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Reviews For Neko Akuma

Name: 9tailedfoxrox (Signed) · Date: 31/01/11 - 04:29 pm · For: Chapter Two: Silver Bells
I love this!!!!! it's the best story I've read in a while....The main character has a realy god sense of humor...i was laughing my head off!

Author's Response: Thankyou, i'm glad you enjoyed the story so far.


Name: 9tailedfoxrox (Signed) · Date: 31/01/11 - 04:03 pm · For: Chapter One: An Eventful Day
the whole hanyou thing....did you get it from Inuyasha?

Author's Response: Mostly yes, but Half breeds from humans and demons are not unpopular in stories. The whole, she being an outcast form it thing was from Inuyasha, but if you think about it Naruto is sort of a halfbreed himself.


Name: 9tailedfoxrox (Signed) · Date: 31/01/11 - 03:37 pm · For: Cover Page
How can you draw so good? i try all the time but my drawings never come out quite right...any ways your story sounds awesome!

Author's Response: lots of practice, i've been drawing since i was very young and have never stopped. Just keep working at it and i bet you will get better. ^^


Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 12/05/10 - 02:23 pm · For: Chapter 8: Aftermath
Even though I've already read it, this was a really good chapter! lol.
I need to work on the spacing between the paragraphs... Oops! LOL.
Anywho! You're such a good writer!

Author's Response: thankyou so much, i love that even though have already read the story you still review. it means a lot to me.


Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 30/11/09 - 10:30 pm · For: Cover Page
Wow, that picture is adorable! Sooo cute! Thanks for changing the age thingy! :)


Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 30/11/09 - 03:52 pm · For: Chapter Seven: Demon's Blood
Poor little Keyore. :(
The beginning made me sad. Kids can be so mean!
Neku is so awesome!! He just pwns them all. Then it gets all cute how he comforts her.

I love how you had her blood be the thing that saves Sasuke. It was ingenius and all around perfect. It just always confounded me, in the anime and manga, how Sasuke survived that because Sakura is basically worthless, and she hadn't learned medical jutsu yet. LOL.
Oh well, maybe Sasuke is a miracle man. You never know!

You know, if you need a beta, I will totally do it for you!
No offense, but your grammar is kinda suckish! Your story would probably be a lot more popular if these little wrinkles were ironed out! The story in itself is really good and well thought out.
It would totally be a pleasure to do that for you!!

Much love,
Ardisaur;]

Author's Response: I would really like a beta but i dont really get how that works out. do i send the story to you by email or something?? thankyou for the offer beacuse i know i really need help with that stuff, that would be awsome if you could do that for me. ^^ and thankyou, i'm glade you like my story. ^^


Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 30/11/09 - 11:01 am · For: Cover Page
I was wondering whether you would mind changing the rating? Is the story really that bad? I wanted to try it out, buut I'm not 18...


Name: Crimson Lily (Signed) · Date: 29/11/09 - 11:02 pm · For: Chapter Seven: Demon's Blood
AWWWW....i really loved this chapter...
the only thing i have to critique is that maybe you should spell check your chapters before posting them, because there were some of them that prevented me from understanding what was being said.
other than that, amazing, wonderful, please update soon!

Author's Response: grrrr (not at you), I do spell check, like six times, but no matter what i do i still have a lot of spelling a grammer mistakes. I'm sorry, i cant seem to stop that.


Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 17/08/09 - 10:10 am · For: Chapter Six: Let the Battle Begin
Hot damn!!
Keyore's poor hand.....
lol


Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 27/04/09 - 05:05 pm · For: Chapter Five: Wolfs in Hiding
Aw sad!!
That's not very nice!!


Name: Crimson Lily (Signed) · Date: 16/04/09 - 10:11 am · For: Chapter Five: Wolfs in Hiding
AAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!
that was fricken amazing!!!!!
pz plz plz plz x 100 update soon!!!
and maybe add some romance...maybe??? :D


Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 16/04/09 - 08:30 am · For: Chapter Five: Wolfs in Hiding
omg amzing please keep it up.
i love this story ^^
could you maby please get the chater out sooner cuz this one felt like a life time .
I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
love Aiko
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoox
1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10


Name: Crimson Lily (Signed) · Date: 31/12/08 - 04:34 pm · For: Chapter Four: Bloody Mist
omfg...AMAZING!!!!!! plzplzplz write more, cuz ill die a slow and painful death if u leave me hanging!! sasuke is so cute with keyore!!! :P
keep it up and update soon!!

Author's Response: thank you ^________________^


Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 30/11/08 - 10:24 am · For: Chapter Four: Bloody Mist
Hay amazing as normal. keep it up love Aiko
xoxoxox


Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 02/08/08 - 02:58 am · For: Chapter Three: Ninja
yeh you can use my pic, i font mind. great chappy, its amazing keep it up or ill die XD
loce you n your work, Aiko
xoxoxoxox
1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10

Author's Response: thanks for letting me use your pic and thanks for reviewing ^____________________________________________^


Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 03/06/08 - 09:43 am · For: Cover Page
Hay i drew some pics of Neko Akuma i hope u like em there not the same as your but simiar. and no were nere as good.

http://i285.photobucket.com/albums/ll64/AikoMatsuo-ox/Neki%20Akuma/nekoakuma.jpg

http://i285.photobucket.com/albums/ll64/AikoMatsuo-ox/Neki%20Akuma/Nekoakuma2.jpg

http://i285.photobucket.com/albums/ll64/AikoMatsuo-ox/Neki%20Akuma/nekoakuma1.jpg

Author's Response: i like them i think there awsome, its cool that you like my strory so much, it dint do to well on other sites, but hank you for reviewing. ^______________^


Name: tikarina (Signed) · Date: 03/06/08 - 06:31 am · For: Cover Page
Hellooo.XD its awsome so far, i love the pictures you drew! i can draw normal self portaits sorta all right i guess but anime types just screw with my head.TEACH ME!! jk. anyway i think you have a great story here and im counting the days untill you update!
10/10
Tikarina.
(srry if this sounds scatter-brained im muti-tasking =D )

Author's Response: thank you


Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 02/06/08 - 09:55 am · For: Chapter Two: Silver Bells
OMG! very funny ending. it Keyore eye's going to go crimson? i always wonderd how Sasuke did get out the whole and know i have. teehee. very good, and is Sasuke going to feed Keyore this time, that would just be helarious. oh n btw i fougot to say great picture on the front page very good how do u draw so well, im no were nere as good as that.
Love AikoMatsuo XxXxX 1000000000000000000000/10

Author's Response: actually that happens when she gets really angery beacuse of her demon half. thank you for reviewing. ^_________________^


Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 02/06/08 - 02:48 am · For: Chapter Two: Silver Bells
MEHH its over already. lol. i really love this story update or ME ISH GOING TO KILLZ MESELF~ haha Keyore broke Kakashi's arm. haha. OH SAKURA'S GONNA GET THE SHIT STEAMROLLERED OUT OF HER IF THEY EVER PAIR UP IN THE CHUUNIN EXAMS! lol, those were my favourite episodes. GAHH! offtrack. i love this story, im adding it to my favourites.


Name: kaori (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 - 07:30 pm · For: Chapter Two: Silver Bells
aww i love your story!!! it's soo cute! poor keyore though, but sakura's a bitch, so she should have been hit, but oh well, i think sasuke and keyore are gonna fall in love how cute!!! haha i just realized ur names are the same, just spelled diff, Kaori: Keyore...do ya get it?? aww it's really cute!! and it's a lot like my story, but i promise i didn;t copy you!! i just found this one!! i'm innocent i say!!!! lol but awesome job i love it!!!!!


Name: OmgVikiRawr (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 - 02:17 pm · For: Chapter One: An Eventful Day
lol i like where this is going
even though i hate stories when theyre all 13
mainly cause im a smutty so and so
but still, i like it
keep going :)
xx

Author's Response: well i plan on writing this stroy all the wayup to the shipuden episodes, though i will probly have a diffrent ending, but thank you for reviewing ^_________^


Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 - 10:57 am · For: Chapter One: An Eventful Day
Wow amaizng you have to keep writing. love it very intersenting. like the rivalry between Keyore and Sakura, very gd. keep up the great work.
Love AikoMatsuo XxXxX

Author's Response: thank yourn


Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 31/05/08 - 10:45 pm · For: Chapter One: An Eventful Day
OMO update soon i really love this story so far even tho its only 1 chap long thats rare =]

Author's Response: thank you and i plan on updating really soon. ^______________^


Name: loulou20 (Signed) · Date: 31/05/08 - 03:17 pm · For: Chapter One: An Eventful Day
well it's official!! i'm now clairvoyant!! lol i knew this would be an awesome story and i was totally right! lol aww thats to bad about keyore's family, but at least she has neko-who i assume is her half-brother?- and he sounds really saucey!!!( haha that means sexy meow!)lol well keep up the awesome work!! luv ya!!

Author's Response: Thank you and your Wright he is her half brother their fathers are different, Keyore’s was human and Neku’s was a full demon. More about their family is explained soon. Also I have a pic of Neku and Keyore that I drew both are bio pics but I’m not sure if I have to make a bingo book to post them since the rules said that but its only two and I don’t want to have to that. Do you know if I have to for only two bios?


Name: loulou20 (Signed) · Date: 31/05/08 - 11:39 am · For: Cover Page
aww she's soooo cute!! meow! lol but this is gonna be one hell of story, i can just tell! :) i can't wait i already love it and again she's really cute!! please write chapter one!!! later tater

Author's Response: I just posted chapter one when you reviewed and thank you. ^_________^


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