Reviews For Sakuras walks.
Name: ItachiUchihaLover (Signed) · Date: 11/01/09 - 04:52 pm · For: Sakuras Walks
Awww naruto is so sweet letting her go! Great story! I LOVE Itachi stories!
Author's Response: Thanks for the reveiw!rnMe too, Itachi stories ROCK!!rnxxxxx
Name: i_heart_notebooks123 (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 - 12:43 pm · For: Sakuras Walks
There's a lot I want to say about this story.
One is that I loved it. In all honesty, I actually laughed when Itachi confessed his love- I'm sorry, that's probobly not what you wanted, but it was just so OOC, I couldn't help it. I still loved it, it's not one of the most common pairings.
I really think the summery was nice- simple but eye catching. I almost didn't read this because I thought it was a SasuSaku (which I hate), but once I finished the summery, I knew I just had to read it.
It was very well written, just a few mistakes here and there, you might want to get it betaed and repost it, but I don't really think you need to.
Great job, and again, I loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks, Im glad you liked it. rnItasaku are one of my favourite pairs though i admitt their not very common.rnrnxxxxxxx-sakura-blossom-xxxxxxxx
Name: Suki_Hime (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 - 06:20 am · For: Sakuras Walks
Nice job. Well done, but could use a bit of polishing up.
TIPS:
- Watch spelling and grammar
- Extend on the ideas you have, describe emotions and actions more clearly.
- Don't call Itachi 'raven haired', that's Sasuke.
Other than that, pretty good. Work on it a bit more, and they'll be even better. Good Story.
Much love,
Suki.
Author's Response: Thanks for the advice, Its my first official fanfic, so im still getting the hang of it.rnrnxxxx
Name: Rashiruno (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 - 02:03 am · For: Sakuras Walks
Wow...nice one. Did Sakura join the Akatsuki to find Sasuke? Or is her love for Itachi real?
Author's Response: Nope she just wanted to be with Itachi, to be honest im not a big fan of sakusasu. I prefere sakura and Itachi. rnrnthanks for reviewing. =3rnrnxx
Name: ren uchiha (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 - 11:26 pm · For: Sakuras Walks
5 words GREAT STORY PLEASE MAKE MORE! lol
Author's Response: Thank you!! thats the best review ive gotten all day!!rnxxxx