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Penname: crazykittylover [Contact]
Real name: Lizzy
Membership status: Member
Member since: 14/01/09
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Beta-reader: Yes
Naruto funny Pictures, Images and Photos

Hello to those that chose to read this bio....why you want to know stuff about me is beyond me but, I bet it's just because I'm so choco-lious....Mah joking, joking....

In all seriousness these are the things I’m willing to share about myself.

My mood now a days is simply content on the most part with dabs of anger and frustration but aren’t we all like this for the most part? I like Cross Country and sports in general, unfortunately due to life’s nasty habits of throwing me curve balls I have become a little bit a recluse. But in that I have found peace in my mind for the most part so I can’t truly complain about it being a negative point. I’m also a DM for D&D which is kinda fun, if you haven’t tried, you should its very cool.

I'm still a great lover many, many animes and mangas over the years but my first love Naruto will always have a special place in my heart. I’m still Lover of Gaara, Kakuzu, Hidan, Itachi, Kakashi, Gai, Orochimaru, Kabuto,Tobi, Deidara, Shikamaru, and Sai……and of course Nartuo. I do not approve of the current “Naruto” spinoff series and to be honest the ending sucked but I will accept that as the true ending.

My many other characters that have taken my interests include like Light Yagami, L Lawiet, Luffy, Zoro, Sanji, Ichigo, Ishida, Conan, Kyo, Yuki, Yoh, Inuyasha, Banya, Cooro, Husky, etc...The list could go on into lesser known stories but I feel that you understand my love for stories and their characters in general.


I use to be an active writer but I had to put it on the back burners to my life and the road it led me down.
So I really don't manage enough time to get around to writing like I use to, but I do think about my fictions and work on them...Just takes forever to publish them to yal but as of recently in 2016 I’ve been revising my current stories and hopefully will get posting again sooner than later.

I have a habitual tendency to be random and forgetful at times....I said I was random yes? Mah...I also tend to seem mad or scatter brain so don't flame me or be rude; it's just how my thoughts seem to run. And if I offend any of you, sorry. Don't mean to be offensive, only critical or helpful.

Completed Works:

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Happy Mardi Gras Jinni!
One shot for Jinni and Kakashi! ~DropDeadThenDance�s contest entry
This is a one shot story for DropDeadThenDance�s competition. I made a story line map for possible ideas looking for something new and �hip� and well�I got this. Jinni X Kakashi in the very popular and amusing holiday; Mardi Gras!! It�s very long so well deal; I wanted it to very detail and a crown jewel of my mind�s fancy. Enjoy.

Happy Valentine Day!
This is a one shot story for DropDeadThenDance�s competition. I made a story line map for possible ideas looking for something new and �hip� and well�I got this. Jinni X Kakashi in the very popular and amusing holiday; Valentine Day!
BTY I do not one Naruto or Jinni and none of this actually happened in DropDeadThenDance�s story. It�s just a challenge and something to amuse myself with.


Let Me Keep You Warm
What was supposed to be a simple D-Rank mission turned into something hot and steamy? Feelings will be revealed, truths told, futures written.

My Poem Collection
Just some random poems I've had for over the years and now I've decided to share them and see what others think

You might be a Narutard if
You might be a Narutard if...
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CURRENTLY REVISINGS AS OF NOW

writing Pictures, Images and Photos

Note that I'm currently rewriting all my currently released stories along with their summaries. I'm trying to get the stories to be of 8/10 - 10/10 then a 5/10 - 7/10 quality. Impossible to some but, it's a good goal to keep and make come true. I'm also getting rid of a few stories that I just lost all faith in finishing or even continuing so, they will be either gone or never touched again. Anyway if you have any suggestions on the matters please contact me; I don't mind at all


Akatsuki Teens
What would happen if the Akatsuki had siblings and they were teenagers?

An Iris Light
A young albino woman with severe mental retardation falls asleep in an oxford hospital bed to wake up in a Konoha one. With no clue how she got there but, a photographic memory of everyone�s file there, leads her into a dangerous place with many eager for her knowledge.

A Seeing Beauty
Loneliness is what she breathes, desolateness is what she lives. She is in a limbo in her mind of self hatred and loathing for what happened. She should’ve saved her, should’ve kept them safe from him, but none of it mattered now.
A broken young woman walks a trail of self recognition and forgiveness to the unknown truths of the past and her forgotten heritage that brings her even back to the Naruto realm. Now she must choose her path forward, to either drown in the past or rise for the future and live not for others but herself.
*OC/Sasu pairing with other cannon character pairingsWARNING: will contain spoilers for the series so if u doesn�t want to it spoiled for u then don�t read!

Behind the Scenes with LCEA
This is behind the scenes and profiling of the newest clan in the Naruto world.

Lights, Camera the Eight are in Action
Eight actresses with their own infamous YouTube show The Eight Obessors fall into their dream world, Naruto but, not all is as it seems from the show. The gifts they receive and their knowledge of the world proves dangerous and their leader�s mind knows just how to use it.

Memory Touch
I've been near Light Yagami all our senior year, I've touched his hand once in that time that�s all I needed to see that he was unhappy with the world around us. I tried to think of ways to fix this but, the second I touched his hand with mine at graduation�I found out that he had taken a new hobby�being Kira.

White Puppet Hands
Nami a white albino puppeteer that has a rare disorder on growth has been on a smaller scale in life. But when she buys a strange looking puppet from a Naruto Convention saleslady, she gets more than she wanted. She gets tossed into the Shippuden time frame before Naruto comes home�and she�s even shorter.



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Coming Soon!
(what I mean is that this following stories will being released and worked on whenever I get them, my life is too busy for so many reasons.**)
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Originally I meant to release all of these during the 2010, well the life altering disease called ... Bummer yes but, I hope you will understand, writing is an art and cannot be rushed! ~Nah, it will take me that F****ing long to get all my ideas out onto this site with the quality I hope for and make them sound coherent; Gomen.

There's nothing here for the time unfortunely because I'm editing which stories I will actually get on and finish to those that will just be tossed away and never thought of again. So I can't release any lists of ideas because they might not even come into fruition, gomen again.

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But even with that, there are other works by few authors that I like and totally support in saying you should read! Note don't read if you don't like Mary-Sue makefun of, Yaoi, Lemon, Death, Dark, Rape, Yuri, or Blood.

A Girl Named Yama
A map to memory lane
A Row in the Konoha Library
A Twisted Type of Love
A Vampire Rose
Akatsuki Movienight
Another Survivor: Uchiha Love Blossoms
Beautiful Lie
Beneath the surface
Best Served Cold
Bird
Brave New World
Broken Journal Pages
Crying Skies
Dancing in the Moonlight
Down the Sodden Hill
Feral Dreams
FIRE HOUND: Eye of Destruction
Forgetting
Forgotten Thunder
Game. Set. Match
How to Adapt and Overcome
I am Twisted, Broken and Loved
Kakashi's lessons in seduction
Kokoro Uchiha
Konoha High School
Little Spark: Intro to Fire Hound
Lover In Training
Mangoes and Oranges
Mission of lust
My Twisted Heart, Tear Me Apart
Naruto and the Deathly Hallows
Naruto and the Goblet of Fire
No Hope Left
Onari
Peanut Butter and Pickle is BitterSweet Happiness
Peppermint Flavored Glass
Pets
Phone Calls From Nobody
Realization
Reverse Psychology
Shinigami no Naruto: Power of the Soul
Summer Season
Sweet Charity
The joys of having younger siblings
The People We've Become
The Singing Consipiracy
The Unknown Misery of Umino Iruka
Thunder and Swirls
To Find Warmth In the Snow
Truth or Dare With The K-Ks!
Truthspeaker
Unbreakable Bonds
Walk With Me, Change Our Worlds
Who Would've Known

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I'll be editing my Bio often or rarely so check back to see if I'm writing something awesome or you want to say hi. Also I do challenges for fun so if you have one I might do tell me. I give good but, truthful reviews and I do beta-reading just so you know. Chow

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Stories by crazykittylover [16]
Series by crazykittylover [2]
Challenges by crazykittylover [1]
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Reviews by crazykittylover


Title: Pets by recita1717
Rated: 18 Liked [Reviews - 128]
Summary: Shikamaru, Kankurou, Kiba, Neji, and Shino are captured, and all end up... changed into pets? Sorry, just read the story for further explaination.
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Fluff (Shonen-ai/Yaoi)
Characters: Kankurou, Kiba Inuzuka, Neji Hyuuga, Shikamaru Nara, Shino Aburame
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Dark, Drama, Graphic lemon, Tragedy
Warnings: AU, Dark, Rape, Sexual Themes, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 | Completed: No | Word count: 111358 | Read count: 25856 [Report This]
Published: 06/09/07 | Updated: 10/04/12


Reviewer: crazykittylover Signed Liked
Date: 18/01/11 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

thank god for the security breach! i felt like i was going to be sick with fear and rage.....kayane is such an animal! i cant wait to see wat he gets for his actions! im just so shaken with wats hapned......oh its a good feeling to get from a story.

no im no pain lover im, just saying its good to get such a strong reaction from a story. ive been so addicted to this story ive been like just waiting for the next chapter!! keep writing and continue with the sheer awesome work!!!!!

Author's Response: I\'ma goin I\'ma goin, finals are upon me right now :(



Reviewer: crazykittylover Signed Liked
Date: 29/04/10 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

ohhhh.......the plot is thicking to its climax!!! I cant wait to see wat hapns next~~ keep it up! this story is one of the best tht i lik most!

Author's Response: Thank you kindly, I\'ll do my best while not ignoring my college papers toooo much :)



Title: Peppermint Flavored Glass by brumal
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Everyone has a hobby. For Naruto, it's eating peppermint flavored candy. But what is it about that candy that makes it so special to him? And how does glass incorporate itself with this anyway?
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Dark, Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1321 | Read count: 2453 [Report This]
Published: 22/09/07 | Updated: 22/09/07


Reviewer: crazykittylover Signed Liked
Date: 20/06/16 Title: Chapter 1: Peppermint Flavored Glass

Well it has been a very long time since I came to this website but I have to say your story was first for me to reread after all this time and it reminded me why I loved reading fanfiction. I found it just as compelling as the first time I read it all those years ago. It's so bittersweet to read for it reminds me of life in how we try to fill a void in our hearts with such artificial things that will never be perfect substitutes in what we truly need. We think we need it and we depend on it so much that when the thing we truly need presents itself, we are lost to how to claim it but claim it we must for how can that shadow blare loudly as the star that we have blazing in front of us? I love the focus on that though; the language that you use to describe the loss and heartache; the overall looming toll it was having and the spiral downwards of needing to fill what he so desperately needed from life and that being love. It is still sad to me to read him gaining what he desired only at the end of reminiscing on his life. Like a metaphor for everyone to read about life. Overall I feel that the syntax was done well and there isn’t really anything I would change on it. It will always be a beautiful bittersweet reading for me to remember and enjoy. Thank you.


CKL



Reviewer: crazykittylover Signed Liked
Date: 25/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Peppermint Flavored Glass

This story was like starcresten lovers, or was it star crossed...doesn't really matter. The story itself is hard to decipher for well...its unique in its own way. It seems to be in a sadden but, accepting light and to me it feels like that could happen to someone. They have a comfort item that they keep with them all their lives and when they find something even better than it they forget it but, if what was better gone they still have it...Like a rope to keep you from falling...this is a really well writing peice of work.

Author's Response: I really don't understand why I never replied to your two reviews at the time of your submitting them (especially when it seems like I got to your other ones...), but I am truly sorry for not answering promptly! It's almost a joke, how late I'm getting back to you, but I hope you know that I am still very sincere about my gratitude for your support! (I'm not sure if you still feel the same about me though, haha!) But... thank you for all your insightful reviews and support. I appreciated them highly three years ago, and I still do, very much.... C=



Title: A Row in the Konoha Library by brumal
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 7]
Summary: It was always that one row where they would sit down, reading their books, ignoring each other, but acknowledging each other. Will it be that one row where the two of them will realize the meaning of their friendship?
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 2000 | Read count: 2570 [Report This]
Published: 22/09/07 | Updated: 22/09/07


Reviewer: crazykittylover Signed Liked
Date: 25/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: A Row in the Konoha Library

This story was quite unusal for you...it had a slightly more fluffy ending. I like it though; it makes me think how we act in real life. We start out in the world unknowing and somewhat alone and then evolve to be who we were meant to be. We have our struggles and mistakes to reflect on but, in the end it to us just matters what we feel and have we fully lived our lives the way that would make it worth while...

It's always been hard for me to analyze works and say what they make me feel or what i think they mean...mostly because the works i look at hold no interest to me or i just really don't see the reason to why i have to look deeper. But yours have a certain characteristic that i like a story, they have human ideals behind them making them seem more.. well...just more....i'm at a lost to what they would be more of...i guess that's just enough for me to take pleasure in reading your stories.

Author's Response: I'm kind of at a loss for what to say, and I really wish I hadn't left this account for so long. It would have been so much more meaningful if I had answered you right away, but this really isn't the time to be griping about that! If this ever reaches you, I hope you understand that I didn't mean to ignore this, and that I am very sorry about my tardiness! -- But, that aside, I really am very touched. I know that I have a distinct style and "flavor" preference when it comes to writing, but the fact that you were able to pick up that this was "unusual" for me was such a surprise! I admit that I don't really know what I was thinking, leaving this so fluffy, but I'm so happy that you liked it, despite that. I've always tried to write with a certain degree of first-hand experience and to insert some deeper meaning to my stories. Superficiality is nice, sometimes, when all you want to do is relax, but I enjoy stories that make me think deeply--just like you! And to know that I somehow made that clear--that I was able to make someone look beyond what the surface tells--I'm so very grateful. Thank you so much for all your kind words.



Title: Imaginary Boyfriend by Sacryde
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 6]
Summary: To anyone passing by at that time, it would have seemed as if Ino were simply talking to herself and smiling at her thoughts. But at that particular moment, Ino didn't seem to care. She was happy to be wrapped in her boyfriends' arms, away from prying eyes, with no one around to destroy the moment of peace for the two of them. [ONE-SHOT]
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs
Characters: Sakura Haruno, Hinata Hyuuga, Neji Hyuuga, Shikamaru Nara, Tenten, Naruto Uzumaki, Ino Yamanaka
Genres: WAFF
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1173 | Read count: 1771 [Report This]
Published: 03/10/07 | Updated: 03/10/07


Reviewer: crazykittylover Signed Liked
Date: 21/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1.

awww how cute! i thik its so fluffy and nice! ^^ good job

Author's Response: Hehe, thank you! ^^



Title: Anonymous Strangers by brumal
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 6]
Summary: This world is full of strangers. A name with a face, a face with a name. Sometimes with no name or even a face. But when you gain a face and name together, what does that mean? Are you still strangers? Can you fall in love? Ask them. Maybe they will know.
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 3605 | Read count: 2443 [Report This]
Published: 04/10/07 | Updated: 04/10/07


Reviewer: crazykittylover Signed Liked
Date: 25/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Anonymous Strangers

this again much different to what you usually write and i found it incoherent at times but it flows oddly enough. The world is vast when it is small with many faces too many to remember or forget. I find it amusing to meet new strangers; you meet and find many with same interests or values all the time...in fact sometimes its easier to be around strangers than friends for there can be no judgement for there is not enough to judge on. Now is there? Just simple little questions that i hear in my mind along with others reading your stories...they truly bring out the human idealism in me and i thank you for it.



Title: Game. Set. Match. by Hito Rasu
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 18]
Summary: Ino and Sakura get trapped during a mission. Both learn that things are not always as they appear to be. This is connected to "A Game of Chance" but it occurs earlier in the story timeline.
Category: Shojo-ai/Yuri Romance > Top Pairs > Sakura and Ino
Characters: Sakura Haruno
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Yuri
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 | Completed: No | Word count: 21825 | Read count: 28940 [Report This]
Published: 08/10/07 | Updated: 06/11/09


Reviewer: crazykittylover Signed Liked
Date: 06/11/09 Title: Chapter 12: Trouble is, Gee Whiz, I'm Dreaming My Life Away

XD finally u hav updated!!! im so happy! this was such a good story and it was like totally awesome! great chapter and i cant wait to read more ^^



Reviewer: crazykittylover Signed Liked
Date: 10/02/09 Title: Chapter 11: If I Didn't Know Now What I Didn't Know Then

wow tht is amazing, if theres more plz share, this is a fantastic story!



Title: Lover In Training by Sacryde
Rated: R18 Liked [Reviews - 30]
Summary: After a surprising night in the training grounds of Konoha, Gaara begins to feel things - things that he has never felt before. But when Naruto - the object of his desire - starts training him on how to get the person he likes, will Gaara be able to hold himself back any longer? Or will he finally let go of his well-worn self control and become the man he has to be in order to get the blond to like him back?

[PREVIOUSLY TITLED: WERE THE STARS ALWAYS THIS BRIGHT?]
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Naruto and Gaara
Characters: Gaara, Sakura Haruno, Tsunade, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Angst, WAFF
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 14002 | Read count: 5765 [Report This]
Published: 17/10/07 | Updated: 21/01/08


Reviewer: crazykittylover Signed Liked
Date: 21/07/09 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 05

*lol tht last lin

"...you wanna see what else I learned from watching porn?"

very amusing and very cute....i love ur story and hope u write mor stories!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! Hehe, I love making Gaara say random things like that. ^^



Reviewer: crazykittylover Signed Liked
Date: 21/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 01

love this story i totally added this one as the first fav of my account!

Author's Response: Aww, really?! That makes me so happy!! I haven\'t written in forever, and I\'d almost forgotten about this site, but now thanks to you I might have to start writing again! Thank you so much, you have no idea how much that means to me! :DD



Reviewer: crazykittylover Signed Liked
Date: 21/07/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 04

the battle thing pretty good...i lik tht Gaara is going after wat he wants! go GaarNaru

Author's Response: Thanks! The battle was really hard for me to write actually, lol, but I\'m glad you liked it! And yes, go GaarNaru! Best pairing ever, IMO. :DDD



Reviewer: crazykittylover Signed Liked
Date: 21/07/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 03

hmm....Gaara is in love..*sighs happly* and the kiss was nice...good fluff ^^

Author's Response: Thank you, hun! You\'re making me so happy, hehe. ^^



Reviewer: crazykittylover Signed Liked
Date: 21/07/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 02

hehehe Gaara is so cute and amusing wen it comes to love, and such...it makes me smile

Author's Response: Aww, thanks. I try to make Gaara as amusing as possible because I love his character so much. ^^



Reviewer: crazykittylover Signed Liked
Date: 22/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 01

im glad i mad u hapy...this was actually the reason i wanted to join the site...to giv revs to my stories and this is by far the top fav to me



Title: Are you a true Narutard? by runescap21
Rated: 12/12A [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Really, are you crazy about naruto?
Category: General Fiction
Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Challenges: You Know You're A Narutard When...,
Challenge: You Know You're A Narutard When...,
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 217 | Read count: 1660 [Report This]
Published: 27/10/07 | Updated: 27/10/07


Reviewer: crazykittylover Signed
Date: 20/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh ya? i memorized the Water Dragon Projectile Technique

man...i dont hav a life....and... me and my bros are going as the uchiha trio...im so a narutard! i forced my bros to do this *evil smile*



Title: The People We've Become by Zephyras
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 57]
Summary: At first, no one could've guessed the consequences that are to come when Uzumaki Naruto disappears. However, his departure begins a chain of events that changes the fate of Konoha and the two teammates he left behind. Seven years later, Uchiha Sasuke and Haruno Sakura are on the S-Class list, Team Seven assembles once more, and they all have secrets. AU, NaruSasu, SakuLee.
Category: Het Romance > Angst, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Shikamaru and Temari
Characters: Naruto Uzumaki, Pair LeeSaku, Pair SasuNaru, Pair ShikaTema, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Dark
Warnings: AU, Dark, Death, Incest, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 | Completed: No | Word count: 88364 | Read count: 52085 [Report This]
Published: 17/11/07 | Updated: 04/11/12


Reviewer: crazykittylover Signed Liked
Date: 03/09/09 Title: Chapter 11: Sakuya-hime's Revenge

yeah!!! she killed Danzou! tht baster givs me the chills! lov her sadistic manner ^^ and awesome justu with naruto



Reviewer: crazykittylover Signed Liked
Date: 21/09/10 Title: Chapter 17: Three Kinds of Cowards

Wow it's been a while since I read this one. Gomen for not reviewing earlier, I've been ill for sometime now and just started to get over the worst.

This chapter seemed very monsterous in development and extremely interesting to read.

I'm a little worried if you'll have Tobi intervene like in the manga or Sasuke wanders off. But that's what makes a story exciting! Not knowing what will be and what will not.

I like how you wrote this chapter and I don't see anything to change. Sakura wandering the forest trying to find Naruto and nearly kills herself doing so. I like how Nii and the Nanabi are shocked about Naruto's hand...that would take a lot of explaining to do....and restraints on killing Sasuke and Sakura....Mah keep up the good work my author and keep writing on!



Reviewer: crazykittylover Signed Liked
Date: 03/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: Cherry

wow this story is so different! i wonder where naruto is and how everthing developed with him gone. besides gaara and such



Reviewer: crazykittylover Signed Liked
Date: 03/09/09 Title: Chapter 2: Legend

well..this story has me hooked! im going to read on and see wat hapns nxt! write on!!



Reviewer: crazykittylover Signed Liked
Date: 03/09/09 Title: Chapter 3: Maelstrom

man i really feel bad for this guys. team 7 has had a hard life.



Reviewer: crazykittylover Signed Liked
Date: 03/09/09 Title: Chapter 4: Circling Around Again

hmmm....well this is actually very nice. team 7 back together and no doing a hunt on itachi! ^^



Reviewer: crazykittylover Signed Liked
Date: 03/09/09 Title: Chapter 15: Falling, Falling

O,o wooooooowww tht was cool Sakura killed kisame! *hapy smile*

i wonder wat will b nxt.

i hate madara, lov tobi misa wants tobi back.....



Reviewer: crazykittylover Signed Liked
Date: 03/09/09 Title: Chapter 12: Gott ist Tot

meh depressing chapter with ironicly depressing music im listening to nice job! i lik the ealer crack on sakura wanting to b a red head



Reviewer: crazykittylover Signed Liked
Date: 03/09/09 Title: Chapter 14: On the Edge of the Horizon

wow tht sucks the child and all. its sickening yet not apalling to me....man im twisted