| Reviewer: Ardisaur_rawr Signed - Date: 22/12/09 - 06:04 pm - Title: Chapter 29: Alüa Tereia |
I'm more of a Shika/Tema person, but that was way cute.
So, the demons just attack like that?
How come Konoha didn't see them coming?
Were they teleported there?
Author's Response: haha thanks. yeah, you know the whole pressure earth-moving thing? That was that evil dude, Marcus, teleporting them there. and Konoha didnt see them coming, cuz Tsunade is being a butt and not listening to Yuki. Arg i hate making her so annoying, but it was necessary...
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| Reviewer: Ardisaur_rawr Signed - Date: 09/12/09 - 06:55 pm - Title: Chapter 27: Which Path To Take |
Okay, Naruto's speech made me cry.
I honestly teared up and everything. That was amazing.
You have such a way with words and it makes me wish that I could write like that!
I know you took all that stuff from the manga, but you wrote it in such a way that it was put into a completely different perspective. Oh man! This was an amazing chapter.
I know how you feel. School is such a drag. lol
Research paper after research paper.
I have an exam for every single one of my classes next week, too. GEEZ!
7 exams in one week!
School is the very bane of my life!
haha
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| Reviewer: Ardisaur_rawr Signed - Date: 31/10/09 - 08:56 pm - Title: Chapter 26: Tsunade’s Decision |
That's not very Tsunade-ish...
I wonder if the demons have influenced her... or she's just really bitchy that day...
Poor Neji... crying.
Sheeeeeesh.
This is getting intense!!!
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| Reviewer: Persy321 Signed - Date: 31/10/09 - 07:10 pm - Title: Chapter 26: Tsunade’s Decision |
very good chapter :) i loved it! 10.
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| Reviewer: Ardisaur_rawr Signed - Date: 28/10/09 - 01:55 pm - Title: Chapter 25: Rising Storm |
Wow.... Haru is a killing machine?
That's not very nice. Stupid angels && demons!
Author's Response: yup! but was it a good chapter? i liked it, but im not sure that people liked it cuz nobody's reviewing...so sad...
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| Reviewer: Ardisaur_rawr Signed - Date: 05/10/09 - 02:07 pm - Title: Chapter 24: Moonlight |
*sniffle*
Where's Haru!? :(
That was so mean just tearing them apart like that!!
Anyway... good chapter.
:}
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| Reviewer: Ardisaur_rawr Signed - Date: 26/09/09 - 07:06 pm - Title: Chapter 23: Last Time |
NOOOOO!!!!
It was so perfect!!
Those damn demons had to ruin the perfect moment between them!!
You're so mean with all of your cliffies!!!
Author's Response: bwahaha im just horrible arent i? Sorry, i hate it too, but as i writer i have to create some conflict and cliffies to keep readers on their toes. Sniff...I know, i wanted to cry when i wrote that last scene between them, cuz i knew that it would end so horribly...cry cry....
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| Reviewer: Ardisaur_rawr Signed - Date: 12/09/09 - 11:33 am - Title: Chapter 22: Intertwined |
Even though I dislike Sasuke because he's a major douche, I don't want him to die.
Anyway, sucks for Sakura if he does!!
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| Reviewer: MySoxRock Signed - Date: 11/09/09 - 03:34 pm - Title: Chapter 21: Lessons in Seduction |
waaah!!!! cliff hanger much!!!! brilliant story, update please XD
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| Reviewer: Ardisaur_rawr Signed - Date: 06/09/09 - 05:50 pm - Title: Chapter 21: Lessons in Seduction |
Ahahahahaha.... Naruto's such a doofus, but you gotta love him!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: haha my thoughts exactly. Thanks for reviewing!!
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| Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed - Date: 05/09/09 - 10:00 pm - Title: Prolouge: Konoha |
No, haha, I was agreeing with Neji and Naruto, but I can see where you got the insult thingy.
Sorry, anyway.
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| Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed - Date: 05/09/09 - 05:13 pm - Title: Chapter 21: Lessons in Seduction |
Shit.
My thoughts exactly.
Author's Response: uhhhh...is that an insult or where you just agreeing with Neji and Naruto's situation? Thanks for reviewing though!
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| Reviewer: Ardisaur_rawr Signed - Date: 02/08/09 - 12:41 am - Title: Chapter 20: Planned Compromise |
Wow. I love this story. It just keeps getting better and better!!!!
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| Reviewer: Persy321 Signed - Date: 26/07/09 - 07:06 pm - Title: Chapter 20: Planned Compromise |
omg! sooo good :) i loved this story! cant wait to read more of your stories! :) good job! 10!
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| Reviewer: ItachiUchihaLover Signed - Date: 25/07/09 - 07:23 pm - Title: Chapter 20: Planned Compromise |
omg! hurry with the next chapter! I'm at the edge of my seat wanting to no what happens on the mission!!!
100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10
Author's Response: haha thanks sooooo much! i had so much fun writing this chapter! hey, have you checked out my other stories, A Vampire Rose and Diaries of The Supernatural? You should, i think they're quite good...well of course i would think that, but watever. :D
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| Reviewer: ItachiUchihaLover Signed - Date: 25/07/09 - 07:13 pm - Title: Chapter 19: Advice |
awwwwwwww!!!! so cute but so sad that she took it the wrong way.
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| Reviewer: ItachiUchihaLover Signed - Date: 25/07/09 - 06:54 pm - Title: Chapter 17: Falling |
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO U KILLED LEE!!!! -crys- y!? y?!
Author's Response: yes, i know. i hated killing him off too...but it was necessary. sorry! :(
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| Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed - Date: 25/07/09 - 05:56 pm - Title: Prolouge: Konoha |
Haru is extremely ignorant, haha.
It's so obvious that Neji's in love with her, but she's just so... thick.
Her and Naruto should get together for friggin' tea and biscuits.
Author's Response: yes, i know. sigh...its kinda annoying sometimes. it is painfully obvious, but i have to put some humor in there. Haha i was contemplating putting her and naruto together in the begining, but then decided that i liked naruto and hinata MUCH better. and neji is just a deprived loner/arrogant freak, and he needed Haru to brighten his life a bit. :D
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| Reviewer: Rowanrose Signed - Date: 18/07/09 - 01:26 pm - Title: Chapter 19: Advice |
Haha! How sweet! Please write more! You're an A-class writer! (that's really good by the way) :)
Author's Response: thanks! :D
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| Reviewer: Rowanrose Signed - Date: 14/07/09 - 05:20 pm - Title: Chapter 18: Confessions and Silence |
Hahahaahahaha! I could hardly stop laughing after reading this chapter!
Is the story over? I hope not! PLEASE write more!
Is the guy who killed Lee dead? I hope so. *bloodthirsty grin* :)
Author's Response: thank you very much! no, the story is not over (thank god, because i still have SO much to explain!!) And also, no, the guy who killed Lee is not dead. He plays an important part in the rest of the story, so i cant kill him off just yet. Dont worry...i want to so badly...but i cant. :(
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| Reviewer: Rowanrose Signed - Date: 13/07/09 - 11:14 pm - Title: Chapter 6: First Page |
Hahahaahahahhahah*gasp*hahahahaahahahaahaaha!
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| Reviewer: Rowanrose Signed - Date: 13/07/09 - 10:39 pm - Title: Chapter 1: New Beginning |
:)
Author's Response: :D
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| Reviewer: Ardisaur_rawr Signed - Date: 10/07/09 - 01:24 pm - Title: Chapter 18: Confessions and Silence |
Hmm..... That was a comedy of errors....
lol
That's sad that she thought Neji rejected her.
I think it's funny that he went into shock!!!
Author's Response: um...wat does a "comedy of errors" mean??? is it a bad thing??
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| Reviewer: Persy321 Signed - Date: 10/07/09 - 10:50 am - Title: Chapter 18: Confessions and Silence |
lol! omg..that was soo funny! good job!
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| Reviewer: Persy321 Signed - Date: 10/07/09 - 10:49 am - Title: Chapter 17: Falling |
omg this was such a sad chapter :( but it was still good :) loved it! good job!
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