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Reviews For Shukaku May Cry

Name: Leafbeast (Anonymous) · Date: 16/12/07 - 11:42 am · For: First Encounter
ooooorrrrrrr!seeing how gaara softens up later in the series it would be no prob lem...think...have him make his own weapons!sandstorm machine gun! it is gaara!adding style to him is easy!

Author's Response: Err... I'll see what I can do with that, but I can't guarantee I'll get back onto this any time soon.


Name: Leafbeast (Signed) · Date: 01/11/07 - 12:04 pm · For: Losing Control
hmmm...interesting...but dante is usualy a jokestir sooooo...have gaara add some style

Author's Response: I understand, as I have considered the same question. On the other hand, I would not like to create OOC situations within the story, so I would not be doing that. Instead, the style department will be handled by other characters I will include in the story (the only one I'll give away at this moment will be Naruto). Sorry if this is a disappointment to you.

As I have said before to other reviewers, this story will not be a direct adaptation of DMC, though it does have major influences from the game. It is possible that the story will deviate stylistically from DMC, however, due to other significant influences.

Anyways, thank you for your input.


Name: Leafbeast (Signed) · Date: 26/10/07 - 01:29 pm · For: First Encounter
wow...so far great...but what happenned to the sword?

Author's Response: I'm saving the sword for the character development phase. All I can say right now is that the sword has to do with Shukaku.

I'm glad you like this story (it's a great concept, you know...), but sadly this is currently on hiatus. I've put other stories on priority, but I'll do my best to get back to this as soon as I can.

Anyways, thanks.


Name: rasengan_welch (Signed) · Date: 16/08/07 - 09:01 pm · For: First Encounter
he's the pandaikon.from N.D.B(nerima daikon brothers).god you really need to go deeper with other anime..
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-- Swords_and_Bandages : Okay...


Name: rasengan_welch (Signed) · Date: 16/08/07 - 08:14 pm · For: First Encounter
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-- Swords_and_Bandages : WTF!? Where's that from? *utterly confused*


Name: Lamerstu (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 - 04:27 am · For: Losing Control
Ahh! Nice action! Please contact me if you need anything. ^_^

~Tasi Lamerstu
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-- Swords_and_Bandages : Hmm... you know, I do need help on Air Mail to Neji- I'm kinda stuck on it (again). I'll contact you later.


Name: Lamerstu (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 - 04:26 am · For: First Encounter
Glad to see you posted this, SaB! ^_^ I reread it and it was very good.

~Tasi Lamerstu
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-- Swords_and_Bandages : Thank you for your support!


Name: rasengan_welch (Signed) · Date: 14/08/07 - 08:14 pm · For: First Encounter
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-- Swords_and_Bandages : D@mn... is that Gai? Woo, he got flattened! Lol. Very nice.


Name: rasengan_welch (Signed) · Date: 13/08/07 - 04:24 pm · For: Losing Control
i swear..you..are a master of action based fics.i know i couldn't have done better but hey,as soon as i'm done with a mere crush,i'm starting on my sound nin fic.which i know will get at least 40 reviews.oh and a found a list of the demon's forms of weapons in DMC.i mean the one's that dante/gaara can use.i'll give you another review on what their true forms look like.
1.agni & rudra(double swords-can join to form a staff-fire and wind)
2.nevan(guitar-summons bats-electricity)
3.beowulf(gauntlets and shin guards-hand to hand-light abilities)
4.cerberus(triple chained nunchukus-bladed at the end-icey attacks)
5.rebellion(his basic sword given from his father,sparda)
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GUNS
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1.ebony and ivory(his basic pistols)
2.shotgun(widespread rifle-stronger at close range)
3.artemis(gun from the nether-realm-homing beams-multiplies when hit off of a wall)
4.kalina ann(mary's rocket launcher/jackknife-named after her mother that was sacrificed by her father,arkham to be turned into a part demon himself)
5.spiral(large rifle-blasts away almost anything in it's path-har to recover after shooting a round)

so basically,that's it.i'll soon find what vergil/? can use.
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-- Swords_and_Bandages : Thanks for the data, man. I've got my own methods to acquiring info, but you're very helpful still. Gaara won't be the only one fighting, so I have to give other characters their weapons, too (and Gaara won't be able to access all the weapons, although with the arsenal he acqires, I think it'll be more than enough). I'll try my best to figure out a good weapons list. I'll try to update soon, as well.


Name: rasengan_welch (Signed) · Date: 09/08/07 - 04:22 pm · For: First Encounter
you know,dante's guns don't ever seem to run out of ammo.. will gaara get any other weapons?
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-- Swords_and_Bandages : I do know that Dante's guns don't run out of ammo, but then again, this isn't a direct translation of DMC, although it is heavily inspired by it. I'm trying to give a realistic ammunition count so as to not overpower any characters. As to weapons, Gaara will get swords, though I don't know for sure about more guns. You can expect a large variety of weapons. Gaara will have allies, but mostly he will be fighting alone. The story will not just focus on Gaara, though. Anywho, I'll try to update soon. Thanks for giving this thing a chance!


Name: rasengan_welch (Signed) · Date: 09/08/07 - 04:17 pm · For: First Encounter
10000/10!! who's vergil? mary/lady? arkham? sparda? what are the demons? i just hope agni & rudra are in this.along with beowolf..
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-- Swords_and_Bandages : This story won't be totally based on DMC. I've also drawn lots of inspiration from various other sources, such as Hellsing, Hellgate: London, Hellboy, and such. Gaara won't just be a direct translation of Dante. As for your questions... Sasuke will be a "sort of" Vergil figure in this story. Hinata will be like Mary/Lady. I haven't figured out who'd be in the Arkham role yet. The same goes to Sparda. There will be a large variety of demons and other enemies. I don't know about Agni and Rudra, but I do plan to have something that's like Beowulf in the story. Thanks for reading!


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