Reviews For If Only You Knew
Name: Amora Lee (Anonymous) · Date: 27/02/14 - 08:34 pm · For: Dealing
Ugh that dick....can Naruto kill him please ^_^
Name: Amora Lee (Anonymous) · Date: 27/02/14 - 08:25 pm · For: Feelings, make them stop!
That little shit Bring on the KAKAfrackingNaru
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 15/08/11 - 09:56 pm · For: Doubts and Assumed Heartbreak
Interesting. It makes me wonder what happened.
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 15/08/11 - 09:49 pm · For: Knowing Your Place
Not a bad chapter. The Sharingan thing had already occurred to me, but I was hoping Sasuke had managed it without going insane... Oh well... Sucks for him, doesn't it?
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 15/08/11 - 09:43 pm · For: Breakthrough of an Unexpected Kind
Well, Naruto-kun falls in love quickly, doesn't he? Nice chapter though.
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 15/08/11 - 09:15 pm · For: New Warmth
*giggles* Awww bless - Naruto wastes no time, does he? He seriously needs to stop being such an arse and sort out the Sasuke thing though. It's making me feel sorry for the Uchiha. No, wonder the Uchiha abandoned him for Orochimaru - I damn well would too... (Yes, I do get that all of the above was intentional on your part - and in fact a reflection of your very good character protrayal. Naruto simply doesn't have that level of emotional development... and neither does Sasuke... I just felt the need to say it anyway.)
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 15/08/11 - 09:01 pm · For: Back to Square One
Well... that was... interesting. Kyuubi's a moron today... so are Naruto and Sasuke. What happened to Kyuubi's apparent precognition? He really should have been better than that... =0/
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 15/08/11 - 08:53 pm · For: Dealing
Exciting! I can't wait to see what happens next.
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 15/08/11 - 08:45 pm · For: Unanticipated
Very interesting chapter. ;0)
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 15/08/11 - 08:36 pm · For: Feelings, make them stop!
Wow! I didn't see that coming either... but then maybe I should have.. Well - wow!
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 15/08/11 - 08:28 pm · For: Another Complication
Awesome twist! Now that I loved!
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 15/08/11 - 08:22 pm · For: Unsettling Situations
Very nicely written. There is nothing more to say. ;0)
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 15/08/11 - 08:12 pm · For: One Day
Another very interesting chapter. It's good to see you're getting into this now you've started to develop the plot. ;0)
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 15/08/11 - 08:00 pm · For: An Unforeseen Complication
Interesting chapter. Not what I was expecting at all, but that just made it more interesting... ;0)
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 15/08/11 - 07:50 pm · For: A Brief Reprieve
Well that was an interesting twist of a chapter. I rather liked it though... Bless little Sasuke. You have a lovely take on him, 'full of shit' indeed. ;0)
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 15/08/11 - 07:38 pm · For: Waiting in the End
Well - you've answered two of my questions. One - what's the actual point of acting like an idiot all the time? and Two - How the heck are you gonna make this Naruto steal the scroll? I was generally quite impressed with your take on the whole thing. The 'idiocy is a mask' idea was better handled than in many things I've read... and the scroll reasoning was awesome. Although I did feel like you could have given a few more details here and there, as things occasionally felt a little glossed over, but overall: nice work!
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 15/08/11 - 07:19 pm · For: Irritating Situations
Well, you can certainly write a twisted personality - and that was nothing if not twisted - but there was a lovely mix of subtle 'other stuff' in his interactions with people that made this incredibly enticing. I hope for more Naruto/Sasuke scenes - it's one of my favourites, as conformist as that is.
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 15/08/11 - 07:04 pm · For: Prologue
A rather interesting twist on Naruto, but not a bad start at all. My first impression of your writing style is quite good too.
Name: PhoenixWytch (Signed) · Date: 06/03/11 - 12:30 am · For: Doubts and Assumed Heartbreak
これは実際に素晴らしい物語であるz90; 書くことをありがとうz90;
This is really a fantastic story. Thanks for writing.
Name: Squeakyai (Signed) · Date: 25/04/10 - 07:46 pm · For: Prologue
you say the story is complete. it's not complete. can't be complete! is it complete? is there a sequel or something that i am missing?!
XD
Author's Response: There willl be a sequel, actually. This particular 'arc'--if you want to call it that--is finished. Although considering you are about the only person on this site who seems to read it, I don't think there will be much fuss or demand immediately for the sequel. I do thank you for reading this and after I finish my other two fics I will get to work on the second installment, thanks again.~YaoiWhore~
Name: Squeakyai (Signed) · Date: 06/04/10 - 07:24 am · For: Doubts and Assumed Heartbreak
How on earth do you write such an amazing story, AND HAVE NO REVIEWS!?!?
everything is amazing!
the plot development is amazing cause the speed at wich you have it developing is perfect. and the way you interweved your story in with the actuall plot works well.
then you have your characters! NONE of you characters are ooc [wich usually bugs me]. We [the readers] are able to understand your interpritation of their attitudes and character just by the way you have them reacting and etc.
the lemons and smut are perfect as well. not overly detaild, not to fast, have a purpose and play a role in the plot
speaking of wich, EVERYTHING has a purpose. every detail. and that is important. i can never [as a writer] seem to get all of the detail tying together like that.
so...what all this babling means is:
KEEP WRITING! YOUR DOING AN AWSOME JOB AND I WANT MORE! XD
lol, sorry if im being overly essentric. *sweat drops*
Author's Response: Thank you,rnrnI really appreciate the praise, as to why I don't have reviews...*shrugs* Oh well, it really doesn't bother me. If I wrote soley for the purpose of reviews I would never get anything done. I write because I love it. Thanks once again for the review.rnrn~YaoiWhore~