Reviews For Secret Weapon
Name: AphoriditeRose (Signed) · Date: 09/09/08 - 08:18 am · For: Home For Two
Aw, awesome!
That was really cute.
Short.. but sweet. :]
I've loved this story so much! Great to read, and a very original idea :]
full marks for you my friend! XD
And I'll definately be checking out your oneshots. :P x
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, and I can't wait to hear what you think about the oneshots.
Name: Baka_Onegai_Aishiteru (Signed) · Date: 08/09/08 - 05:20 pm · For: Home For Two
Oh the fluff -grins like a fool- Very cute, I can't wait for those PROMISED one-shots ^_^ And of course thank you for the recognition, I didn't even DO anything this time XD I almost squealed when I read that! Again, great job!
Author's Response: It's fun making people feel special; and of course, I'll have my favorite beta reader helping me out with those PROMISED one-shots. ^-^
Name: CapriaStar (Signed) · Date: 08/09/08 - 12:50 pm · For: Odd, Loving Sight
Nicely done, I enjoyed it immensely. I'd have to put it in the top 5 on my best lemons list.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! I really wasn't feeling all that great about my lemon, so that really means a lot to me!
Name: Suki_Hime (Signed) · Date: 05/09/08 - 07:30 am · For: Odd, Loving Sight
Wow. I loved it, impeccable job. Excellent. Congrats. It was really good, but I think you should have of gone more in depth with their actual feelings. But other than that excellent! Great job, extensive description and good use of language. Once again, wow.
Much Love,
Suki. ^.^
Author's Response: Thank you; I suppose I could have explained Sasuke's remoarse a bit better and brought out Naruto's bitterness, but in my defense, I was on a roll and in a rush- but you're right as well, I could do better. I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway. The last few chapter will be up soon and so will some cute one-shots I thought up of! Now if only I could get to writing them down...
Name: AphoriditeRose (Signed) · Date: 03/09/08 - 06:28 am · For: Odd, Loving Sight
aww, cute ^^
this story has been awesome from the begging of the first chapter, right till the end :]
Great idea, plot, the lot :] (hehe, rhymes!)
Good job!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it ^-^. This story is almost finished and I'm glad everyone stuck with Sasuke and Naruto till the end.
Name: Baka_Onegai_Aishiteru (Signed) · Date: 02/09/08 - 04:32 pm · For: Odd, Loving Sight
I totally read the chapter a million times while I was editing it... but I just couldn't help myself, I had to read it again! Still love it :] I feel so loved! I don't get thanked publicly for beta'ing very often -squeals- YOU'RE AWESOME!
Author's Response: Oh, now I feel special. But I'm also so annoyed- how can someone NOT thank you for beta'ing? I mean, you were great and fun to work with! That is so rude; here's another thank you. Did I mention you rock?
Name: Arukasandora (Anonymous) · Date: 02/09/08 - 03:06 pm · For: Odd, Loving Sight
OMG i LOVED it that was great NARUSASU rulz and how sasuke confesed his love for naruto awwwe now i wanna read more like this
Author's Response: Aww thank you! I'm glad you didn't think Sasuke's little "confession" wasn't too weird considering the way I wrote it.
Name: Anne (Anonymous) · Date: 02/09/08 - 01:21 pm · For: Next Time, We Go With Shikamaru's Plan
OMG ... this was sooo ... GREAT!
Thank you so much for granting my dream :-) Naruto-seme :-) Those two together are just so cute and sweet and ... yummy :-)
I really love your writing! Keep going on, cant wait for your next idea.
Love, Anne.
Author's Response: Hee-hee, I'm glad you like it. I'm going to add a little hint of SasuNaru for those who wanted that pairing (plus it works with my story). And thank you; if you like this I think you'll like the next couple ideas I have swimming around in my head. ^-^
Name: Suki_Hime (Signed) · Date: 26/08/08 - 04:12 am · For: The Voice Of The Readers [EDITED-Inculdes Thanks]
Good on You for figuring it out. I am a loyal fan who can't wait for your story, I love it. You could have both SasuNaru and NaruSasu, you never know.
Please update soon. Thank You.
Author's Response: Thank you too, I really appriciate everyone who clicks on my story and gives it a read, and is paitient enough to deal with my busy ass.
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 24/08/08 - 04:46 am · For: The Voice Of The Readers [EDITED-Inculdes Thanks]
I would have to say a NaruSasu. There are too many SasuNaru's, and this story makes more sense as a NaruSasu.
BUT UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
Author's Response: Thank you for the vote; I'll update as soon as I can, but I'm back in school and homeowork is already piling up- I only have so much time. I'll try and finish the chapter and get it betaed soon. I should have it up in a week or so; I know it's a while, and I wish I could post it sooner, but that's how long it looks like it going to take.
Name: CapriaStar (Signed) · Date: 21/08/08 - 06:58 am · For: The Voice Of The Readers [EDITED-Inculdes Thanks]
I think that it makes more sense considering the situation for Naruto to be seme, but I also see how it could start out that way and Sasuke take control just from the frustration of the "interrogation". I think it should depend on how focused on getting the information you make Naruto. If Naruto is more about his feelings then his job he should be seme, if he all about getting the information then he's the uke.
Author's Response: I'm glad you read my story and decided to help me out. Truly I appreciate it- and no offence to anyone else, I love you all for taking the time to give me your opinions- but your reveiw has to be the most helpful for my dilema. I couldn't quite pick a pair or make sense of my reasons behind which one I picked, so you really just got in my head and helped clear it up a whole bunch. Thank you, I appreciate it.
Name: Arukasandora (Anonymous) · Date: 20/08/08 - 05:36 pm · For: The Voice Of The Readers [EDITED-Inculdes Thanks]
NARUSASU yeah naruto seme is the best wahoo and by the way this story is the best EVER
Author's Response: Another for NaruSasu...and thank you for the compliment, I'm glad you like it!
Name: game_over316 (Signed) · Date: 20/08/08 - 10:15 am · For: The Voice Of The Readers [EDITED-Inculdes Thanks]
Well you do have a point. Even though im a 200 percent seme naruto fan i say sasuke should be seme ths time
Author's Response: It's a tough choice. But I think I'm going to end up going with Anne's idea and have a second lime/lemon where the other can be seme.
Name: AphoriditeRose (Signed) · Date: 20/08/08 - 10:10 am · For: The Voice Of The Readers [EDITED-Inculdes Thanks]
I'M LOYAL!
I LOVE THIS STORY! ;D
lol ^^
No, I really do. Its awesome.
And I think SasuNaru, cause also Naruto is going to be quite hurt and emotional, and Sasuke's really sorry and has to try and convince Naruto that he's going to stay and he'll never leave again... Unless your planning a totally fluff-free story, then NaruSasu I guess..
Do you think you could have just a liiiitle bit of fluff in there? Please? Squeeze it in? XD
I'm sure it'll be awesome without, though :0
Love this story so much XD
Brilliant idea :0
Very original. I've never even so much as thought of Konoha having any kind of interrigation system, come to think of it >.>
But i'm not really the smartest chip on the block..
I'm garbling, Lol XD
I can't wait for that next chapter :]
Keep it up!
PS: And those people who didn't review, It's not that they don't like it, it's that they're lazy bums!! XD x
Author's Response: AWW! Thanks so much! Don't worry, whenever I write something agnsty, I can never keep it up and I end up putting fluff in there, so there will be fluff. Promise. I would love to say I'm leaning towards SasuNaru, but I'm still stuck in the middle, thank you for the input though- I'll keep it in mind. I'm glad you like the idea, I have no idea where it came from; I was just sitting in the car and I started writing up this story in my head. And yeah, I figured they still like it and they're all just lazy, but I also figure a little guilt trip would be the perfect push to write a reveiw, lol. Anyway, thank you sooo much for taking the time to write the amazing reveiw, I really appreciated it. With Much Love-D
Name: Anne (Anonymous) · Date: 20/08/08 - 08:38 am · For: The Voice Of The Readers [EDITED-Inculdes Thanks]
I just LOVE your story ... it is such an amazing idea :-) Naruto as an interrogator!! So ... I beg you... pretty pleaseeee :-) Naruto should be SEME :-) Or they can switch in other chapters (hope you are planning to write a lot more) but their "first time" shoulb be with naruto as the SEME. Good luck with your writing :-)
Author's Response: Thank you for your input; it's really a heard choice, because everytime I think about putting Naruto on top, I suddenly think about a Naruto seducing Sasuke in a very uke-ish way to get what he wants. And thank you so much for your reveiw, it's so great to know people love my story, and even better to know they want more- thank you very much!
Name: Suki_Hime (Signed) · Date: 19/08/08 - 11:58 pm · For: The Deal of A Cold-Hearted Teme
Oh God, it is getting so good...
Yay, Happy Sasuke and Naruto. lol
Please update soon, you're story is really good!!!
About lemon, just try with your writing style it'll be good.
Author's Response: I know, I'm getting so excited just to write it! Anyway, thank you, I'll write out the lemon, but I'm not sure if I'll post it. I hope if I don't that doesn't stop you from reading the chapter. Oh, and thank you for your reveiw!
Name: Vixkill (Signed) · Date: 19/08/08 - 07:32 pm · For: The Deal of A Cold-Hearted Teme
i'm just not that comfortable reviewing certain types of fics, despite going 'yay!' when i see you've updated.
great story!
Author's Response: I can understand that, so thank you for taking the time to give me a reveiw and explaining that- like I said in the chapter, it helps when you reveiw so I know that all 542 people who read my story don't hate it. So thanks again.
Name: game_over316 (Signed) · Date: 19/08/08 - 02:08 pm · For: The Deal of A Cold-Hearted Teme
Excellent! Excellent! Waiting for the next chapter! Lemon or not i cant wait to read it
Author's Response: That's great to hear; I was kinda worried most people were only still reading because they were waiting for a lemon, but I'm so glad that you all love the story just as it is!
Name: Suki_Hime (Signed) · Date: 19/08/08 - 12:22 am · For: Next Time, We Go With Shikamaru's Plan
I love it! Its great, the idea is amazing.
Naruto, the little slut. Anyway its great, please continue...
Oooh, Sasuke, someoe's gonna be happy. BTW, please, please please don't put Sakura in the story- hate that bitch.
Its great, I love it update soon please...
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's great to know that others like my idea too- if you like this then I think you'll like my next SasuNaru too. And don't worry, I hate Sakura as well and she won't be making much of an appearence.
Name: AphoriditeRose (Signed) · Date: 15/08/08 - 02:13 pm · For: Home
:0
EEEEP
SASSUKEE'S HOMEE
TO GO AND CODDLE HIS NARU-CHAN X3
yay - short chapter :0 but quick update XD. Awesome, none-the-less! ;D
Can't wait to see Naruto's reaction :]
Keep em coming!
Loving it loaaaads :]
ttfn :]
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it- and thanks so much for reveiwing!
Name: AphoriditeRose (Signed) · Date: 15/08/08 - 06:38 am · For: Pain In The Ass Uchiha
aww, poor naruto!
...you didn't really kill him, did you?
-gasp-
OO! sasuke killed him?
CH'YEAH! SASUKE-POWER!
...i hope? :P
update soon, please! teh suspence is killing me :0
xoxox
Author's Response: Haha, I like when people guess. I don't want to answer, so just read my next chapter, it answers a few things (*cough* contract and sasuke *cough*). And I'm so glad you like it! Thanks for reading and reveiwing, I appreciate it.
Name: Baka_Onegai_Aishiteru (Signed) · Date: 08/08/08 - 01:18 pm · For: Next Time, We Go With Shikamaru's Plan
Haha that was great! Funny idea, I can't wait to see where this goes ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks a lot, I aprreciate that, especially coming from one of my fav SasuNaru writers.
Name: DRAGONKINGHT (Signed) · Date: 07/08/08 - 02:44 pm · For: Next Time, We Go With Shikamaru's Plan
love your story plase update
Author's Response: Thank you; I'll update soon- I'm also writing up some other stories I thought up, which I'll post soon.