Real name: Jon
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Member since: 20/07/14
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I strive for the best... most of the time. I hope everyone enjoys my writing.
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 122]
Audriana never claimed to be perfect. That would be too ludicrous. Despite her outer appearances, she was one severely messed up teenager. And, yes, I did mean appearances with an s. Depending on who she was with, there was always a different personality. Audriana was an actress, and she used her skill to keep herself in check. It kept her from exploding on the world around her, and—more importantly—it kept her from getting close to people. She learned to read people and to react in just the right way for each person, no matter what the situation was. But what if one day something radical happened? What if this event brought her into contact with people who could catch her off guard, who could get to her? What if her world was suddenly turned upside down, causing her to face a whole new sort of reality?
Hey. My name is Audriana. I can be cheerful and innocent, or I can be the devil. Which would you like? Just don’t try to be my best friend. I don’t have “best friends” or "friends" period. They'll only betray you in the end.
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto, Het Romance > Fluff, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Real World
Characters: All, Haku, Kabuto Yakushi, Konohamaru Sarutobi, OC, Zabuza
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: OOC
Challenge: None
Series: Twisted Reality
Chapters: 27 | Completed: No | Word count: 60480 | Read count: 47810 [Report This]
Published: 10/02/12 | Updated: 06/08/14
Date: 06/08/14 Title: Chapter 27: A NOTE TO MY READERS
You have got to be the most quirky, talkative writer I have ever seen. I haven't read your book yet but it seems popular so maybe I'll give it a go :)
Author's Response: If you haven't read my story yet, how can you know I'm a quirky and talkative writer? XD Hmm, though I won't deny it. I must warn you, I read the first chapter of RC to kinda re-insert myself into the story, and I was appalled. So don't be surprised if the writing isn't too good, especially in the beginning. It really is quite horrendous. Anywho! I'm off, thanks for this review of saying hi. Out, Masumi TAT
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 130]Category: OC-centric, Het Romance > Angst
Characters: Pair OCKaka
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Dark
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 117 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 377039 | Read count: 72735 [Report This]
Published: 20/01/14 | Updated: 17/07/17
Date: 23/09/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Interesting, you put the tension on right away. The details were realistic and painted a not so pretty picture but did so well.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for giving my story a chance. Hope you like the rest.
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 19]
Being a genjutsu-based shinobi with little to no previous formal training is hard, especially when you've got amnesia to top it all off. As Riku uncovers the secrets of her clan and village, trouble arises in ways she never could have imagined, but with the help of her new comrades, maybe things won't be too bad.
Rated 15 for violence and language.
Not Stolen
In case you don't check author bios, and in case you feel like this sounds familiar, that's because I lost the password to my old account, so I'm reposting my stories on a new one to keep it all together. Hopefully this account's username makes it obvious enough though :'D
Category: OC-centric
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Dark, Humor
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 36 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 125505 | Read count: 22636 [Report This]
Published: 25/04/14 | Updated: 09/11/14
Date: 23/09/14 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
You could have started it off with more action and a little less explaining but overall decent job.
Thunbs up.
Author's Response: I think that when it comes to an AU-divergence story that heavily involves OC aspects and an OC as the main character, it helps to give an idea of how this story deviates from the main plot. Though if I'm going to be honest, I wasn't very fond of the prologue about halfway through the story = u=;; Starting things off is always the hardest part, I think. But anyway, thanks for your feedback! It's highly appreciated.
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 6]Category: General Fiction
Characters: Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General, Mystery, Sci-Fi
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 | Completed: No | Word count: 13707 | Read count: 5282 [Report This]
Published: 21/07/14 | Updated: 04/08/14
Date: 22/07/14 Title: Chapter 1: Stranger in Town
It's a lot to take in, and I'm not sure I know who's who yet. I'm aware that you plan to keep things covert at the start.
The first thought I had was "Where's the Naruto!?" it might be a bit of a let down for some people. Oh yeah I posted a new chapter for Artist of Chaos, and revised the first chapter, it would be cool if you checked it out.
Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Well I am not sure what you meant by "Where's the Naruto?" Like I said this is a modern day AU. The setting is modern day Japan. Don't know much about Japan mind you. Keep an eye out for updates and everything will make sense