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Reviews For I'll Be Seeing You

Name: Angy (Anonymous) · Date: 17/09/07 - 08:57 am · For: All The King's Horses
This is a fantastic story and I wish to see more soon please.
I love the tone and flow of the story and I think that this is very well written.


Name: Angy (Anonymous) · Date: 17/09/07 - 08:57 am · For: All The King's Horses
This is a fantastic story and I wish to see more soon please.
I love the tone and flow of the story and I think that this is very well written.


Name: emogirlS2 (Signed) · Date: 07/08/07 - 07:30 pm · For: All The King's Horses
I thought he told himself he wasn't going to make any advances? I new he couldn't hold off for to long. Well, on to the next chapter! 10
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-- BrucesGirl : There's this thing... called self-control... It's a bit lacking for him.


Name: hanyouelf (Signed) · Date: 02/08/07 - 12:31 pm · For: A Tussle in the Loft
woot! sex in the hay! sex in the hay! *celebrates* and man, that was hot! great job with that.

now... about the story and not just the smut. the plot thickens ne? i'm curious to read how you're going to have the war play into this story. what are naruto and sasuke going to have to endure because of the war? what are they going to have to go through, and it's kind of obvious a lot of it has to do with sasuke's half-japanese status. i'm interested in this, because you've done such an amazing job creating these characters in their time that it's easy to fall into their lives. it's easy to feel what they are feeling, and you're doing an amazing job with that. I celebrate your talent here. *worships it*

i love that kakashi is okay with the way sasuke feels for naruto, it leaves it open to pointing that kakashi is much more understanding, that kakashi is going to be a safe haven for the boys when they need one. and obviously he's going to take great care in helping them. he's the one that led to their continuous interaction.

... now, the smut. are those riding lessons going to come in handy for sasuke?

the sex was delicious and it was well done and thought out and fluffed and tender and beautiful. it was intense and it was just what they needed to be with them. naruto is super sexy as the seme and i love the way you had him gently prodding sasuke into what he wanted. he is intense and sexual and it's a great scene.

now, the final phrasing, sasuke first fell in love? come on now. you can't do that! sasuke fell in love with somebody else later on in the story? sasuke fell out of love and then fell back in love with naruto? what? *dies*

anywho. great story. great chapter. great update. i love the way you're writing it and it makes me happy.

*loves on*

~the almighty hanyou-elf


Name: hanyouelf (Signed) · Date: 02/08/07 - 12:28 pm · For: All The King's Horses
sexual tension much! *dies*

but, of course there was so much more to this than just that little bit of playing in the stables. and oh boy... naruto as a stable boy... make him take his shirt off! make him take his shirt off! *chants gleefully*

okay, anyways. let me be serious now.

i love the set up for this story. the mood is really good, the tone and the flow are quick paced and certain. the character development is remarkably determined and i could find myself falling for these characters, especially as you write them. i'm curious to see how this story will go, how it will progress and leave the characters.

the depression era and the war era settings are certain to demand angst, and i'm eager to find out how it will develop. i'm looking forward to the way you have sasuke and naruto developing their relationships, cautious as they have to be about their attraction for one another.

this looks to be a very promising fic and i'm so excited about the fact that you're writing a multi-chapter fic. it's been a long time since you have and it gives me a happy. *fangirls*

love you baby!
~hanyou-elf


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