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So Wrong by A Vampires Butterfly

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Chapter notes: Hi there. Okay here is what I have come up for that fighting fanfic I wanted to do for Naruto and Sasuke. It didn't really turn out how I wanted it to, but it turned out okay. Of course I got some the idea from The Right Kind Of Wrong by Leanne Rimes which I am currently listening to. I just love it. Enjoy! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
This wasn’t right.

It couldn’t be right.

This was wrong.

Horribly wrong.

So wrong that he should have never even thought about it.

He heard the pounding of blood in his ears.

It seemed to scream at him.

Wrong. Wrong. Wrong.

But damn it felt so good…

No BAD!

He shouldn’t be doing this.

Not with him.

Never with him.

The pounding his ears kept going with new words.

No. No. No.

They should have been fighting, killing each other, shouting and screaming, letting each others blood fall to the mud, but instead…

It was so wrong.

He should have been breaking his legs, punching his face in, giving him enough bruises and scars to show him that he should have never even tried to leave.

Not this.

Never this.

What would the others think?

How would he tell them?

How could he ever tell them?

This was bad.

This was wrong.

Why did it feel so good?

He shouldn’t be doing this.

No matter how good it felt.

It would bring more pain and tears to everyone.

It would kill him.

This pleasure would be the death of him, but

He didn’t care.

He should have cared.

He really should’ve.

Wrong.

Wrong.

Wrong.

But so…

Right.

He gasped.

He knew what he should have been doing.

He wished he didn’t know what he was doing instead.

Fingers laced through hair.

No!

No!

No!

This couldn’t be happening.

Not now.

Not ever.

But…

It was.

Moans echoed.

How did this happen?

Why was it still happening?

Blood should be spilled onto the ground.

Tears should mix together with crimson.

Scars should be torn into skin.

Bones should break.

Shouts should be heard.

Why aren’t these things happening?

How is this happening instead?

WRONG!

WRONG!

WRONG!

The words pounded into his mind.

But his body wouldn’t react.

It didn’t seem to know how wrong this was.

It knew just how right it felt.

A scream of pleasure ripped through the air.

Why?

How?

Questions fluttered through the minds of the rivals.

Enemies now that one had made his choice.

They shouldn’t of done that.

They shouldn’t have.

But…

They did.

And it felt good.

So now what?

It was wrong.

But it felt so right.

It is still wrong.

And it is still bad.

But that’s what makes it so right.
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