Reviews For Onari
Name: snakebite3 (Signed) · Date: 29/11/09 - 12:38 pm · For: New Family
i love this story! ^_^
i did notice a few typos tho..
Name: snakebite3 (Signed) · Date: 29/11/09 - 12:37 pm · For: New Family
i love this story! ^_^
i did notice a few typos tho..
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 28/11/09 - 09:41 pm · For: The New Year’s Festival!
I really love your story - sorry i haven't really reviewed! Please write more, and thank you for updating!
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 28/11/09 - 07:44 pm · For: The beginning of our lives
Awwwww.
I really do love this story.
I dislike how Takeru is always so defensive and hurtful, but that's how the story goes! It wouldn't be very entertaining if he wasn't!
Onari is definitely more mature than Takeru. LOL. Girl Power!!!
Anywho! This was a great chapter!! As usual!!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 27/11/09 - 11:35 pm · For: Open your ears!
awww how cute Eiyu got a crush
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 27/11/09 - 11:19 pm · For: Behind the Mirror
bty ur story is on round robin...just so u no...
i lov tht Daiya is finally comming out of his shell....its so wonderful!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 27/11/09 - 11:01 pm · For: Hesitation and Aggression
turkey...*snicker*** nice
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 27/11/09 - 07:50 pm · For: Never underestimate your opponent!
And if his parents ever caught on to understanding, he was a dead
XD i think i know what tht means....meh the ch was good, rit on!
Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 18/10/09 - 03:43 pm · For: The troubled Genin!
Of course,another great chapter.What's with you?Can you just not write bad or something?This story is great from begining to what i've read.
Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 18/10/09 - 03:18 pm · For: The New Year’s Festival!
Wow!That was another amazing chapter.I didn't expect anything less from you.I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Name: eldertensa (Signed) · Date: 17/10/09 - 08:46 pm · For: Preparation
You are the best!
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 13/10/09 - 07:47 pm · For: Preparation
They better keep Daiya safe, dammit!!
lol
Holy COW!
This was an amazing chapter!!
The practice rounds were so intense!
I bet the pairings took a long time.
Or... maybe not. Idk... but they were really good pairings. I think the fight between Idai and Onari was the most intense. I was seriously on the edge of my seat!
I feel really bad for Daiya. He seems so determined and the fact that he he has to rely on others so much tears him up. His condition just gets worse every time.
Takeru and Onari's relationship is really cute. I love how she just barges in on them. Kissing Takeru in the nude definitely wasn't something Sasuke and Izumi were expecting. LOL
Goooood, gooood, goooooood chapter!!
Loved it!!
Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 12/09/09 - 07:59 pm · For: New Year’s Rush! Will we make it?
Wow....That's a lot to put on one little boy's shoulders if you ask me..
Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 12/09/09 - 07:03 pm · For: A new beginning! Friends! Enemies! Which one is it?
Wow!Great story!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 07/09/09 - 09:16 pm · For: The hot springs vacation pt 4
**chuckles nice chapter ryu and saori are so cute.....ill read mor tom.
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 07/09/09 - 07:35 pm · For: The hot springs vacation part III
ROFL!!! Hire got the squirts ahhaha lolz! she deserves tht but tht was just to funny! i could image wat the smell was....
Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 07/09/09 - 07:33 am · For: It takes a whole village to raise a child
Wow!I love love love your story,DigiAnimeArtist
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 - 11:44 pm · For: Something’s fishy! Sasuke’s anger takes on a new meaning!
*smiles*** i lik the idea behind the hotsprings but, Hire is ******* sheesh she reminds me of a girl tht use to pick fights with everyone and had annoying passe with her. shes much now thou....
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 - 11:44 pm · For: The Hot springs Vacation Part I
*smiles*** i lik the idea behind the hotsprings but, Hire is ******* sheesh she reminds me of a girl tht use to pick fights with everyone and had annoying passe with her. shes much now thou....
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 - 11:16 pm · For: The Teams are decided
hmmm i thik the grping was okay but it would really really help if u spaced the changes in which grps are speaking and such...the POV's ok just space plz? like this ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 - 11:02 pm · For: Graduation!
i like the genin exams! it was very interesting!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 - 10:42 pm · For: The Academy Finals – or Bust!
hmmm...i thik its really cute how onari is forced to talk. kinda adorble as well
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 - 10:10 pm · For: Onari’s training begins!
Takeru and Ryu as friends...wat a wonderful thing...***peaceful sigh**
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 - 09:47 pm · For: Trust
lolz! naruto taught his son the sexy justu? well....traditions hav to go on i guess....*muffle giggles***
i cant wait and see how sasuke's kid and onari get it on on the battlefield! awesome!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 - 09:32 pm · For: Something’s fishy! Sasuke’s anger takes on a new meaning!
awesome chapter im really feeling for its charas!