Real name: Anais Velazquez
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Rated: 15
[Reviews - 220]
Let's break it down. Naruto's a reckless young shinobi with passion and heart. Striving to get attention and respect, he has an attitude that makes those around want to shut his loud mouth. Then there's his rival teammate, Sasuke, a boy who keeps himself at distance and makes no personal ties. His one-track vengeful mind and lust for his brother's demise has carried him through a life of hatred and solitude. Along comes the damsel in distress, Sakura, ditzy and unrequitedly in love with our dark, brooding avenger. Her low self-esteem and lack of ninja tact makes her a casualty for her team, and nothing more. Enter their mission - Rayne Sayomi, a carefree individual with the strength that would make a mountain shake. Her personality makes those around instantly like her, though her short temperament can bring out the demon inside. Literally. Together, these four are going to shape the paths they each take in life, but there are about ninety-nine ways to die between them and their future.
CHAPTERS CURRENTLY UNDER REVISION AS OF 7/21/15
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto
Characters: Akatsuki, Dosu Kinuta, Hidden Leaf Ninja, Hidden Sound Ninja, Itachi Uchiha, Izumo Kamizuki, Kakashi Hatake, Kin Tsuchi, Kyuubi (Kurama), Naruto Uzumaki, OC, Orochimaru, Pair OCSasu, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha, Zaku Abumi
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Humor, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 45 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 200080 | Read count: 225444 [Report This]
Published: 19/07/10 | Updated: 12/11/12
Date: 20/06/14 Title: Chapter 1: Character Information - Rayne Sayomi
That was sooo sad! I cried at the last moment! This is way i dont like sasuke. Good story! Awesome writing! 😫😢 just so sad!
Rated: R18
[Reviews - 4]Category: General Fiction, Het Romance
Characters: Kushina Uzumaki, Minato Namikaze (Yondaime Hokage)
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 | Completed: No | Word count: 16673 | Read count: 2534 [Report This]
Published: 24/04/12 | Updated: 08/05/12
Date: 19/05/15 Title: Chapter 1: The Girl From Whirlpool
I really liked the story come back plz!!! ノ( º _ ºノ)
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 130]
A withered past, and a blurry future.
My heart's on an auction, it goes out to the highest bid.
I live too fast, and I know I will lose her.
But there is an option.
To die is to live in her head.
An unforseen force interferes with the capture of Killer Bee’s jinchuuriki as a particular Akatsuki team enters the confines of the Hidden Cloud village. A dead man walking is revealed as mysteries and secrets of the past come to light. Having been bestowed the knowledge of what has lurked within the shadows for nearly the past two decades, will the one whose walked the path of death and learned the truth be heard in time to stop the Fourth Great Ninja War?
Sometimes a demon from the past is the only one that can save you.
Category: OC-centric
Characters: A (Yondaime Raikage), Akatsuki, All, Hidden Leaf Ninja, Itachi Uchiha, Kakashi Hatake, Killer B, Madara Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki, Obito Uchiha, OC, Pair OCSasu, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Humor, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 | Completed: No | Word count: 61721 | Read count: 93098 [Report This]
Published: 02/12/12 | Updated: 03/03/16
Date: 10/12/14 Title: Chapter 12: Bulletproof Love
Review to the Chapter Notes: That was funny I was literally laughing out loud! Caesar salad is an abomination to this story!
Date: 10/12/14 Title: Chapter 12: Bulletproof Love
Review for the story: I thought it was funny, it was hilarious! The part where she raps was tooo funny, but it's sad that Rokobi is mad and they are fighting... I hope they make up because he is like a grandpa or father to her! Well I thought this chapter was very funny and sad because of Sasuke's negative and the fact that Rokobi is mad. Overall I thought this chapter was really really good! I can't wait for the next one! Thank you for writing!
Date: 05/07/15 Title: Chapter 13: You're No Match
Sam the feels in this one first it all calm and then sasuke has to go bring an asshole. Why can't things be peaceful?!:'( I really like the story! I can't wait until you write more!!! I'm so excited! Thank you for writing!!!^o^
Author's Response: Because he's Sasuke, a total idiot :P lol thank you for reviewing!! The next chapter will be up soon ^u^ Thank you for your patience and coming back to read this after so long <3 xoxo
Date: 17/07/15 Title: Chapter 14: Something
Sasuke is a ducking... JESUS CHRIST! He pisses me off! But you got to love him... 😒 thank you for writing! I have been so bored these past few days because I have nothing to watch or to read. But when I saw you posted it just made me happy that I have something to read. Thank you!b29;
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 26]
Category: OC-centric, Het Romance > Angst
Characters: All, Kabuto Yakushi, Kakashi Hatake, Naruto Uzumaki, OC, Orochimaru, Pair OCNaru, Sai, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha, Tsunade
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Dark, Drama, Mystery, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Death, Rape, Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 | Completed: No | Word count: 40546 | Read count: 27932 [Report This]
Published: 02/03/13 | Updated: 22/02/15
Date: 28/11/15 Title: Chapter 10: Vacancy
I just barely started reading your story and I thought this is really good! I don't know but the main character is a lot like me except you know I'm not a ninja! 😂 thank you for writing! I loved reading your story and hope to continue!!!✌ Thanks! ðŸ˜
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 130]Category: OC-centric, Het Romance > Angst
Characters: Pair OCKaka
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Dark
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 117 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 377039 | Read count: 1764656 [Report This]
Published: 20/01/14 | Updated: 17/07/17
Date: 21/03/17 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113
I love it! It is getting so intense and interesting because I have no idea what is going to happen because I have only seen the original without kiyoko but kiyoko is badass so she is going to bring a new dynamic into >^< so exciting and the babies! ♥
Date: 23/08/15 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96
I didn't even know you updated!!! I was like "oh no I already read that chapter... ;-;" I check up on it today and I just wanna reread the last chapter and I read something else and I'm like O-o. You updated so fast!!! Thank you!
Author's Response: hahaha that can happen. I'll try to update this weekend, I am excited to update. There will be plot twists coming up
Date: 04/03/17 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111
Hmmmmmm ;-; Hmmmmmm hmm hmm hmm hmm hmm. The babIES but Kiyoko!!!!! ;-; why you do this? All the other stuffs were evil but now THIS hmm ;-; I neeeeeeeeeeeeeds the next chapter! Thank you for updating fast! c': but now kiyoko is feeling like poops and stuff is happening. She isn't going to die because that's no nice ;-; well thank you for writing another chapter and fast. :')
Date: 12/02/17 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109
This chapter was so long.. I loved it! Thank you for writing a long chapter c: the story progression is wonderful. But I hate danzo >:c she is pregnant for crying out loud! Is it bad to say thank god he died? ¯(°_o)/¯ oh thanks for telling me you updated ^.^ I was really happy when I woke up and saw the message. Thank you for always writing amazing chapters and for making a beautiful story. I hope the best for Kiyoko, Kakashi, and the baby! ♥ also remember you don't have to stress I will be here always (๑・ω-)~☆
Date: 02/03/17 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110
;-; mannnnnn why? Baby is almost ready to be born but no buttgaces want to cause a war. >:( I really want them all to be safe but the war is bad so I don't know what will happen :'( why you do this??? ;-; thank you for writing another wonderful chapter. I have been reading this chapter over the last 3 days in between classes c: sorry if I reviewed late. I really can't wait for the next chapters that are too come and to see how it all ends. I love this story a lot. C: thank you!
Author's Response: No worries. Focus on your schoolwork!! I'm actually working on the next chapter already so I'm excited to update. I'll let you know!! Thanks you for your comment and support!!
Date: 12/08/15 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95
I start my sophomore year of high school... :( have fun in senior year!!! The chapter was good because it is better then not getting a chapter! 😁 thank you for writing!!!
Author's Response: I'll be posting another chapter soon!! Thanks!!!
Date: 15/07/15 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94
I think it ended well and it was long enough. I really like how wide ryuu was, it made me think. You can say that you are very wise if you can write this. Thank you! I look forward to reading more!!! x07;ωx06;
Date: 13/11/15 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98
Noooooooooooooo I so sad right now why is the naruto world sooo cruel!!! Good luck on the application for college!!!! Ugh I'm cry o(â•¥ï¹â•¥)o thank you for this amazing chapter!!!!
Date: 15/06/15 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93
I was happy when you posted because I still have school and I have been stressing so thank you. I really like this chapter I can't wait until she sees her true intentions. 😂 thank you always writing!!!
Date: 06/05/15 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92
I loved the part where Kiyoko and her were having father and daughter time together it was cute!^-^ Itachi is still a butthole but I know the future. TvT Kakashi is getting so worry! HE love sick hahaha!*O* I can't wait for the next one but take your time. Thank you for writing. I was looking to see if you wrote and I literally screamed I was just so happy. You made my day! Thank you!^-^
Author's Response: So glad I made your day. Thanks for reading and looking forward to my story. Love you!
Date: 18/03/15 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89
Why a cliffhanger? I'm die waiting. I can't! I'm die!!! In the beginning, I thought they were talking about her in her wedding dress. I was about to cry. I can't wait for more, but take your time. I love how you always add details. I can't believe her father is there, but then again a father has to be at his daughter's wedding. It is still a little awkward but I love how you added. I first thought Danzo was there, I would have been soooooo mad. Anyways thank you for writing.
Date: 03/04/15 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91
I loved the first part but then the part where they did it was awkward because he took advice from Guy! 😂 I was like Kakashi no! 😂
Author's Response: hahaha I know. I wanted to make it a little funny. My sister wanted it to be a bit more detailed so I did it that way. Don't worry I felt as awkward writing it as you did reading it. Thanks for reading
Date: 17/02/15 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85
Dang! I really feel bad for Kiyoko. Danzo needs to get a life and stop stalking people. I swear man that man needs to get out of people's business. Lol thank you for writing! This story is one of my favorites and will continue to be. x07;w11;x06;
Date: 22/01/15 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81
I love how you went into the actual storyline used in the anime and didn't skip it. As always I love your writing and Kiyoko x Kakashi!! Thank you and hope to see ypur writing soon again!
Author's Response: thanks. I try to use the plot as a structure for my story and add Kiyoko in. I will be writing more, after finals are over so hang in there. Thank you for reading and commenting it means a lot to me to know what readers think, even if it is just you.
Date: 07/01/15 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Nooooooooooooo how could you?! No why you put a cliffhanger? *cries alittle* I loved this chapter cant wait for the next like literally cannot wait!!
Date: 01/01/15 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
It was great!! Thank uou gor writing another chapter! I been feeling bored so this help get my "thinking of what is going to next" imagination going!
Date: 23/12/14 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77
Itachi is a weird person. Im sooo confused but it really fun wondering what is going to happen next!^o^ Thank you for writing!
Date: 20/10/14 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70
Hehe can't wait for the next one! Stupid Sasuke.