You keep telling yourself that buddy. Whatever gets you through it *chuckles* But know one thing, Carlos owns your ass, Akina may own your bitch contract by Carlos owns your ass XD So you might as well give in *chuckles*

Che, so odd

Ha, I spoke like you...>>

Well Ty...that certainly was interesting, if not somewhat amusing to read.

You know, the whole making all it italics made it more dramatic somehow.

Well, why don't you post this stuff on DA? I'm sure you'd get lots of people to go all smart emo with you.

lol, yup well...I'm done sassing up your page...Later!

*hates you*


Of course you end there! After I wait for HOW LONG?! Psht I'm not reading this anymore you punk

With much hate, God

Author's Response: Lol I\'ll talk to you on MSN =P

xDDD

Freaking wonderful!

Loved this one with all the movie titles...very cool.

Good job!
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-- thelovelymoose1 : Thanks! It took me quite a while to think them all up...

YOU BASTARD!!!! HURRY UP AND WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!

Why must you make me wait ;_;

I will be sure to yell at you everyday on MSN until you do update.

T.T You promised me ItaNaru and I wrote you SakuHina

You can't go back on your word you punk. I'll just never write yuri again.

*squeals while turning in circles* That was a great story!

I enjoy the accents *giggles a bit*

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

Just my personal choice but I enjoy shorter chapters...but I will certainly read your long ones!

Oh wow...that was just amazing.

I have read other letters you have written from the pov of other characters and how you can just get inside their minds is amazing.

It was truely sad to see Gaara say he loved Sakura but that he can't truely be with her and just gave her to Naruto.

I loved the ending 'With a tear that I can never shed.'

Simply amazing the talent you have. I look forward to more of your writings.
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-- Swords_and_Bandages : Thanks. Your work is good too. Especially Scham- you also seem to have a talent of getting into a character\'s mind and portraying their feelings and sentiments with a flourish. I usually don\'t like dark stories, but yours is great. What kind of ending will it have? I hope it can be happy, but I\'ll understand if it\'s sad.
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-- Swords_and_Bandages : Also, someone wrote a reply to Is This Summer Love. It\'s titled Your Love Keeps Me Warm, by milliexchan. Read that, if you like. I thought it was really good.

Yeah I noticed the part about the cigars and I was going to comment on that but I believe I still liked the second line more ^_^

*sigh* I miss Asuma xD
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-- Swords_and_Bandages : Thanks. Creativity needs inspiration. I hope no one here will run out of inspiration. Keep up the good work.

*giggles* Evidently I forgot a / in one of those HTML tags.....Thats what happens when you don't reread XD

*giggles and nods* Yeah she is an amazing writer! She posts or did post on AFF...haven't checked for a while because I think I've read everything she has written already XD

Oh man I LOVE flames with a passion, don't ask why :D I like getting them so much I kinda get sad when I don't get them. I know I'm a horrible author so it upsets me when no one points it out! God how I wish I could get some constructive criticism from people who aren't always whining at the same time! XD

haha, I get my criticism from my friends who aren't afraid to tell me I'm a moron.

*laughs and nods* Funny indeed ^__^

Author's Response:

I dunno. I don\'t think she\'s updated any stories recently, but she has posted and said that she\'s made resolutions to write this year, or something.

I doubt you\'re a horrible author.

*throws up*

THATS WHY I DON'T READ HET! Damn I'm so anti-het X.x

But I must admit >> > It wasn't bad ^^ Kinda cute *giggles* I like Tsunade so she is ok to read in het if I have to. The only other het couple I like to read and enjoy reading is KakaSaku.

FREAKING UP DATE OR I'LL KILL YOU JOY

HeheheheheheheheheheheheeBWAHAHAHAHAHAHA

I know where you live!!!! Kinda >> Not that I could get over there ...but still I could mail you an angry letter or something...or get someone to hack into your account find out your password and update for you!!! >> Cause >

*coughs and looks around*

Well anywho....^_^ Update!! Sorry that people on tonfa are a bunch of morons that are incapable or reviewing, thats why this site was going to hell for such a long time. Just do what I do... >> Well thats illegal so nevermind

Author's Response: Throw up? Throw up? Ehh... Don\'t know if I\'m honored that you read the story and threw up or sad that it made you throw up. Hmm... passive agressive aren\'t you? hm....

*cries* My response to Saisasi got cut off so I will rerespond here 8D

>< That is just so cool you would think this story good enough to bother your roommate XD Sorry Sasuke *giggles*

Your review fuels our souls *starry eyed*

We would probably update again but Crimson Clover went to bed D: she usually stays up all night with me but she wasn't feeling well *sigh*

Yeah I myself never sleep which explains why I update in the mornings XDDD

We hopefully have another update by tomorrow morning *giggles*

So if you ever get bored on one of your sleepless nights and you have a messenger just go ahead and IM me...cause I'm usually always on XD My names are on my profile ^_^

Thanks a lot and Later!

Author's Response: *giggles* I\'m such a moron...me and all my spelling mistakes >< Stupid computer XDD It maybe 3 in the morning here but my IMs keep flashing like crazy and that distracts the hell out of me XD *sigh* ....I\'m responding to my own review...how strange...............

Hm....well seeing how I myself am a writer of yuri I decided to take a look at yours, most people don't review yuri even though it gets the biggest flock of readers. I deleted all my stuff from here so you can't read any sorry.

Your details lack detail, I know thats a strange thing to say but its true. You add detail but just not the right kind that pulls people into the story...it seems like you wanted to get smut across more then characters feelings and emotions and that just doesn't cut it even for the smut people.

You have great potential and I would love to see grow as a writer, maybe with more practice you can one day be great ^__^

I wish you luck on continuing writing and over all I give this a 6/10 See...not that back ^___^

Later!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your comment. I will try and focus on the character\'s emotions the next time i write. Thank you again. ^__^