretty good! I'll miss you for the next month! :[

Author's Response: :( yeah, sorry i was gone for so long. To tell the truth I missed you guys - but, of course, then vacation fun took over! ^^ sorry, lol, thanks for reviewin!



Reviewer: Fire_and_Ice Signed Liked
Date: 17/07/11 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41: Return and Reunion

The chapter and apology made up for everything! Thanks for the great update, this chapter was great! I reall wanna see more of Itachi, and maybe Kokoro losing some of her wild-ness... Please update again soon, when you have the chance!

Author's Response: That\'s good! I\'m glad they both did; thanks for forgiving me! Hmm, about Itachi... Wow, man I totally forgot about him... Let\'s see, now, I\'ve got some new ideas for the next chap! I will, I\'m working on the next chapter right now!



Reviewer: Fire_and_Ice Signed Liked
Date: 06/04/10 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Tinkling and Shopping

All I can say is, thank you for updating! I liked this one, and it was a lot better than Sasuke's angst, but I'm wondering when Kokoro and Sasuke will finally meet and realize they're siblings. It's something to look foreward to!

Author's Response: Yeah, it is! I\'m sorry I have so much angst in the story, sorry to disappoint.. Thank you for rreviewing! You have no idea how much reviews motivate me! :)



Title: Bonds of Blood by animeroxsmyworld
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 35]
Summary: “Grouping her together with that…demon, will automatically put her in danger. I say we separate them.” Koharu continued, standing up from her seat. "Let Naruto go by Uzumaki, Kyoko will be the only Namikaze.”
Category: Het Romance > Fluff, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU, General Fiction > Timeless
Characters: Naruto Uzumaki, Pair NaruHina, Pair OCSasu, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 | Completed: No | Word count: 136772 | Read count: 346752 [Report This]
Published: 10/12/09 | Updated: 19/09/10


Reviewer: Fire_and_Ice Signed Liked
Date: 11/08/10 Title: Chapter 30: Phase One

Alright. That was interesting... but awesome all the same! I'm so excited to find out how the next chapter unfolds! What I like about this story is that it doesn't follow the original plot, so you don't know what happens next. You made it so the appearance of a sibling really shook things up, which is great! I absolutelty adore the ending to this chapter, just because of the 'doomed' part, and it makes you imagine what might happen later on!

Very well written overall. Getting different perspectves to the same situation is a great way of elaborating, and you're getting the personalities down pretty well, I'd say! I'd like it a lot if Kyoko and Sasuke's relationship blossomed a little... I can understand if you want to wait until they're 16 or something, but it would be awesome if they could at least become more friendly before the whole "Sasuke Retrieval" arc thing...

Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that I've been reading the whole time and always seem to be waiting impatiently for the next chapter! They just go by too quickly! Keep up the great work! ~F&I



Title: Light the Darkness by Rowanrose
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 51]
Summary:

PLEASE DO NOT READ> UNDER CONSTRUCTION< THANK YOU!!!

Being a jinchuriki is something i wish I wasn't. 

I have a power

People hate you.

A wierd power.

They want to kill you.

The power to make myself go through things.

They wish you were never born, and all the while

The power to make myself harder, harder than steel.

They want to use you for their own purposes.

I'm the only one who understands my brother. 

They want to make you kill others.

Maybe it's because i live inside of him.

They don't understand you.

I want to light up his darkness.

They hate you, they want to kill you, and they wish to use you as well.

The darkness of his heart.

You are all alone.

Hello.

Hello.

My name is Aiko.

Twin sister to Gaara, and

Daughter of the Kazekage.

I'd say it's nice to meet you,

But how can I be sure?


Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Timeless
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 | Completed: No | Word count: 28232 | Read count: 63825 [Report This]
Published: 11/12/09 | Updated: 29/07/11


Reviewer: Fire_and_Ice Signed Liked
Date: 30/07/11 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: The Return of Kei - Sensei

Hi! I think the switch from POV to POV wasn't bad at all. I really liked the beginning part, where she took care of the Shukaku that Gaara was all nice... :3 It was cute when the doorbell made her really angry, I can just imagine how she must have looked; short, huge bags, sweaty, glaring. Haha! Plus, I don't remember the Keitaro guy, am I supposed to? I thought she had a different sensei... Oh well, great chapter!

Author's Response: Ah-ha, yes, do you remember Kaidan Fujushima? That\'s a character from my other story- some mixup happened and Keitaro Sorayo turned into Kaidan Fujushima in the chapter Posession. Sorrya about that. Remember the guy who got powdered donuts with her? ~ Thanks, I\'m glad you liked it!



Title: Happy Mardi Gras Jinni! by crazykittylover
Rated: 12/12A Liked [Reviews - 1]
Summary: One shot for Jinni and Kakashi! ~DropDeadThenDance’s contest entry

This is a one shot story for DropDeadThenDance’s competition. I made a story line map for possible ideas looking for something new and ‘hip’ and well…I got this. Jinni X Kakashi in the very popular and amusing holiday; Mardi Gras!! It’s very long so well deal; I wanted it to very detail and a crown jewel of my mind’s fancy. Enjoy.
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto, Het Romance > Fluff
Characters: All, OC
Genres: General, Humor
Warnings: AU
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 7382 | Read count: 4862 [Report This]
Published: 05/04/10 | Updated: 05/04/10


Reviewer: Fire_and_Ice Signed Liked
Date: 05/04/10 Title: Chapter 1: mardi gras

I think it's tough to continue a story that isn't your own, and that most people couldn't get it right. For this one-shot, though, I think you did a great job at Jinni, and it was intriguing, believable and interesting, making it a success! Congrats, I hope you win!

Author's Response: ty....i found it easier to write from re-reading a few chapters of the real story that dealt with the idea of a holiday and the dancing...thank you very much for the review!



Title: ~Angel or Devil?~ by luna45
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 22]
Summary: Create your own banner at mybannermaker.com!
Naomi Yoshida was home-schooled all her life and now she's going to Konoha Private High school. At first it was all fun and games but what happens when good, funny, clumsy Uzumaki Naruto and leader of the Hebi gang, bad, rebel Uchiha Sasuke both want her?
WARNINGS MAY CHANGE!!!!
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers > High School Fics
Characters: Asuma Sarutobi, Chouji Akimichi, Gaara, Maito Gai, Hinata Hyuuga, Ino Yamanaka, Iruka Umino, Itachi Uchiha, Jiraiya, Juugo, Kakashi Hatake, Karin, Kiba Inuzuka, Kurenai Yuuhi, Rock Lee, Naruto Uzumaki, Neji Hyuuga, Sai, Sakura Haruno, Sasori, Sasuke Uchiha, Shikamaru Nara, Shino Aburame, Shizune, Suigetsu Hoozuki, Temari, Tenten, Tsunade
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 | Completed: No | Word count: 30074 | Read count: 41557 [Report This]
Published: 28/06/10 | Updated: 31/01/13


Reviewer: Fire_and_Ice Signed Liked
Date: 24/07/11 Title: Chapter 8: Romeo and Juliet

Yaay! Thank you for the update! It was great, I really like your writing! :) Please update again sooon~!



Title: Bunaíodh de Luíonn by fUnKyToEs
Rated: 18 Liked [Reviews - 103]
Summary: Naruto returns after two years to find a changed world. A mission to the Sound Village proves to be more than just rescuing one lost friend. In a world where the inception of lies clouds all hope and reason, will the speaker of truth be heard?
Category: General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden, OC-centric
Characters: All, OC, Pair OCNeji, Pair OCSasu, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Action/Adventure, Horror, Humor, Romance
Warnings: OOC, Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 | Completed: No | Word count: 108601 | Read count: 11343 [Report This]
Published: 06/08/10 | Updated: 16/05/12


Reviewer: Fire_and_Ice Signed Liked
Date: 03/11/14 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

So I read this series over again. It has a special place in my heart. I'm still holding on to what little hope I can that this story will be completed... So many loose ends :/ anyway, I love the fact that this is still here to read whenever I want. It's just an empty, disappointing feeling to know that I'll probably never get a conclusion to this story, and even a few others that mean a lot to me from the time period that this was posted. These stories shaped me, and helped me through dark times. So thank you for having written this much. It is truly appreciated. If you do ever end up seeing this, please feel free to contact me. I wouldn't mind speaking with you :) anyways, hope you had a great Halloween, and once more, thank you very much for all your time and effort in this story.



Reviewer: Fire_and_Ice Signed Liked
Date: 12/11/10 Title: Chapter 3: The Return: Chapter 3

Yay! I love this story so much, and I can't wait to find out what Naruto does! By the way, we last saw Sasuke and Grace confess their love and kiss. (I'm pretty sure...) Then it moved on to this sequel. Is Sasuke really this oblivious and uncaring that he doesn't care about her anymore? But nevermind that for a moment. I live in Canada, so we share mostly the same holidays and what you're doing is fine by me. Plus, the alternate-world-fantasy from Valentine's might make a pretty cool story! I can't wait to read more about Grace, be it through this story or another! ^^ Great writing, as usaul, and thank you so much for updating and making my week!



Reviewer: Fire_and_Ice Signed Liked
Date: 06/08/10 Title: Chapter 1: Return: Chapter 1

That...was...AMAZING! I'm not sure I understood much in the Orochimaru part, but the rest was intersting and well-written! I can't wait to find out what happens, I'm so giddy! Nice title, good way of introducing things for Shippuuden! Thnak you so much for getting this out, and I sincerely hope you update soon! You rock! ~F&I



Reviewer: Fire_and_Ice Signed Liked
Date: 16/07/11 Title: Chapter 6: Return: Chapter 6

THANK YOU SOO MUCH FOR THE UPDATE! I love this story so-freaking-much, it's crazy! :D I hate this new guy, the tutor, he's rude... >:[ But maybe that's just because I hate being cut off? I loved the conversation between Grace and Sai, and I reeaaaalllly want something to come up between Grace and Neji or Gaara! ;) And then when Akatsuki hears of her, so will Orochimaru, and so will Sasuke, but by the time she finds her and she confronts him for the whole i-confess-my-love-to-you-and-you-get-me-almost-dead-for-years, and he'll get mad cause she'll have someone else! :3 She better be a hard-ass to him! He's a jackass for everything he's done! So thanks again for the chapter, I will adore you forever, so long as you get more chapters up soon! X3



Title: The Reincarnation of a Legend by silverwolf1213
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 141]
Summary:


Thanks to BattyBigSister for the wonderful banner!

She was running away.

Finally.

Finally, Suki Kurohoshi was running away from her village. The six-year-old was finally able to escape from her terrible life.

She was going to run as far as her legs could carry her. She was going to abandon a home that was never a home to begin with. She was going to leave behind villagers who hated her for a reason that she did not know of.

Yes, run away. That would solve all of her problems. In a perfect world, running away would be the answer to everything.

Unfortunately, this isn't a perfect world. And running away won't solve every problem.

You can run away from home, and you can run away from people you grew up with. But now Suki is going to realize that the one thing that no one can run away from... is destiny.


Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Character-Centric, General Fiction > Naruto, Het Romance > Fluff, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU
Characters: All, OC, Pair OCNaru
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, General, Humor, Romance, Spiritual
Warnings: AU, OOC
Challenge: None
Series: Destiny is Calling
Chapters: 14 | Completed: No | Word count: 79859 | Read count: 50280 [Report This]
Published: 27/11/10 | Updated: 17/01/12


Reviewer: Fire_and_Ice Signed Liked
Date: 27/11/10 Title: Chapter 2: The Twelve Animals

I actually like this story a lot, surprisingly! I don't usually read new stories, but this one really caught me! It sounds really historical, just the way you wrote it makes it easy for me to believe. And something that doesn't happen often, the title is very accurate and alluring. I can't wait for more, and there's nothing I'd change, except maybe longer chapters, but what can you do? So please keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing where this story goes!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much for your kind words! I\'m so glad that you enjoy this story. It makes me really excited to know that someone out there is reading and enjoying! I have the next chapter planned, and I\'m hoping I can make some longer chapters to keep my readers happy :) Thanks again for reviewing!



Reviewer: Fire_and_Ice Signed Liked
Date: 04/07/11 Title: Chapter 10: Stop And Stare

Yaay! Great chapter, it was quite long! :D The plot is thick, and the secret is out! Thanks for updating, it was great! You do a fantastic job!

Author's Response: I know! Yay! My longest chapter yet, possibly even out of all of my stories. The plot thickens as the secret is revealed... Oh no! What will happen?! Haha, just kidding... mostly... Aw, you\'re welcome for updating. Thanks so much for the compliment! I\'m glad this chapter was able to please. Thank you for reading and reviewing, it means a lot! You\'re awesome!



Title: Tears and Rain by MIngWei
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 11]
Summary: Chizuko is running away from home when she collapses from exhaustion just outside of Konoha. After she wakes up she meets a boy who's really nice to her. Almost too nice. But that's not the worst of her problems: someone from home is after her, and the last thing she wants is for him to find her.
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Timeskip
Characters: Kiba Inuzuka, Pair OCKiba, Sakura Haruno
Genres: None
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 | Completed: No | Word count: 9227 | Read count: 9604 [Report This]
Published: 01/12/10 | Updated: 18/02/11


Reviewer: Fire_and_Ice Signed Liked
Date: 01/12/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yay! I'm excited now! This is very interesting, and draws people in quickly with the small tidbits of background information, and then the whole Sakura and Kiba thing. I can't wait for an update! I want to know what happens to her so badly... Thank you for writing the story, you're doing a great job! ^^

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I\'m new to this site, so you\'re one of my first reviewers, and I\'m so glad that according to the reviews I don\'t suck as bad as I thought I did XD\r\n\r\nI\'ll try updating as soon as I can! ^_^



Reviewer: Fire_and_Ice Signed Liked
Date: 04/12/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This was so great! Although it's the second chapter and their relationship has already progressed so much... eh, I'm a little worried about that. And I agree with the Kiba-cutting-Chizuko-off thing. But I do think you improved and it was written well! It's a great idea to have the festival, and Kiba wanting to impress her! It's classic, but original, too!

Plus, I'd be glad to offer any help as a beta! It's okay if you choose someone else. I'm offering, for one thing, because I think it's important for you to have some selection.

So please keep that in mind, and know that you're doing a great job with the story! Thank you for updating! ^^

Author's Response: Oh, heh heh, well...I think it\'s just seven chapters, and I haven\'t introduced the conflict yet! Maybe I waited too late to do that, then??? I don\'t know, I just didn\'t want to post too much in one chapter :/ And there should be some character development with Chizuko, so hopefully she\'ll be able to speak enough :)\r\n\r\nAnd thank you for your offer! I\'m so excited! I don\'t really know how it works all that much; is it a bad idea to have more than one for a story?? Haha. I just think multiple opinions would really help. But I\'ll definitely keep you in mind when I\'m updating, which will probably be...in a couple weeks, cuz of finals. Oh, wait! My last one\'s next Tuesday, so maybe just one week :D Unless I want to super-procrastinate :P



Title: The Two Eyes by fleamichael
Rated: 12/12A Liked [Reviews - 16]
Summary: It was a dark night.
Two pairs of eyes stared in the darkness.
Both had sensed the presence that night.
The dark presence that intended to destroy their village.
The village that had cast them out.
The village that hated them for their eyes.
Through the hate, they met, and by becoming friends, they had survived.

This is my first fanfiction, so its not perfect.
Enjoy.
Category: General Fiction > Pre-Series
Characters: None
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 21841 | Read count: 31994 [Report This]
Published: 03/12/10 | Updated: 27/03/11


Reviewer: Fire_and_Ice Signed Liked
Date: 04/12/10 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow, this is really great! Short, but very original and enticing! I can't wait to see how it develops! Great job, and please keep up the good work!



Title: Love Circles by Nejisgirl
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 37]
Summary: It took a long time for her to understand that he was not going to come back. Her time alone made her heart cold. It would take someone special to put it back together, but now after all these years could she really let someone in.
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Sasuke and Sakura
Characters: All
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 | Completed: No | Word count: 59421 | Read count: 218706 [Report This]
Published: 06/03/11 | Updated: 18/10/11


Reviewer: Fire_and_Ice Signed Liked
Date: 13/06/11 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 not this again

Yaaay! I love the idea of a sequel! (I think that's the word you were looking for (; ) This is a great story, what with the awesome plot mixed with complete and utter madness! Teehee... Thee characters make it funny! :3



Reviewer: Fire_and_Ice Signed Liked
Date: 21/03/11 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 crazy plan, stupid dope and the bold blonde

Oh, wow! This was so good! This story serves as the comedic relief (while still having a plot)for my life!

You're doing an amazing job, and I cannot wait to see how Konan and Sakura ull that one off! :)

So thank you so much for updating, and do it again soon, please! ^o^

Author's Response: thank you!!!! :D



Title: Narutastic: A legacy by SincereGlomp
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 34]
Summary: Brought to you by yogurt, because you can't say 'yo' without getting hurt.
Me and the nin's chillin... GET AWAY FROM MY MOMS NAIL POLISH ITACHI! Random oneshots for your enjoyment. Rated PG because of slight language and the once-in-a-blue-moon suggestive stuffs I will try to upload at least once a week.
OROCHIMARU! GIVE ME THE REMOTE!! NO MORE SOAPS!!!
Gah, what's with that snake and soaps!?!
Category: OC-centric, MadFic > Parody, General Fiction > Naruto, MadFic > Script Fic, General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden
Characters: All
Genres: Parody
Warnings: OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 | Completed: No | Word count: 7131 | Read count: 40042 [Report This]
Published: 11/03/11 | Updated: 09/10/11


Reviewer: Fire_and_Ice Signed Liked
Date: 29/03/11 Title: Chapter 4: Ninjas, Cell Phones, and Homework Interuptions

Woah. That was... interesting... And completely random... I love your writing style! :)

Author's Response: Aw, thank you.



Title: Love Hate by Salacia101
Rated: 18 Liked [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Salacia has been with Orochimaru for many years and is very strong. She respects and admires Orochimaru immensively. She enjoys her life within the Sound Village, well except for Kabuto, her common mission partner and annoyance. He irritates her so much, but as much as she hates him...she loves him deep down just as much.
WARNING-GRAPHC LEMONS I own nothing but my own character.
Category: OC-centric, Het Romance > Angst
Characters: Kabuto Yakushi
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 44 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 42225 | Read count: 17575 [Report This]
Published: 22/03/11 | Updated: 05/04/11


Reviewer: Fire_and_Ice Signed Liked
Date: 29/03/11 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: In The Flesh

Wow, this is most definetely in my top favourites! It`s soo good, please update soon! I cannot bear the wait!

Author's Response: I update alot. Just about to with another chap. Glad you like it. :)