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Name: Lamerstu (Signed) · Date: 19/08/07 - 08:09 am · For: ANBU's a little different - KakaNeji
Yipes! I put in two reviews! I thought the first one didn't work so sent a second one, sorry! And about the HiaNeji... (I know, I'm a freak like that) are you planning to add in the smut scene? *looks at you with eager eyes* I apologize for sending this in as a review! (unless you want to boost your review count, hehe)

Oh, and Gai x Tenten x Lee?! O_O *gapes at your courage* Holy cow!

~Tasi Lamerstu

Author's Response:

Ahm'god, guest appearance by the author!

Yay, I found time to work my way back onto TONFA [dances]

Um, lessee, er, don't worry about the double-post. It happens. And I don't really carea bout my review count, so don't worry about it. As for the smut scene... I'm still debating. In a few weeks maybe I'll squeeze in time to proof it and post it. Maybe.

And yes, I'm holding the Lee x Tenten x Gai plot-idea hostage in my head until I find time to write it.

-Archaic


Name: Lamerstu (Signed) · Date: 17/08/07 - 05:26 am · For: ANBU's a little different - KakaNeji
O_O YOU ACTUALLY DID IT! *still in shock* It was... perfect! I agree with you, though, Neji would probably have called Kakashi "Hatake-sensei". The smut was okay, but still room for improvement! I love this!

So you wanted requests? If I were you, I'd want to put of Kurenai x Hinata, too. It's just... just... you know... yeah. I can't really think of any right now. Sorry...

~Tasi Lamerstu

PS: If you have time, I need feedback for my new stories I put up, thanks! ^_^
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-- Archaic Aphorism :

Yes, I did! [does a jig] I'm really glad you liked!

And, well, you don't -have- to make requests. I mean, I'm still trying to get around to writing that Lee x Tenten x Gai story... and maybe a sequel to the Asuma x Shikamaru one... but yes, requests are good. Just be aware that I probably won't accept any requests with Sasuke or Naruto in them (maybe Naruto... -maybe- ).

-Archaic

(I'd love to have a look at your stuff. Just know that if it's Sasuke x Naruto then I probably won't read it. Sorry.)


Name: Lamerstu (Signed) · Date: 17/08/07 - 05:25 am · For: ANBU's a little different - KakaNeji
O_O YOU ACTUALLY DID IT! *still in shock* It was... perfect! I agree with you, though, Neji would probably have called Kakashi "Hatake-sensei". The smut was okay, but still room for improvement! I love this!

So you wanted requests? If I were you, I'd want to put of Kurenai x Hinata, too. It's just... just... you know... yeah. I can't really think of any right now. Sorry...

~Tasi Lamerstu

PS: If you have time, I need feedback for my new stories I put up, thanks! ^_^


Name: Nicola258 (Signed) · Date: 16/08/07 - 07:31 am · For: ANBU's a little different - KakaNeji
I enjoyed it. The little girl thing freaked me out a little but it was really good.
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-- Archaic Aphorism : That was the point of the little girl thing... it was supposed to be freaky. Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for reviewing!


Name: Lamerstu (Signed) · Date: 03/08/07 - 07:54 pm · For: Sexually Interested - AsuShika
My twisted little mind came up with something very... weird. Somehow, the idea of KakaNeji just popped into my head.

Umm... maybe you can do that one somehow? I just want to see how that would turn out. You don't have to do it. I don't even know if you take requests. Just had to say something about that, hehe.

~Tasi Lamerstu

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-- Archaic Aphorism :

Actually, I thought of that idea, too, when I was writing this. I was like, "Hmm... ANBU... Neji... Kakashi... yeeaah..."

And now, specially since someone mentioned it, I am writing it! (I'm getting close to done, so it should be out before school starts)

And, really, feel free to make requests! I love requests, and they're a good way to put off the Kurenai x Hinata chapter for later (maybe I'll make them the grand finale, or something, heh).

Anyways, sorry it took me so long to respond to your review. I been busy T_T

-Archaic


Name: Lamerstu (Signed) · Date: 02/08/07 - 12:47 am · For: The Snake - HiaNeji
You always underestimate your own stories! Don't do that. And I agree, Neji x Gai is just... revolting... *shudders* I think Neji was pretty in character. Maybe you should add in the smut scene that you edited out. I've never thought of this couple, very crack and interesting. ^_^
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-- Archaic Aphorism : Eheh, maybe. I think I'll send the smut scene through ChiyoChan first, though, since she's waaay better than me at it. Hopefully she can fix it up so it doesn't feel quite as... forced... (though I guess the situation was supposed to be awkward...) Anyways, by popular demand, if ChiyoChan thinks the smut scene is okay, I'll add it in.

Personally, I like Hiashi x Hizashi better...

Which is awful, because I am in no way a supporter of incest or twincest or whatever term is it (like I said before: Why do these things even have terms, dangit!?)

Glad you liked,
-Archaic



Name: ChiyoChan (Signed) · Date: 31/07/07 - 01:54 am · For: Sexually Interested - AsuShika
Oh, there was more to it that you didn't post? I would say post it, since I really like the pairing. I'm the sick kind that gets fangirlish over all the popular incest pairings, and some of the not-so-popular ones.
I would totally re-read if you posted that in ^_^
I don't know what other people would think/say, but I think it would be good. Other people tend to be more freaked out by all this line-crossing going on. My take on it is- it's fiction, so it's good to cross lines- It makes for an interesting read. Hmm... so, I guess it's down to you, but I would totally like to read it.
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-- Archaic Aphorism :

I'll really really have to think about it, because there do seem to be people who would've been offended/upset if it had been posted... We'll see. I don't feel like the smut scene was very well written, anyways. I couldn't get Neji to cooperate and act the way I wanted, and Hiashi seemed to lose any personality whatsoever. Er... whatever personality he had. I'm not entirely sure I -gave- him a personality... oops.



Name: JustAnotherSoul (Signed) · Date: 30/07/07 - 09:18 pm · For: The Snake - HiaNeji
I have to agree with you.
Gai and Neji would just be awful.

But Hiashi and Neji ..........
...
I have nothing to say about that. Whether it'll be good or bad.
XD
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-- Archaic Aphorism : Well, at least I didn't thoroughly put you off by posting this. Muahaha, you can bet your bunnies now that I'll be much more willing to take risks with my pairings and themes from now on, since people are a lot more openminded and accepting than I thought. [plots evilly] Oh god... somebody needs to stop me. My next pairing in mind is Lee x Tenten x Gai... aaagh! The crazy things I do to Team Gai...


Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 30/07/07 - 08:16 pm · For: The Snake - HiaNeji
Holy shit........*speechless*...Well, at least you didn't actually 'write' what they were doing in Hiashi's bedroom. And this was well written. I'm not much of a Hyuugacest fan either. Actually...I don't like any incest couples at all...except NejiHina, that couple I can work with. ^_^
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-- Archaic Aphorism :

Eheh... actually... I did (sorta) write it, but I cut it out when I posted it because I thought that was a bit much...

Incase anyone cares to know... Neji was 21 in this fic.



Name: ChiyoChan (Signed) · Date: 30/07/07 - 03:36 pm · For: The Snake - HiaNeji
*Gasp* I totally loved it. Well written, as always with your work. I was surprised when I reached the bottom of it and you said about Neji not being in character, since I was impressed with how well you have done it. I agree with A Vampires Butterfly there.
I suppose he may have held out longer with the tears, but he had just been tormented about his dead father, and then his uncle, who he still doesn't like, just came onto him while thinking of his twin brother/Neji's father. That's pretty fucked up, so I think even the emotionless prodigy would be likely to get upset. Poor Neji.
I loved the story though. It was very effective, the way you wrote it, and I'm a secret fan of this pairing (sick as it is, I love it.)
I was trying to guess who all the ANBU were, and I was pretty happy with my tired brain guessing Shikamaru correctly, although I couldn't guess anybody else, since I don't remember the zodiac story all that well.
I didn't spot any glaring errors at all, but I will have another read through with my proof-reader eyes on to see if I can spot anything else for you. I don't think there is anything.
Goog job!
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-- Archaic Aphorism :

Eheh... well... it's good to know that I'm not the only one who's thought of this pairing. I guess I'm going to have to go back and get rid of that rant about the OOC-ness because apparently I'm the only one who thinks it exists...

As for ANBU... I didn't really think about who might be the other masks, aside from Shikamaru and Neji. I mean, as far as I'm concerned, they'll probably be the only two from the Konoha Eleven who make it to ANBU (Shikamaru will complain the whole way, undoubtedly) though Ino might make it, too. So don't worry, I had no innuendos there, so you weren't missing anything.

Ack, sorry. I wish this could be longer but I'm about to get kicked off... rawr.

<3's!
-Archaic


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-- Archaic Aphorism :

Kyah! So I'm back, because... I just remembered something.

You said you actually like this pairing, right? Well... I was going to ask you earlier on msnm before I posted the story, but I decided that since your sn said "the very tired art student" it probably wasn't a good time to ask.

Anyways, originally, this story had a bit of a smut scene in it. More so than the version I posted, anyways. It's only five or so paragraphs, but I cut it out when I typed it up because I felt that I was already pushing a few too many limits with this story, but... what's your take on that? Should I put it back in?

Thanks,
-Archaic



Name: A Vampires Butterfly (Signed) · Date: 30/07/07 - 01:45 pm · For: The Snake - HiaNeji
*looks at story, wide eyed* Some how...in some strange way...it all makes sense now....I don't know about other readers, but this doesn't seem like that much of a crack pairing to me. Hyuugas are already so freaking screwed up, Neji mostly, so why not think there is incest and molestation, rape, twincest? I think it is a perfectly understandable assumption to assume these things are going on behind those damn clan doors. Though I did wrinkle my nose at the tiny hints at NaruHina. Ha! I am such a freak....I just really despise that couple now a days....It is just too easy and all the plots for it have been too over done. But anyway! Besides from my couple ramblings, I would like to say that while reading this I was actually thinking how amazing it was that you got Neji perfectly in character while doing this to him, but then I reach the bottom and you say you didn't? You shouldn't cut down your work. Leave that to the flamers. Not that I think you will get any. Though I wouldn't mind a good flame war....*cough* You didn't hear that...Tenten and Gai with Lee jealously sounds interesting, if not creepy just because it has Gai in it...*sweat drop* Well thats enough of my rambling. This was very interesting, daring, and as always, very well written and an enjoyable read. With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
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-- Archaic Aphorism :

Ohm'god, you are too nice.

As for all those things happening behind closed doors in the Hyuuga clan... I agree. Didn't occur to me as I was writing it, but now that it's been mentioned, I agree. Actually, I can see it happening in almost all the clans, the exceptions being the Nara clan and the Inuzuka clan. Oh, wait, and the Akimichi. Couldn't see that there, either. Guess that only leaves the Hyuuga, the Uchiha, and the Aburame, huh? Oops.

I'm sorry to hear you're not a Naruto x Hinata fan... I love that couple (though I've yet to read any fics for them... so maybe that's why they haven't been spoiled for me yet.)

I'm glad to hear you thought Neji was very in character, but to me I felt like he kind of just burst into tears way too suddenly in that other scene. I think Neji would hold them back for a lot longer than he did in my storyl... but alas, if the readers are happy, then I'm happy.

Somehow, I really like that idea that my stories are "daring", trying out new pairings and semi-original ideas (I'm pretty sure someone else has thought of and written that these kinds of things go on behind closed doors in the Hyuuga).

I've never seen a flame war... that kind of interests me, too. I've always had a secret wish to get flamed. Don't know why. But anyways, because I love you so much, I will keep my (negative) opinions of my stories to myself and leave the cutting down to the flamers I don't have. Yet. If this pairing doesn't bring them in, then I don't think it's possible to get flamers, heh.

As always, glad you liked! Much love,
-Archaic



Name: ChiyoChan (Signed) · Date: 21/07/07 - 04:09 am · For: Sexually Interested - AsuShika
Oh, my gods! That was all rather yummy. I love this pairing! And I have the same annoyance with finding NO consensual fics... Last bit with Ino and Chouji made me giggle. I want read more! ^_^
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-- Archaic Aphorism : Nyaha... I know. I think that's 'cuz all the ones worth reading that aren't about... after... chap 328(?)spoiler stuff, so I'm not allowed to say, they're all written by the same author, I think. Like always, thankyou so much for the review! Sorry I didn't send it through you to get BETA'ed, but... it was late, and I still haven't gotten back the other stuff I sent you ^.^'


Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 21/07/07 - 12:56 am · For: Sexually Interested - AsuShika
Hot. Very hot. You did great with this story! Good job! ^_^ Asuma and Shikamaru...? Damn...xD
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-- Archaic Aphorism : Hee hee, so, apparently I'm better as smut than I thought I was, even if this one actually didn't go all -that- far... eh. Seems like I'm not the only one who was surprised by the pairing... thanks for the review!
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-- Archaic Aphorism : Hee hee, so, apparently I'm better as smut than I thought I was, even if this one actually didn't go all -that- far... eh. Seems like I'm not the only one who was surprised by the pairing... thanks for the review!


Name: JustAnotherSoul (Signed) · Date: 20/07/07 - 09:15 pm · For: Sexually Interested - AsuShika
...Ehehe..
I got to admit. This story is pretty hot. XD
Asuma and Shika... wow..
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-- Archaic Aphorism : I know! Like I said, I have no idea what posessed me to write it, but it was sooo fun to write! Thankyou for reviewing


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